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TitoBronsky 11-17-06 03:58 PM

The One.... NEW OYD... **Tony.Self/286/Bronsky***
 
The One

Beat: Tony's vault :)
Verse 1: Tony
hook: Tony.Self
Verse 2: 286
hook: Tony.Self
Verse 3: TitoBronsky


Concept: This track is pretty much a lil story tellin jump off... 3 diff sides of the same coin... on some ill shit...

Enjoi yall


Links :
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=237065
^^^^ Spul ... "King Me"^^^^^^^
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=237216
^^^^ Team One.... "So Today"^^^^^^




-Don Tito Bronsky

Jay Rose 11-18-06 12:49 AM

word tito ive been waiting for this song to be finished love every second of it....you killed that third verse man, tony killed the first.....really hot track...

Tha .Q 11-18-06 09:42 AM

tony's vocals were a touch too loud


delivery and flow were on point tho

hook

sounded pretty nice...did anyone here do the singin in the background?


Jay...lyrics didn't seem to match Tony's direction of the track...But, then the hook sounds like it ties it in

anyway...verse was good


Tito...tho ur delivery is nice and ur flow is good, it's predictable and boring now

otherwise, verse was good



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B. Magik 11-18-06 01:06 PM

Tony, I agree with Q..Turn your vocals down a bit bro..Flow and energy are both nice..Hook comes in, layered really well, sounds pretty professional..I'm def feeling it..Jay comes in nice, flow is hot. Dude, we really need to hurry up on that collab..Lyrics are hot. Hook comes back again, and guess what? It's still dope. Tito..haha, you come in really nice, energy is killin' it. Lyrics from everyone were really on point.

GOOD SHIT BITCHES

Return the fucking favor on "Bang With Me" or I'll put a bomb in your breakfast.

Implicit 11-18-06 03:17 PM

never listened to OYD before..so this should be interesting..

beat is real nice..

first verse is too loud..lyrics nothing special. flow gets kinda boring though cause it sounds the same throughout..

hook is done very well..

second verse comes in nice. i like how you came in with that.. i like that backup line to zeta..not feelin the whole thing..some lines sound kinda corny at the end..that breast line was pretty cool

hook comes back sounds good..except turn that dudes voice down a little..

tito comes in with some funny stuff.."i aint ready for babies"..i like how you came with the flow..lyrics are decent..



overall this was a cool collab. good quality so its easier to listen to and more enjoyable..there wasnt really anything that stood out but it was good.



RTF IN MY SIG

BigTony.Self 11-18-06 11:55 PM

yea thats the bigtonyself singing in the backround of the hook the hook was all me came out pretty well the versewas more or less working with my libs tho

Jay Rose 11-19-06 05:15 PM

up up up.......

Speats 11-19-06 05:21 PM

I was wishing for one of my beats:( lol joke, anyway first verse is dope as fuck, love the echo you did with your adlib, lyrics are cool, hook is pretty cool, reminds me of a french artist, id put your high pitch voice behind a lil louder, second verse is pretty cool, maybe uppin your volume? lol anyway, flow is not bad not bad and lyrics are alright, like your voice alot, adlibs are pretty dope, now for third verse...lol funny how you start, gotta original in a way, flow is not bad too,alot of energie in your voice tito pretty dope, IMO you have the best verse in the song, like the hook once again, good track, Reppin OYD :thumbup:

8.8/10

Speats

Jay Rose 11-20-06 11:13 PM

uppin this "one" just "one" more time.....well maybe more but leave feed fuckers

BigTony.Self 11-21-06 11:04 AM

snoooooooooooooooooooooozzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz zzzzz

BigTony.Self 11-22-06 12:11 AM

werd up re rey u gotta git down with theesesese collabs

TitoBronsky 12-01-06 04:57 PM

to the top wit this banger one time



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