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Intensify Effect vs Blackmage
Battle Rules:
10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting No Hate Votes (since some a yall gotta be reminded) 2 days to accept and 2 days to post( you ain't the only one with shit to do) Minimum posts to vote: 100 Check in by: 01-27-05 at 11:32 PM Must drop verse in 2880 minutes after check in. |
Blackmage has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-26-05 11:50 PM.
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intensify effect has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-27-05 07:23 AM.
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I "Intensify" the "effect" of my "Eternal Illness"
just so we clear special "effects" are fake they lack realness your sentences are sentenced to death i'm the ropeman i'll beat you like a junkie tryin to steal from his "dopeman" talk glochs you won't shoot you no brute your flo's cute and if i'm a full blown herb what's that make you a "square "root" I "intensify" my pencil-eye precision for fast collision you challenge me you'll get the "third degree", bad decision you lack masculinity i pack "mass" like divinity your wack you're into me i don't son you dog we're trinity Eternal Illness is his group He lost to dopeman and third degree church mass - divinity - trinity trinity is the unity of father son and the holy spirit divinity is to be divine - to relate or proceed directly from god good luck |
lesson in progress.....
u act like u a, savage for life? more like average for your whole exsistance... like leg-less marathon runners, i just can't see you going the distance... flowing persistant and your caught at a stand still... a hard verse for u just takes up space like land fill... i merk you dawg...shit...i leave you stuttering, shook... your lines get no attention, like blind kids coloring books.... now look at u taking ya time, with more extension then a hair-salon... plus u couldnt "Pull" on a WIN... place'in ya verse in a water bong... *now lets finish him* my style so cold that i froze ya-line... with punches n flow combined... ya mind-designed so empty, beat'in u in da head i'll sound like a drum-lines... just face it, u got more played parts then samuel.L.jackson... take acttion?, why when u'r style more ut dated then IRAQ mapping... it's over, no votes are needed...cuz he even dout -he's-won-it..... cuz ya ideas of punches are more empty then ethiopian-stomachs...... BITCH!!! U've BEEN SERVED... class has been offical THOUGHT!!! |
This was feedback posted for intensify effect
maybe it's used a lot of times, but I said in one of my battle,
"no personals or wordplay need to defeat you, the victory, THERE AIN'T VOTES NEED, TO SEE WHO'S" I dunno, if you read it and used but I guess you just made it yourself........... |
^^^??okay???
upp'in for actual votes inted of feed back plez................ |
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Voted For: Blackmage
iight here we go ... Black Mage ------------ MAD WORD PLAYY i was feelin the opener usin his name and crew and how ya used the cats he got merked by to ya advantage *9th degree nd Dopeman* cuz i seen those battles and that was good research on your part .. vocab was iight .. flow was niice too but overall the Wordplay is what got my vote Intensify Effect wasnt feelin ya verse.. you had some good punches but i didnt see any clearly directed AT black mage.. they were good but didnt do it for me lol ... vocab was niice flow was good and multies were tight .. but overall it wasnt good'nuff for my vote my votes - BLACK MAGE |
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shut the fuck up.... cuz i dont even remember battling 9th dagree.... and dopeman beat me on some bull-shit dick ryder votes that he payed for and exchanged vote for..... but i aint even tripp'in cuz i know for a fact my verse was WAY BETTER.... and u never peep those battle cuz u never voted..... |
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when i said that i meant third degree, and when you get the third degree you get interrogated. And I.E., way better huh uhhhhhhhhhhh.......no anyway i.e. calm down this battle wasn't that serious and whoever voted for me, read a little closer
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Voted For: Blackmage
IE: savage for life? more like average for your whole exsistance... like leg-less marathon runners, i just can't see you going the distance... blah, amputee lines are played flowing persistant and your caught at a stand still... a hard verse for u just takes up space like land fill... setup was decet, punch doesn't connect i merk you dawg...shit...i leave you stuttering, shook... your lines get no attention, like blind kids coloring books.... Best bar in your verse now look at u taking ya time, with more extension then a hair-salon... plus u couldnt "Pull" on a WIN... place'in ya verse in a water bong... Setup was better than the punch, woulda been better if you switched 'em my style so cold that i froze ya-line... with punches n flow combined... ya mind-designed so empty, beat'in u in da head i'll sound like a drum-lines... Weak just face it, u got more played parts then samuel.L.jackson... take acttion?, why when u'r style more ut dated then IRAQ mapping... Didn't really rhyme it's over, no votes are needed...cuz he even dout -he's-won-it..... cuz ya ideas of punches are more empty then ethiopian-stomachs... Decet closer blackmage: I "Intensify" the "effect" of my "Eternal Illness" just so we clear special "effects" are fake they lack realness Decent personal, Ok opener overall your sentences are sentenced to death i'm the ropeman i'll beat you like a junkie tryin to steal from his "dopeman" Decent personal, wouldn't have worked without the explanation though talk glochs you won't shoot you no brute your flo's cute and if i'm a full blown herb what's that make you a "square "root" Good punch, best bar in your verse I "intensify" my pencil-eye precision for fast collision you challenge me you'll get the "third degree", bad decision Another personal that wouldn't work without explaining it you lack masculinity i pack "mass" like divinity your wack you're into me i don't son you dog we're trinity setup was good, punch was weak merk you dawg...shit...i leave you stuttering, shook... your lines get no attention, like blind kids coloring books.... vs.
talk glochs you won't shoot you no brute your flo's cuteand if i'm a full blown herb what's that make you a "square "root" blackmage wins. RTF @ the link in my sig, honest explained votes only:thumbup: |
Thanks ninth much love uppin this bitch for some votes yall cmon
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Voted For: intensify effect
IE got this battle wrapped up he had a way better flow and punches htat hit harder n more often. also he had some nice multies in there that just made his verse sound even better. both of yall had pretty good structure but black mages' verse was too basic n so was the vocab. need to make ya punches more creative so they hit harder. n try to set them up better to so they hit just right nah mean... RETURN THE FAVOR!!! http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=174350 http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=175294 |
Are you serious, we basicallly had the same multi count and most people don't even know what trinity is. You gotta be kiddin me.
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hey yo upppppppppin man drop these votes man i got things to do
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Voted For: intensify effect
IE won this battle pretty easy. he had a much hotter verse overall. blackmage didnt come very hard or just needs to elevate. opener=IE closer=IE def punches=IE flow=tied vocab=IE creativity=tied IE just had some real nice punches in there and some good multies and blackmage didnt come hard enuff to overcome all that good battle RETURN THE FAVOR http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=174890 |
Voted For: Blackmage
Black Mage Alright This Battle Was Off, I.E. You Need To Work On Your Structure, And Also Work On Your Vocabulary, Both Of You Need Some Decent Punches, But These Was Alright, Most Battles But I.E. Is Lop Sided, But Black Mage Took This Coz The Punches Category, He Had Some Nice Personals On I.E. That Helped His Flow Out, As Well As Some multi's Both Of you Need To Add Some Meta's Here, Anyway Vote=BlackMage Return The Favor, Link In Sig |
Can we move this along please i really do have things to do upppppin
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Voted For: intensify effect
I "Intensify" the "effect" of my "Eternal Illness" just so we clear special "effects" are fake they lack realness aiming at hes old crew that he aint with aint a real personal bad start your sentences are sentenced to death i'm the ropeman i'll beat you like a junkie tryin to steal from his "dopeman" ha good shit here thou talk glochs you won't shoot you no brute your flo's cute and if i'm a full blown herb what's that make you a "square "root" good shit I "intensify" my pencil-eye precision for fast collision you challenge me you'll get the "third degree", bad decision no punch, decent flow you lack masculinity i pack "mass" like divinity your wack you're into me i don't son you dog we're trinity decent ending u played off hes old crew which mad the attemp weak at a personal but the rest was aight thou lesson in progress..... u act like u a, savage for life? more like average for your whole exsistance... like leg-less marathon runners, i just can't see you going the distance... good start flowing persistant and your caught at a stand still... a hard verse for u just takes up space like land fill... good shit i merk you dawg...shit...i leave you stuttering, shook... your lines get no attention, like blind kids coloring books.... hahaha best bar/punch in this battle good 1 now look at u taking ya time, with more extension then a hair-salon... plus u couldnt "Pull" on a WIN... place'in ya verse in a water bong... if u flip this and put the 2ed line 1st it would of hit harder but good still *now lets finish him* my style so cold that i froze ya-line... with punches n flow combined... ya mind-designed so empty, beat'in u in da head i'll sound like a drum-lines... good flow, good hit just face it, u got more played parts then samuel.L.jackson... take acttion?, why when u'r style more ut dated then IRAQ mapping... decent it's over, no votes are needed...cuz he even dout -he's-won-it..... cuz ya ideas of punches are more empty then ethiopian-stomachs...... BITCH!!! U've BEEN SERVED... ha good ending about time u had some good punches that 1 bar /blind/kids/coloring book that took it for me good flow hard punches and a good ending so imma gow ith I.E on this one plez vote in one of my battles they old as shit class has been offical THOUGHT!!! |
Super uppin yall come on.........................
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up up and awayin this bitch.......................
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up this battle can we get some damn votes please..........
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This was feedback posted for Blackmage
u did alot betta in this particular battle ur wordplay & vocab was up 2 par it takes time but u'll elevate
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yo up this man stop sleepin on this battle yall
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Yo up this man what's goin on wit these voted send it up to the top till we get some votes in here
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Voted For: Blackmage
hmmm, this was a close one to call...Black had some really nice wordplay and a lotta pretty good personals... howeva, unfortunately for black, some of ya shit...(SOME) was a bit played... you came good wit wordplay and some funny punches... i think this was a nice, elevated drop IE came alright with his punches in his verse... his whole drop was basically mediocre punches and no personals, black's punches and wordplay outweighed IE's punches handing him the battle... V/ Black best line... Black- talk glochs you won't shoot you no brute your flo's cute and if i'm a full blown herb what's that make you a "square "root" ^that shyt was funny |
Voted For: intensify effect
Blackmage- Nice flow. Punches was good. Personals you picked was good. Punches was good, but need more effect.Wordplays was good. I.E- aiiight man, nice punches. Good wordplays. Flowed ok. Wordplays and punches is wat stood out in ya verse. Overall=Both heads are good. Punches from blackmage was good, effective and decent. Wordplays was nice too. I.E punches was decent and more effective, with some good ass wordplays. My vote goes to I.E for some hard hitting punches with some decent wordplays. Blackmage, keep doing ya thang, just add more effectiveness in your punches. Add dope wordplays too. |
uppin for the deciding vote yall next vote wins.........................(suspense)
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yo up this man i got shit to do come on..............
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Voted For: intensify effect
Breakdown... Name:Intensify Effect Verse: u act like u a, savage for life? more like average for your whole exsistance... like leg-less marathon runners, i just can't see you going the distance... flowing persistant and your caught at a stand still... a hard verse for u just takes up space like land fill... i merk you dawg...shit...i leave you stuttering, shook... your lines get no attention, like blind kids coloring books.... now look at u taking ya time, with more extension then a hair-salon... plus u couldnt "Pull" on a WIN... place'in ya verse in a water bong... *now lets finish him* my style so cold that i froze ya-line... with punches n flow combined... ya mind-designed so empty, beat'in u in da head i'll sound like a drum-lines... just face it, u got more played parts then samuel.L.jackson... take acttion?, why when u'r style more ut dated then IRAQ mapping... it's over, no votes are needed...cuz he even dout -he's-won-it..... cuz ya ideas of punches are more empty then ethiopian-stomachs...... Need/Don’t need to work on:WAsssup I.E, sorry bout all the beef, i mean if you wanna be straight we straight, but if you think there is any beef, then lemme know, but im done with the beef with you...anyways...nice drop keep droppin them fam. :thumbup: Stats.. Punches:8/10 Metaphors:7/10 Wordplay:7/10 Structure:6/10 Personals:6/10 Multies:4/10 Total:38/60 ----------------------------------------------------- Breakdown: Name:BLackMage Verse: I "Intensify" the "effect" of my "Eternal Illness" just so we clear special "effects" are fake they lack realness your sentences are sentenced to death i'm the ropeman i'll beat you like a junkie tryin to steal from his "dopeman" talk glochs you won't shoot you no brute your flo's cute and if i'm a full blown herb what's that make you a "square "root" I "intensify" my pencil-eye precision for fast collision you challenge me you'll get the "third degree", bad decision you lack masculinity i pack "mass" like divinity your wack you're into me i don't son you dog we're trinity Need/Don’t need to work on:yo B...i think you got potential...i mean you coulda had him if your punches connected more ya meen...keep ya head up fam....pz Stats: Punches:4/10 Metaphors:3/10 Wordplay:4/10 Structure:6/10 Personals:3/10 Multies:4/10 Total:21/60 RTF in the Sig Against J DOT...i personally felt like i won and so did 4 other people....hopefully you feel the same way...pz |
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