sin vs shake-spear
 

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Check in by: 09-01-04 at 01:55 AM

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sin has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-01-04 01:37 AM.

shake-spear has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-01-04 01:38 AM.

kidd i dear u try ta shake my spear and feel fear/
shells touch ya chest like a dagger i guess dats why ya name shakespear/
dis bmore cat couldnt shake if he was made by harlem/\
his ass on the street wack im shakespear i'll try en stall em,/
dis bmore bitch get bullets the size of blouders/
got heat but my swicth balde a make ya body colder/
i got heat sharpshooter to nice could spot out a raisin/
test me kidd shells the size of cows and trust me they not grazein/
nigga die sin flows the right way bitch/
u couldent flow if u was water in the chesapeak bay bitch/

die nigga sin D@

when i said i got bullets the size of cows they not graeizin
well u know its preety easy

pretty easy mybad on the misspelled word kidd do ur thing dont mean nuttin bye it 1

check one check one two

y dis herb callin me out betta be gettin ready-to-lose/
cause from the looks of things he aint got nottin betta-to-do/
sin im betta-then-u/
only way u called sick is when someone say u suck but hit the i instead-of-the-u/
it should be a "sin" for dis herb to rap he cant win/
and u know im Godlike, so i repent-"Sin"s/(repent= feel sorry for)
i peeped ya battles ya wack battlin me's a no-no/
would have got KO'd if i aint vote and would be 0-2 if it wasnt for a no-show/
so he sit back and read my verse cautiusly-takin-notes/
and if he keep fuckin wit me he gon have more losses-then-he-got-post/


lol quick free u lame if i win

This was feedback posted for shake-spear
 

this was kinda closer than prolly shake wanted it to be, was a ok battle.... shake had more multies tho and this battle aint have much punchline wise.... v - shake


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Voted For: shake-spear

personally u may not think you verse was that good but i read each verse 3 times over and i still thought urs was better each time u had some personals and wordplay which i like......u had multies after every rhyme.....what i didnt like about sins verse was the3 lack of multies in his verse and he didnt really come with ne thing strong in ne of his bars so im gonna have to go with you on this one.....my vote

Vote:Shake-spear

uppin for votes...................................

Voted For: shake-spear

came harder...betta punches...made more sense...betta flow...

gave it to shake spear...

This was feedback posted for shake-spear
 

i like the second cats verses becuz he had mor punlines and his made way more sense. i personally didn't like any of them.

i go with shakespear.

sin try to rhyme a little, all this bitch shit at the end of ur verses aren't goin to work dude. u overall just need to elevate

uppin.............................................

we need some votes...................................

Voted For: shake-spear

vote/shake-spear

reasons why:

he had a weak opener, but he had some nice personals
in the rest of his verse-nice punches annd flow too-
the structure could've been better but it didnt
ruin his verse too much so in y oppinion he takes it

return the favor no hate votes please

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