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J.R. Freeze vs Skriptz
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Crew Battle .SM Vs. CST. 10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 02-09-05 at 02:34 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
Skriptz has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-06-05 03:11 PM.
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This is a crew battle son, in this battle your not going to last
I better get ready cause its time… Quote:
I’ll grab your damn punches and form them into a ball Cuz once SM destroys Cold Steel your… Quote:
Your not on my level kid, why do I have to battle you? The time you only feel good is when you get accepted to a wack crew Heard you was a redneck and a herb, but what difference does that make? Only time you serving up some punches, is when they come on a plate I’ll destroy this hoe with weak punches, who here wants to make a bet? Claims that he’s rusty, when his skills are that bad to get there yet |
J.R. Freeze has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-06-05 03:31 PM.
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Dislocate Your Spinal Chord When I Break In Half Your "Vertebre" Then Release Yellow Fluids From My Body To Your Face As I "Urinate" My Bar's hitz Your Brain & Paralyzes Your Body “Functions” Stick Your Spine In Your Rectum & Put It All Together Like A Sentence “Conjunction” Leave You With Partial Thought Process Like Waking Up At A Earlytime Put Your Brains On The Ground So You Literally Have A "DirtyMind” You Want My Passwor....So You Can At Least Feel Like A Lyrical Genius Metaphoric Phrases Kill Your Brain Cells Like Bitches Sucking Way Too Much “Penis” Blow Your Brains Through Your Mouth So You Can Speak Ya Mind” And Scare You Like 8th Grade Dropouts When I “Release Tha 9”...... |
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Voted For: J.R. Freeze
this battle was not even close on the real here's my opinion on it: opener: cst punches: cst personals: cst multis: cst structure: sm closer: cst j.r. & his crew cst just came harder & hit skriptz & his crew sm with alot more punches; skrpitz just need 2 elevate in his rhymes more & direct more punches at ur opponent the next time Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
^Lol...
im not even gonna say nuttin...just gettin that bullshit vote removed uppin... |
Voted For: Skriptz
skriptz................ This is a crew battle son, in this battle your not going to last I better get ready cause its time… Quote: Originally Posted by J.R. Freeze to murk ur lame ass decent here....i like how you used things he said....hit good....7/10 I’ll grab your damn punches and form them into a ball Cuz once SM destroys Cold Steel your… Quote: Originally Posted by J.R. Freeze (crew is gonna fall) decent.....hit pretty good.....7/10 Your not on my level kid, why do I have to battle you? The time you only feel good is when you get accepted to a wack crew nice personal.....7/10 Heard you was a redneck and a herb, but what difference does that make? Only time you serving up some punches, is when they come on a plate hit good as well.....7/10 I’ll destroy this hoe with weak punches, who here wants to make a bet? Claims that he’s rusty, when his skills are that bad to get there yet nice closer....hit good.....8/10 overall..........36/50 JR freeze............ ...... Dislocate Your Spinal Chord When I Break In Half Your "Vertebre" Then Release Yellow Fluids From My Body To Your Face As I "Urinate" ehh ok...i wasnt feelin it that much though....good vocab...6/10 My Bar's hitz Your Brain & Paralyzes Your Body “Functions” Stick Your Spine In Your Rectum & Put It All Together Like A Sentence “Conjunction” nice....7/10 Leave You With Partial Thought Process Like Waking Up At A Earlytime Put Your Brains On The Ground So You Literally Have A "DirtyMind” good wordplay here....7/10 You Want My Passwor....So You Can At Least Feel Like A Lyrical Genius Metaphoric Phrases Kill Your Brain Cells Like Bitches Sucking Way Too Much “Penis” blowjob lines= played.....5/10 Blow Your Brains Through Your Mouth So You Can Speak Ya Mind” And Scare You Like 8th Grade Dropouts When I “Release Tha 9”...... nice wordplay here...i was feelin it.....8/10 overall.........33/50 yea both had pretty good verses....but i had to go with skriptz because his punches just hit a lot harder.....jr had good vocab and wordplay....but some of his bars werent as good as the others.....whereas skriptz stayed consistent with his in his whole verse......skriptz also had good personals.....add some personals to your verse JR and this would have been closer.....PLEASE RETURN THE FAVOR SKRIPTZ......link in sig....thanks |
aight i'll rtf when i can yo...
uppin..................... |
Voted For: Skriptz
Your not on my level kid, why do I have to battle you? The time you only feel good is when you get accepted to a wack crew decent personal in this..7/10 Heard you was a redneck and a herb, but what difference does that make? Only time you serving up some punches, is when they come on a plate not very good........5/10 I’ll destroy this hoe with weak punches, who here wants to make a bet? Claims that he’s rusty, when his skills are that bad to get there yet ..ehh..typo, but i see what u was doing 7/10 Leave You With Partial Thought Process Like Waking Up At A Earlytime Put Your Brains On The Ground So You Literally Have A "DirtyMind” ....see ya concept but poor set up..poor delivery You Want My Passwor....So You Can At Least Feel Like A Lyrical Genius Metaphoric Phrases Kill Your Brain Cells Like Bitches Sucking Way Too Much “Penis” ..nice vocab in this bar but punch didnt connect..5/10 Blow Your Brains Through Your Mouth So You Can Speak Ya Mind” And Scare You Like 8th Grade Dropouts When I “Release Tha 9”...... no...very played...both lines..5/10 skriptz came short and sweet JR came congested and played v/ Skript http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=175863 http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=176092 no hate please return |
Voted For: Skriptz
good battle from both sides... JR ya verse was good..nice punches 8/10..vocab was lackin just a bit 4/10..personals were aight 6/10..Structure was bad i thought 3/10...multis came ok you used them well 7/10...metas were light from your side hommie 5/10...Opener was weak 5/10...closer was ok 7/10...coulda done betta fam...overall: 40/70 Skriptz dope drop...Punches were crazy 9/10...structure was good 8/10...personals was aight nice way to use his words against him 8/10...multis were lackin i thought 3/10...metas came weak in ya drop 5/10...opener was good 7/10...closer was good also 7/10...overall:47/70 v/skriptz |
Voted For: J.R. Freeze
i was gonna give this one to skriptz because i read freeze's last and i thought it was that bad. then i went back and realized that skriptz didn't have any punches at all. and by the way, the quotes weren't working guy. and why would punch be served on a plate? anyways i wasn't really feelin freeze's graphic punches and jokes but at least he had punches ya know. skriptz verse was a little neater but structure ain't gonna do it for ya. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=174830 me vs. mafia http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=174024 me vs. intensify effect http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=173417 me vs. os1ris http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=175459 me vs. illmatic |
no hate by the way just wasn't really feelin it sorry yall
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Voted For: J.R. Freeze
okay...dis battle was kind of weak skriptz tried da get creative and made his self look dumb...jr u finally switched ya structure datz a good look but u spit as hard as u usually do..... Your not on my level kid, why do I have to battle you? The time you only feel good is when you get accepted to a wack crew ^^^good opener/personal....dis was ya best line fam Heard you was a redneck and a herb, but what difference does that make? Only time you serving up some punches, is when they come on a plate ^^^^??? WHUT DAT DIDN'T MAKE SENSE & YA RYHME SCHEME IS DA SAME AS A NEWB I’ll destroy this hoe with weak punches, who here wants to make a bet? Claims that he’s rusty, when his skills are that bad to get there yet ^^^decent i aint gon say its all da wack but dis shit is weak..plus u worded it wrong at da end overall...skriptz i seen some of ya old shit dis da worst u eva spit i mean u didn't try da be creative or nothin nun of ya lines stood out and da qoutin shit in da beginin was 4 nothin Dislocate Your Spinal Chord When I Break In Half Your "Vertebre" Then Release Yellow Fluids From My Body To Your Face As I "Urinate" ^^^good opener i dont really care about vocab but datz ya style My Bar's hitz Your Brain & Paralyzes Your Body “Functions” Stick Your Spine In Your Rectum & Put It All Together Like A Sentence “Conjunction” ^^^nah wasn't feelin it fam Leave You With Partial Thought Process Like Waking Up At A Earlytime Put Your Brains On The Ground So You Literally Have A "DirtyMind” ^^^^nice punchline good creativity You Want My Passwor....So You Can At Least Feel Like A Lyrical Genius Metaphoric Phrases Kill Your Brain Cells Like Bitches Sucking Way Too Much “Penis” ^^^^^sorri i didn't get it fam Blow Your Brains Through Your Mouth So You Can Speak Ya Mind” And Scare You Like 8th Grade Dropouts When I “Release Tha 9”...... ^^^^^^^^first line was kind of played but da second line was type hott overall...j.r u had some creativity in ya verse no personals...it kind of sound pre written cuzz u could of spit dat verse 2 anybody nahmean but u win dis battle with ya creativity and punchlines.. return da favor..ya'll |
This was feedback posted for Skriptz
lol @ I.E sayin Jr Was gonna Merk one of My Own
*Nuff Said* |
This was feedback posted for J.R. Freeze
nice battle uppint this shit,.............................
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lol what a hate vote................. ........................................... |
j/p.......i read it..........
uppin this shit..... |
Voted For: J.R. Freeze
this was a close battle. both verses were pretty average tho. but i think JR freeze took this one. he had better punches in though they sounded real forced. sort of like he just tried to use big words. but he had better structure and vocab. skriptz had a better flow but didnt have that many hot punches in his verse or any nice multies. my vote goes to JR FREEZe RETURN THE FAVOR!!! http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=174350 http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=175294 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: Skriptz
Your not on my level kid, why do I have to battle you? The time you only feel good is when you get accepted to a wack crew Heard you was a redneck and a herb, but what difference does that make? Only time you serving up some punches, is when they come on a plate VS nothing from JR JR, your rhymes not only wack, they're disgusting, and has no dissing value. your flows aight, but the punches are wack, and stop putting "" in your lines, they newbish. Skriptz, solid verse here nice metas, some played though. You merked the shit outta the freeze though, good job. Vote: Skriptz PS plz return the favor in the link in my sig thanks! |
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good battle..... |
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Voted For:Skriptz Skriptz Nice Verse, Came Pretty Well With Your Vocabulary, Your Structure Was Alright But That Still Needs A Little Work Any Way Vocabulary Was Cool, Had Some Decent Punches In Your Verse, Thing's You Need Is Multi's And Meta's That'll Help You Out Alot Man...8/10 J.R. Okay Wow, You Use The Same Vocabulary In Almost All Your Ish, You Need To Up Your Vocabulary, Also Your Rhyme Scheme Needs Work, Your Structure Was Decent But You Need That Rhyme Scheme, Also Throw in Some Meta's And multi's It'll Help You As Well Both Needed To Come Harder But....7/10 Vote=Skriptz Return The Favor, Link In Sig Man |
Voted For: Skriptz
I vote on Skriptz he had harder hittin punches and some good personals dis how im goin to break it down....... Skriptz Verse....... Your not on my level kid, why do I have to battle you? The time you only feel good is when you get accepted to a wack crew First line hit hard but kinda fell off on da second line....6/10 Heard you was a redneck and a herb, but what difference does that make? Only time you serving up some punches, is when they come on a plate Dis was iight but i really didnt feel it......5/10 I’ll destroy this hoe with weak punches, who here wants to make a bet? Claims that he’s rusty, when his skills are that bad to get there yet haha dis was iight to didnt hit hard.......6/10 Overall:17/30 J.R.Freeze's Verse.... Dislocate Your Spinal Chord When I Break In Half Your "Vertebre" Then Release Yellow Fluids From My Body To Your Face As I "Urinate" Dis was jus to dumb......i give it a 5/10 My Bar's hitz Your Brain & Paralyzes Your Body “Functions” Stick Your Spine In Your Rectum & Put It All Together Like A Sentence “Conjunction” Dis was iight but wasnt dat good........5/10 Leave You With Partial Thought Process Like Waking Up At A Earlytime Put Your Brains On The Ground So You Literally Have A "DirtyMind” U really wasnt dissin him or nothin......5/10 You Want My Passwor....So You Can At Least Feel Like A Lyrical Genius Metaphoric Phrases Kill Your Brain Cells Like Bitches Sucking Way Too Much “Penis” To much Self-Glory first line and second line played.......4/10 Blow Your Brains Through Your Mouth So You Can Speak Ya Mind” And Scare You Like 8th Grade Dropouts When I “Release Tha 9”...... Dat was iight closer i liked it best line in ur verse.....6/10 Overall:25/50 Think u need to work on ur disses....... RTF links in sig |
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