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04-18-06, 09:11 AM | #1 | |||
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"L.A. Reed Bough my Soul"
IP: 0825 899A
Wear that noose as necklace,
so maybe when the leds thin we can pass the rope and hold that high note until my last line quotes. Death is in, it's back in black So hold your breath and let in fad. Proof isn't always in the puddin', the truth is in Proof who played roulette with 4 stacked chambers and was born alive as he died. Kiss the bullet ... kiss the bullet... Kiss the bullet's lips he's lucky Pull It! The blarney stone is so last week. Peal your wrist back and see that the publicity is endless... Besides, you have to, you signed the contract. Nothing spells success like death ...................or sells quite as well, You wanna reach legendary persona? Man, just squeeze don't breath..... ............ Instantly behold Nirvana. Weep, drown your brash sorrows in the shattering ease of sea glass. Listen to the gulls backward laughter, hide your head back under the sand's hand and the cover of grain to discover disdain as you lap up puddles from another bottle of grain's incessant deception. Stare deep into that fountain of youth before you drown your frown's impression in the bowls of your own proud reflection. L.A. paid the blade and kissed Mr. Smith with an ivory forty-eight, hung the body from guitar strings and clapped as his plastic puppet reach L.A.; Hit the charts with artificial art and it never took a heart to create his name. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=225567 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=225494 |
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04-18-06, 07:35 PM | #2 | |||
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IP: 3881 400B
Wear that noose as necklace,
so maybe when the leds thin we can pass the rope and hold that high note until my last line quotes. dope.. I like the first line a lot The blarney stone is so last week. bwahwhahwhahw that was awesome Weep, drown your brash sorrows in the shattering ease of sea glass. Listen to the gulls backward laughter, nice My fav. parts..^ Another good yet humorous piece.. likin' it, emo faggot. lol
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04-18-06, 10:14 PM | #3 | ||||||
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IP: CF86 0039
pretty good but i didnt get some parts cause im like mental and shit lol, it rolls more like a poem but none the less i still liked it. so word up kidd. and pop the top so yall can rock with the cop.
(uppin to the top so you can get some more feed = hense the cop ) |
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04-19-06, 12:57 AM | #4 | ||||
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IP: 5B30 0354
damn homie this was pretty good i was feeling this , you had a very solid and well rounded drop ..you have alot of emotions and very good feelings going into your drop..and it really captured the readers attentions.. i was really feeling the rhythem , it was an overall very good drop..keep it up atty
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05-08-06, 05:22 PM | #5 | |||
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IP: 3240 794D
... Thanks alot.
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