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MaNiPuLaTiOn |
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...tha princess of rv...
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house rules
8-10 lines u spittin first gud luk
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. MaNiPuLaTiOn .ToPiCaL GeNiUs
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yea i'll go first 2 ~MANIPULATE~ ya mind
start off by sayin u justa BUSTA wit out da RHYMES u runnin outta time.. so u better gets 2 walkin back da other way...b4 i leave u people talkin bout how i whip yo ass like cream pissed on urself while sleep...n said u had a wet dream cuz u thought about wut happen...y even try rappin yo flow so weak.. u couldn't even get heat 2 start clappin left everybody laughin...like a joster or a clown cuz in diss battle u like DRUMS...gettin dat ass BEAT down drop ya flow |
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...tha princess of rv...
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IP: 6AD2 8F43
ima put u in a "spin" worse than your "played" avatar..
u cudnt b sick,if u chomped n out of date chocolate-bar.. rules are dont feed..but your wack-ass went-ta bite... so why try that shit?..i watched 8-mile just last nite!.. fight like a dyke..god damn this aint no pillow fight... spittin so much "bite"...its like replayin tha tyson fight!.. to spit takes brain..n u wouldnt b hot at the earths-core.. your shits so off aim..u like diahorea to the bathroom floor!.. aiight 8 lines.im done... jus to explain line 4...IN HIS VERSE HE BIT A LINE FROM THA 8-MILE FILM... busta without tha rhyme...eminem spits dat.
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Manipulation had dis. both flowz was good an both had good punchez but Manipulationz was just better..ok battle
opener-manipulation closer-manipulation punches-manipulation flow-gracefulflow wordplay-grafulflow structure-manipulation v/manipulation vote honestly on deez battlez http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=137788 me vs. ibraheem http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=137782 me vs. amayze |
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Break Down I
Gracefullflow- Verse Was To Simplistic And Basic In My Eyes, Vocab Was Elemn', And Flow Was Ok, Structure Wasnt Bad, Punches Didnt Hit Very Hard Manipulation- Ok Verse, Structure Was Good, Punches Were There, Flow Was Ok.. Overal Better Verse Than Gracefullflow Break Down II Punches- Manipulation Personals- Niether Flow- Tie Wordplay- Manipulation Multis- Niether Metaphors- Manipulation Structure- Tie Originality- Tie Vocab- Tie Final Vote- Manipulation Return Favor With Honest Vote: http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=137726
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flow had it till I saw manip's flow was good although some rep manip maintained a solid verse. come see mine http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=137399
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=137393
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Minipulation Killed that Damn Spot light he got the punches and personals that from the other person was Terrible
Break down Minipulation Flow 8/10 Rhymez 7/10 Punches 8/10 Structure 6/10 29/40 Oppent.... Flow 5/10 Rhymez 6/10 Punchez 4/10 Structure 2/10 17/40 Vote/Minipulation
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...tha princess of rv...
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IP: 6AD2 8F43
uppin 4 1 more vote...............................
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...tha princess of rv...
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uppin................cumon 1 god damn vote............
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can ya return the favor of a vote int his battle, http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=138007
and all the other links i have in my sig thanks alot.... now, graceful flow: u'r flow was decent but u lacked punches and u had wordplay in like a line or to but ya creativity was lacking as-well but not a bad verse. 6.0 manipulation, u hada preety good flow some good punches which hit preety well and harder, u'r creativeness was preety good and all around not a bad verse 7.6 outta 10 flow: man punches: man creativeness: man vote: man |
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