25. One Mic vs. 26. Aimez
 

Yea Thats wasuup Im Still In This Thang ........

Checkin IN

check check........................................

4-3 record??? most wins from no-shows? its strange when you say that you're blessed
you got no place on RV...................
...................................if you cant even get your punctuation correct!

want explanations, pm me.....

dropped early...................

You Speaking Back On Yo Word So Niggas Know You Talk Curly
My Punchez Are Predestined To Kill Thats Why You dropped early


All Punch No personal
Cant 4get Punchline League not personals League

Uppin for votes ......

4-3 record??? most wins from no-shows? its strange when you say that you're blessed
you got no place on RV...................
...................................if you cant even get your punctuation correct!

Stretched and ugly structure...personal i suppose but not heavy.

VS

You Speaking Back On Yo Word So Niggas Know You Talk Curly
My Punchez Are Predestined To Kill Thats Why You dropped early

Basic but imo it hit a bit harder, weak battle really, aimez edged it.

V./ Aimez. rtf in pll

thanx ill supply my links soon ......................

ugh, both weak

bit of advice, don't capitalise every word, it's a waste of time and makes you look like a newb. Don't replace s with z unless you need to for wordplay.

Also if a line has more than around 12-13 words it's bound to be stretched unless there's inner rhyming.

I also think Aimez edged it slightly

v/Aimez

1 Mic would have won had he re worded his punch.

both were ehh.........but aimez came better.....more wittier of a punch..

v/aimez

ermmm,

one mic's punch seems stretched visually, but for me when i read it out it had flow to it, the structure is basically another variation of the 3-line bar style. the personal was there, not the best but still ok.

aimez.....tried to play off the quote, that is played and the basic simplicity to the punch let it down to, also the fact that he bolded the last part adds an element of forcing the wordplay when it wasn't necessary.

so, i am going to disagree with everyone else...

V/ - one mic

thanx for votin y'all. uppin this....................

V/One Mic...

Weak Battle but...

...I just think playing off quotes is gay unless you do a good job of it.

RTF on my PL Battle homie.

thanx for the vote man. 3-2. uppin this shit.........

4-3 record??? most wins from no-shows? its strange when you say that you're blessed
you got no place on RV...................

...................................if you cant even get your punctuation correct!
- An ok personal, but it was not worded great to hit harder, but then not very badly either…flowed ok considering you had the one rhyme at the end…


You Speaking Back On Yo Word So Niggas Know You Talk Curly
My Punchez Are Predestined To Kill Thats Why You dropped early

- Decent, but you could have worded it better and the set-up was not that good either

Close battle in my opinion, both could have worded their punches better, but in the end Aimez had a wittier punch so gets my vote…

Vote – Aimez

4-2 im up ...................Still uppin ...................

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The only two active battles at the moment will post two more later

one mic - yours was hella stretched, otherwise it was ok

aimez - pretty good punch, decent wordplay

V/ Aimez

5-2 Im Up /......................../

I WIll hit up all battles in the league as usual

v/aimez


meh nothing special, but aimez came less wack.

v/ aimez
edged this out
both had kinda similar punches but i felt aimez a bit more

Both punches sucked.

Aimez didn't suck as much.

Vote: Aimez

8-2 Im up ................................Im bout to hit up some more battles but im not gonna post up my links bcuz im too busy rii now so just know i Hit up all the open battles :thumbup:

vote:aimez.........did just enough to edge out a close one.

You Speaking Back On Yo Word So Niggas Know You Talk Curly
My Punchez Are Predestined To Kill Thats Why You dropped early

Ehh,doesn't seem to diss much in my opinion.Seems like you tried too hard to be personal.

4-3 record??? most wins from no-shows? its strange when you say that you're blessed
you got no place on RV...................
...................................if you cant even get your punctuation correct!

Really stretched out.I don't see why you needed all those dots in the 2nd line neither,but your shit still dissed him,

vote-One Mic.

9-3 .................I Think We all see the end on this battle

Nice battle one mic

yer nice battle man. cant beat the guy who gave me my name though lol (you are Stanza right??)

Aimez wins.
One Mic loses.

This thread is now closed.

Moved to Closed Battles.