"Falling Star"...Story Track...Leave Links and I'll Return the Favor..
 

www.soundclick.com/limitededitioncan

I thought what the hell...may as well post up some cuts from the mixtape...so here's the first one.

Leave links and I'll return the favor.

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=230104
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=230040

you sent me this:)

I have it on my MP3

Word......

Word

flows nice,feelin the lyrics yo..real deep...feelin the emotion real nice,makes you think about the lyrics the way you dliver it..the volume fluxuates a lil....but its koo...real nice,feel how you present yourself...koo verse

Hook

Verse 2 is my fav :)
Flows nicer than first madd feeli this verse..only 1 prob.the volume fluxuates...but its koo,deiverys nice...like the vfirst verse,but nicer lol :)

Hook.............................................. .........outro

Good shit

Thanks...

Uppin'...I'll return the favor.

this shits dope fam.

Email it to me please. :thumbup:

word @ me about to post a song to this beat lol...i love this beat with a passion...its dope


anyways.......



flow kinda seems a bit choppy at the start...just sounded weird to me...it caught on quick though.......

hook is coo...could be a bit more catchy....only thing ill remember is the start where u say falling star falling star.......

delivery is good....as well as your emotion...

nice ending to the story....it wasnt anything that really put you in shock...but it was good nontheless...i dont think the purpose of it was to shock though....

overall nice stuff...other than lil minor things..

please rtf..
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=230444

Thanks...uppin'...

your intro seems a lil overbarring...haha you stutter its cool...just turn ya voice down a lil....when the beat hits you start to get a lil more into it.....good open into it....ive gotten waisted away lot....this songs about me isnt it....good lookin....haha, the hook is good, catchy....i like it......maybe an effect on the last down for the hook...an echo or something would be enthraling....you got alotta spit in ya flow, smoke much? haha, hmm another suicide track....eh not bad, creeped up on me, didnt think it needed to go that far....an unnecessary murder might of been more realistic. then jail....i dunno coulda ended the story diff...but goood track none the less. good production, good lyrics....its a nice track....

RTF man - http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=230479

Good beat choice man, this is a favorite fa sure. Um your introduction was pretty good man, it makes me get ready for your story and makes me wanna listen. Your story actually was good to man, it was kept nice and solid through bout that one fucked cat. I bet it was you, you were talkin about, lol jp. Your flow was also pretty good man, along with a good emotion you delivered nice lyrics. overall I liked this shit and downloaded it.

rtf here: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=230367

Returning the feed

Playing..........

quality is solid, females intro vocals are cool. Your intro vocals are ok, bit of blabbering on. lol..

beat kicks in nice, flows good,dobs are good, nice production on this track.

Story line gets slightly boring, i dunno, maybe just the monotone of your vocals, but yeh, no disrespect, just didnt stay focused in this.
Hook is good, brought my attention back to the track.


All in all its definitly a solid track, alot will feel it, just me personally I sorta felt bored listening to it.

peace

wow man, intro is really dope, nice echo, whos beat is this man? quality is realllyyy good man, damn did you buy a new mic?
like the adlibs, better than before, nice man, whos beat is this, hoook is cool, could of done better tho, lyrics are crazy, dope track man

Alright thanks for the feed...

Uppin.

Returning the favors now.

Listening - heard this beat...the kid sense did this nicely..Im feeling the story alot...flow is nice..pronounciation is still a lil prolem here...kinda scrawny but thats it..flow is good..and delivery is pretty good..and presence is there completely..and the hook is also prety good ..lyrics are dope..im feelin the story fam...

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...497#post2778497

can u please rtf man, u kind avoided the last 3 times i asked for a rtf when you said yes :(

What's hot:
beat is fuckin' dope
tight story, end is nicee
delivery is good

what's coo:
hook is coo
same with emotion

what's not:
flow is a lil off on few spots, NOT a lot tho. or it might just be you have a unique way of flowin' iunno

overall, nice lil track man. keep it up. good shit 8/10 stay up

RTF plz:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=230662

EZ

Thanks for the feed...Spul I'll have to hit up yours when I get the chance...I'm outta town, and I'm at a computer with no speakers. :( Guaranteed I will hit it up when I get the chance though.

really enjoyed beat and your mic skillz. lyrics was mature and introspective, deep and soo on. my kinda thing. don't know what else to say. i like it. hope u keep improving.

7/10

peace