manipulation vs gracefullflow
 

house rules
8-10 lines

u spittin first

gud luk

yea i'll go first 2 ~MANIPULATE~ ya mind
start off by sayin u justa BUSTA wit out da RHYMES

u runnin outta time.. so u better gets 2 walkin
back da other way...b4 i leave u people talkin

bout how i whip yo ass like cream
pissed on urself while sleep...n said u had a wet dream

cuz u thought about wut happen...y even try rappin
yo flow so weak.. u couldn't even get heat 2 start clappin

left everybody laughin...like a joster or a clown
cuz in diss battle u like DRUMS...gettin dat ass BEAT down


drop ya flow

ima put u in a "spin" worse than your "played" avatar..
u cudnt b sick,if u chomped n out of date chocolate-bar..
rules are dont feed..but your wack-ass went-ta bite...
so why try that shit?..i watched 8-mile just last nite!..
fight like a dyke..god damn this aint no pillow fight...
spittin so much "bite"...its like replayin tha tyson fight!..
to spit takes brain..n u wouldnt b hot at the earths-core..
your shits so off aim..u like diahorea to the bathroom floor!..



aiight 8 lines.im done...
jus to explain line 4...IN HIS VERSE HE BIT A LINE FROM THA 8-MILE FILM...
busta without tha rhyme...eminem spits dat.

Manipulation had dis. both flowz was good an both had good punchez but Manipulationz was just better..ok battle
opener-manipulation
closer-manipulation
punches-manipulation
flow-gracefulflow
wordplay-grafulflow
structure-manipulation
v/manipulation

vote honestly on deez battlez

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=137788 me vs. ibraheem
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=137782 me vs. amayze

Break Down I

Gracefullflow- Verse Was To Simplistic And Basic In My Eyes, Vocab Was Elemn', And Flow Was Ok, Structure Wasnt Bad, Punches Didnt Hit Very Hard



Manipulation- Ok Verse, Structure Was Good, Punches Were There, Flow Was Ok.. Overal Better Verse Than Gracefullflow



Break Down II
Punches- Manipulation
Personals- Niether
Flow- Tie
Wordplay- Manipulation
Multis- Niether
Metaphors- Manipulation
Structure- Tie
Originality- Tie
Vocab- Tie

Final Vote- Manipulation

Return Favor With Honest Vote:
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=137726

flow had it till I saw manip's flow was good although some rep manip maintained a solid verse. come see mine http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=137399
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=137393

Minipulation Killed that Damn Spot light he got the punches and personals that from the other person was Terrible

Break down

Minipulation

Flow 8/10
Rhymez 7/10
Punches 8/10
Structure 6/10
29/40

Oppent....
Flow 5/10
Rhymez 6/10
Punchez 4/10
Structure 2/10
17/40

Vote/Minipulation

upp
 

uppin 4 1 more vote...............................

uppim............................................. ....

uppin................cumon 1 god damn vote............

can ya return the favor of a vote int his battle, http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=138007
and all the other links i have in my sig thanks alot....

now,

graceful flow: u'r flow was decent but u lacked punches and u had wordplay in like a line or to but ya creativity was lacking as-well but not a bad verse.

6.0

manipulation, u hada preety good flow some good punches which hit preety well and harder, u'r creativeness was preety good and all around not a bad verse

7.6 outta 10

flow: man
punches: man
creativeness: man

vote: man