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.MictoriouS. vs Pyro
Battle Rules:
6 - 20 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting due in 2hr Minimum posts to vote: 100 Check in by: 12-30-04 at 06:12 PM Must drop verse in 180 minutes after check in. Closed - Expired / old battle win |
.MictoriouS. has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-30-04 05:46 PM.
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Pyro has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-30-04 05:51 PM.
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Illest of Illy?, I’ll murk you for really……
….Light this cat like a philly, yo rhymes played like Willie* And like him, they say PYRO’s a GIANT** …Im big as “Rocks” from “Colorado”, so call me Kobe Bryant*** *Famous Baseball player-Willie Mays **Willie Mays used to play on the Giants ***Kobe Bryant/That chick from Colorado *Switch style up* Yo, Im sitting here, thinkin bout what you gon’ do …I got tha X-Ray…I could see the pussy in you The pussy is who? Mictorious. Take ya down real quick Im victorious in this battle, and in life, ur shit How you want it dawg?...test me? ya get ya card swiped Credit or debit?....Pyro decline yo life Ya gotta soft bite, and ya bark is loud Lay u off like summer jobs, cause u softer than clouds HONESTY ONLY BEFORE YOU VOTE |
Its Time For My 'Nicks To Naughty Lizt'!! and not Have To Recognize "Rebellious Kids"...
I Know Your Soul At 'The Back Of Fists'...So I'll Just Slit-Your-Wrists to Leave Ya Life Suffering from "Self Sacrifices"... !! Pyro, I Baffle-Kids...So i won like 'Donald Trump' Doin Raffle-Bids This Mack'll spit and leave ya face 'One-Sided' Like this Battle-Is Put Your 'Barz In The Sky' So You Can Have High Hope's Whenever-I-Read-Ya-Verse, My Barz will Succeed -The-Worst, Cause Mictorious will 'Translate Ya Actions' Like Close-Captions-In-Theater's One, First-we-Knew-ya-Died, then i'll make ya Heart Burst-till-ya-Fluid-Dried Cause Mic'll make Pyro Slit ya Own Throat n kill Yoself Worse-then-Suicide Ya Gay-Thoughts-Will Never Heat Up or Stay-Coddled But I'll Decapitate This Bitch While He's Standing and Leave them Looking like Fucking Display-Models Spay ina Pathetic-incident, And 'pop yer spine' leave ya 'holdin yer back' like 'senior-citizens!'. Hundred L's Get Sent, Op strap ya 'brain ta rockets' ta really 'raise yer-intelligence! |
i shouldve came harder....uppn this, lets get it closed quick....
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Yeh .. This one is a sleeper seriously ... well
uppin for votes :] |
Voted For: .MictoriouS.
he got this with his wordplay i was feelin that shit dawg fa real tha otha dude came correct to tho but yo wordplay is what won it return tha favor chucklow vs. kkkhater chucklow vs. javelin chucklow vs. jbkryptonite chucklow vs death Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: Pyro
voted 4 .MictoriouS. better vocab word play crushed him his metas ummm about a tie his punlines where crazy easily killed the competition good battle to the both of u vote for these battles http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=167379 http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=169006 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
yo i meant to vote for mictorius my bad im am really sorry for the mix up!
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iigh ... its fucking ... 2 - 0 then ... peace ....
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Uppin .. peoples .. :]
And How did my vote thing go away? |
This was feedback posted for .MictoriouS.
Punches - Both had soft punhces. Mic had more, a bit softer and Pyro had some harder punches, but not much harder than Mic. Soits a tie here
Personals- Where the fuck are the personals??? Multis - MIc had the greatest amount of multis and the most complex ones at that Flow- Since he did have the complex multis Mic had the better flow Overall = Mic, Weak battle from you both. You could have come harder. |
uppin this.....................
50 characters is alotta bullshit |
Voted For: Pyro
This Was Suprisingly A Good Battle... Dot Had Some Dope Ish In The Begining, And Actually I Think I've Seen You On Sixshot... Wich Explains Alot Cuz Only Us Six Heads Write That Way... Mic Seamed To Be Trying To Hard To Get Dope Wordplay... And In The End Alot Of It Is Just Random Bull Shit... Although Every Few Bars You Would Wow Me With One Bar... So It Shows Me You COULD Be Hott You Just Gotta Be More Consistant... Aiight So Here Is A Quick Breakdown: Flow: Dot Punches: Dot Wordplay: Dot Structure: Dot Opener: Dot Closer: Mic Overall Enjoyment: Dot Mic Just Wasnt Consistant Enough... And All Your Lines Were INCREEEEEEDIBLY Streched... So The Flow Was Killed On Every Line, Even The Good Ones... If You Just Had Someone Help You With A Few Things You'd be Pretty Crazy At This Though... Aiight Here Are Some Of The Highlights: Dot: Illest of Illy?, I’ll murk you for really…… ….Light this cat like a philly, yo rhymes played like Willie* And like him, they say PYRO’s a GIANT** …Im big as “Rocks” from “Colorado”, so call me Kobe Bryant*** These Are Actually Seperate Bars But You Meshed Them Together. But The Wordplay On This Was Fucking Iiiiiiiiiinsane. I Was Feeling All Of It Especially The Bryan Line That Was Pretty Slick. Im sitting here, thinkin bout what you gon’ do …I got tha X-Ray…I could see the pussy in you Not A Huge Line But Its Just One Of Those Simply Ones That You Cant Help But To Feel, Pretty Nice. Mic: Pyro, I Baffle-Kids...So i won like 'Donald Trump' Doin Raffle-Bids This Mack'll spit and leave ya face 'One-Sided' Like this Battle-Is Woooooow That Was A Fucking Nice Line. See If All Your Lines Were That Length It Would Improve The Read Sooooo Much Cuz That Was A Hott Fucking Line. Ya Gay-Thoughts-Will Never Heat Up or Stay-Coddled But I'll Decapitate This Bitch While He's Standing and Leave them Looking like Fucking Display-Models This Is One Of Those Lines, Nothing All That Special. Just A Raw Ass Punch That I Just For Some Reason Reeeeally Like. Pretty Tite. Hundred L's Get Sent, Op strap ya 'brain ta rockets' ta really 'raise yer-intelligence! I Like This Part Of The Bar. It Had Pretty Nice Wordplay In It But It Actually Didnt Rhym All That Well With The Other Part Of The Bar. But It Was Nice. Like I Said Pretty Decent Battle... Both Had Nice Wordplay n Punches... Dot Was Just More Consistant And Mics Ish Was Soooo Streched That The Flow Was Slaughtered In Just About Every Bar... Aiight, And I'd Apreciate If The Favor Could Be Returned On This O.M.: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=170702 Thanks Alot And Stay Up... .One. |
yea...good lookin on that...another honest vote. makes me happy....uppin this..........
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Uppin ............ This Battle People ..............
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uppin this battle again.....too many battles is gettn slept on..........
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Voted For: Pyro
J DOT: decent drop from u, punches were decent & landed, structure was in place, and the flow was good...u had a pretty decent vocab too & decent wp's too...overall u had a good drop... .Mict.: you a had a decent drop also...the punches could've hit harder though, becuz mostly your structure fuck'd it up for you, the flow - -u lost me there..the vocab was nice...but overall it was your structure that fuck'd it up for you mayn.. im not sayin to elevate - -but im sayin to is that fix your structure though NO HATE TO BOTH. . . RTF J DOT http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=172258 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: .MictoriouS.
winner-mictorious flow-tie multi-mic punches-mic finisher-mic opener-tie Illest of Illy?, I’ll murk you for really…… ….Light this cat like a philly, yo rhymes played like Willie* And like him, they say PYRO’s a GIANT** …Im big as “Rocks” from “Colorado”, so call me Kobe Bryant*** nice simile, pretty good line Yo, Im sitting here, thinkin bout what you gon’ do …I got tha X-Ray…I could see the pussy in you dis was a funny line, good stuff The pussy is who? Mictorious. Take ya down real quick Im victorious in this battle, and in life, ur shit this was an ok line, not too good How you want it dawg?...test me? ya get ya card swiped Credit or debit?....Pyro decline yo life this was a pretty good line, Ya gotta soft bite, and ya bark is loud Lay u off like summer jobs, cause u softer than clouds pretty good finisher Its Time For My 'Nicks To Naughty Lizt'!! and not Have To Recognize "Rebellious Kids"... I Know Your Soul At 'The Back Of Fists'...So I'll Just Slit-Your-Wrists to Leave Ya Life Suffering from "Self Sacrifices"... !! Hot line, multies were there, and still kept the flow and punch one Pyro, I Baffle-Kids...So i won like 'Donald Trump' Doin Raffle-Bids This Mack'll spit and leave ya face 'One-Sided' Like this Battle-Is like the last one, punch was hard and so were the multis Put Your 'Barz In The Sky' So You Can Have High Hope's Whenever-I-Read-Ya-Verse, My Barz will Succeed -The-Worst, Cause Mictorious will 'Translate Ya Actions' Like Close-Captions-In-Theater's same^^^ One, First-we-Knew-ya-Died, then i'll make ya Heart Burst-till-ya-Fluid-Dried Cause Mic'll make Pyro Slit ya Own Throat n kill Yoself Worse-then-Suicide good punch Ya Gay-Thoughts-Will Never Heat Up or Stay-Coddled But I'll Decapitate This Bitch While He's Standing and Leave them Looking like Fucking Display-Models hot dawg Spay ina Pathetic-incident, And 'pop yer spine' leave ya 'holdin yer back' like 'senior-citizens!'. Hundred L's Get Sent, Op strap ya 'brain ta rockets' ta really 'raise yer-intelligence! killer punch |
good lookin out on tha votes...i got both ya'll on RTF...dont trip...
uppin this.... |
Voted For: .MictoriouS.
u won hands down u kill him Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
yall niggas needa learn how to explain ya votes.........upp in this
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uppin this.....................
50 characters is alotta bullshit |
uppin this folsk...................................
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Voted For: Pyro
GOTTA GO WIT DAT NIGGA J-DOT...HIS SHIT WAS SO MUCH BETTA...IT ALL FLOWD TOGETHA...BETTA PUNCHES...N HIS RHYMES WASNT STRECHED... MICTORIOUS-"Its Time For My 'Nicks To Naughty Lizt'!! and not Have To Recognize "Rebellious Kids"... I Know Your Soul At 'The Back Of Fists'...So I'll Just Slit-Your-Wrists to Leave Ya Life Suffering from "Self Sacrifices"... !! ".....THAT WHOLE THANG WAS WAY TOO STRECHED...IT WAS KIND OF "FORESHADOWING" FOR YA WHOLE VERSE ONCE I READ DAT COUPLE LINES.. RETURN DA LOVE PLAYA |
uppin this shit..........faggotss.....................
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Voted For: Pyro
Mictorious: hmm not bad the stucture was off my far but your punches are decent and some pretty good creativty in there but the reasons why im voteing against you is cuz you just didnt come hard enough J dot made it look like he wanted it more....you need to be more funnier in your rhymes n shit then you probably would of won....but alright peice...no hate J Dot: hmm pretty good i thouhgt you came harder and wanted it more you had some good punches and very good creativty damn i liked that alot and your stucture was decent and flowed pretty good....good peice from you....you got this one just by a string... Opener: J Dot Closer: Mic vocab: no one multis: Mic stucture: J Dot flow: J Dot Punches: J dot creativty: J dot WIN/ J Dot |
oops....RTF here:
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=173444 vs. personify....im winning that 4-1 |
Voted For: .MictoriouS.
diz was very in depth type battle but it goes like diz: opener: mic punches: mic personals: both multis: mic vocab: mic structure: pyro closer: mic diz battle was kinda 1-sided 4 da simple fact mic just spit more bars den pyro did which gave him da win |
yo....J DOT will up this shit again...................
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This was feedback posted for Pyro
Peeping My Opponents Polls...............................
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^and still gettin merked 2-0...
yo, ima close this if its still up next week, obviously i won, and dude aint been on to even up this... |
This was feedback posted for Pyro
checkin deese pollz...............................
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