Multies In Quarters
 

yeah just somthing breif showing i do know how too write multies and shit lol its got some dope flow in Status's opinion well he said he liked it check it out

www.soundclick.com/jayjking


peep it out and let me know what you think if you leave feed i'll leave feed


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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=175715
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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=211974

again...a 90s style beat


not bad

u had multies...but could have deliveried them better...and yes, I can flow with more multies than u... ;)


flow is pretty cool

delivery was aiigh

like the gay lovers line...haaa


not bad dawg...nothing major though


keep flowin...ur good



RTF please


http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=212670

Hmmm.I Dont Like Thios Old School Beats
The Vocals Seem A Lil Low Need A Lil More Delivery These Lyric R Good Like The Way You Made This Sound
Need A Lil More Emtion I dont Like The Half Time Bit

Overall:6/10

Plz RTF On My Rebirth Trasck

beat is dope and yes the flow could have more power to it,
you had osme good lines but then you had some bad lines
like i said we should collab to this but a different beat with out a sampled chorus so we can both bless the chorus with our skills, and yo you just need to get that toturial i was teliingyou about so your qaulity can be alot beter

believe the quality is a big thing even if you do recor din the studio these rough drafts still need to sound pretty

word famo....i got you....and did u get taht beat i sent u? it was ill i cant remember which one it was tho lol

nah didnt get nothing

send it again

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alright q i'll have too do it tommorow and same for unf and same for status i'm going up too olympia too talk too a few labels and a few places too preform so get at me late

hmmm... found one of my favorite beats from way back when.... Nas's first major single!!! anyways... not bad... ya adlibs overpowered ya main vocals... turn ya main up.... put some bass in ya adlibs... shyt was screechin' thru my speakers... aiight flow... like Q said, nuffin major... try using multies within ya lines and end with a different sound...

yada yada bing... yada yada bing ...flitta flatta banga
yada yada bing... yada yada bing ...flitta flatta banga

mix up how ya do ya multies so it don't get boring and use bigger words or words kats don't usually use... surprise ya audience

not bad... not great... but not bad....

6.5/10

aught i'mma do feedback tonight

Listening...

Feelin the beat....Like Tha Q said, multies are flowed good, but not great...flow is pretty coo though...delivery was nice...quality was decent...liked the effects in the intro...

Again, keep it up...holla at me for another collab one day.