"L.A. Reed Bough my Soul"
 

Wear that noose as necklace,
so maybe when the leds thin
we can pass the rope and hold
that high note until my last line quotes.
Death is in, it's back in black
So hold your breath and let in fad.
Proof isn't always in the puddin',
the truth is in Proof who played
roulette with 4 stacked chambers
and was born alive as he died.

Kiss the bullet ... kiss the bullet...

Kiss the bullet's lips he's lucky Pull It!
The blarney stone is so last week.
Peal your wrist back and see that
the publicity is endless... Besides,
you have to, you signed the contract.
Nothing spells success like death
...................or sells quite as well,
You wanna reach legendary persona?
Man, just squeeze don't breath.....
............ Instantly behold Nirvana.

Weep, drown your brash sorrows
in the shattering ease of sea glass.
Listen to the gulls backward laughter,
hide your head back under
the sand's hand and the cover
of grain to discover disdain
as you lap up puddles from another
bottle of grain's incessant deception.
Stare deep into that fountain of youth
before you drown your frown's impression
in the bowls of your own proud reflection.

L.A. paid the blade and kissed
Mr. Smith with an ivory forty-eight,
hung the body from guitar strings
and clapped as his plastic puppet reach L.A.;
Hit the charts with artificial art
and it never took a heart to create his name.


http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=225567
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=225494

Wear that noose as necklace,
so maybe when the leds thin
we can pass the rope and hold
that high note until my last line quotes.
dope.. I like the first line a lot

The blarney stone is so last week.
bwahwhahwhahw that was awesome


Weep, drown your brash sorrows
in the shattering ease of sea glass.
Listen to the gulls backward laughter,
nice


My fav. parts..^
Another good yet humorous piece.. likin' it, emo faggot. :D
lol

pretty good but i didnt get some parts cause im like mental and shit lol, it rolls more like a poem but none the less i still liked it. so word up kidd. and pop the top so yall can rock with the cop.
(uppin to the top so you can get some more feed = hense the cop )

damn homie this was pretty good i was feeling this , you had a very solid and well rounded drop ..you have alot of emotions and very good feelings going into your drop..and it really captured the readers attentions.. i was really feeling the rhythem , it was an overall very good drop..keep it up atty

... Thanks alot.