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quick verse, let me know what you think
How can one day be so perfect and the next go so wrong
I guess it always happens so that I can write a new song But, oh well, what’s been did has been done I’m standing up sending praises to the Son What? You don’t know Who He is, He’s Jesus Christ What you think He was some kind of demonic poltergeist He’s right the opposite, lives in heaven and is called superb Declaring Him as anything less is nothing more than up surd He’s the only perfect being, creator of the whole universe He’s the only reason I even wanted to write this verse He conquered death for everyone in the entire earth So we might live with Him in heaven and have a new birth Giving Him my soul was the best thing that I could have ever done Cause in Him the true and final victory is already been won I try and give Him all my problems and pointless fears And pray that He will hold me tight and wipe away all my tears He’ll do the same for you if just surrender all to Him Come into His light and step beyond all that is dim Let Him write your name in the Lamb’s Book of Life And He’ll be there to take away all your pain and strife http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2323964 |
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7/10...............
liked the subject. good flow.......................... god bless................... |
hey man nice drop good flow nice vocab......slow start strong finish keep progressin 7/10 return the favor on my open mic....peace
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I like this. Played Concept though. I liked the approach. You had good emotion. It was overall The best aspect in your verse "Emotion"...Imagery is good, i just say put metaphors and similies in it..To expand your imagery more complex and more "Deph" in it..But Nice drop.
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i like da subject, urs was on
but nice drop dough |
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