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11-17-06, 03:58 PM | #1 | |||||||
El Padrino
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The One.... NEW OYD... **Tony.Self/286/Bronsky***
IP: 90A6 BE8B
The One
Beat: Tony's vault Verse 1: Tony hook: Tony.Self Verse 2: 286 hook: Tony.Self Verse 3: TitoBronsky Concept: This track is pretty much a lil story tellin jump off... 3 diff sides of the same coin... on some ill shit... Enjoi yall Links : http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=237065 ^^^^ Spul ... "King Me"^^^^^^^ http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=237216 ^^^^ Team One.... "So Today"^^^^^^ -Don Tito Bronsky
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11-18-06, 12:49 AM | #2 | ||||
I don't lose
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IP: 7994 4630
word tito ive been waiting for this song to be finished love every second of it....you killed that third verse man, tony killed the first.....really hot track...
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11-18-06, 09:42 AM | #3 | |||||||
I'm Talented.Period.
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IP: 40C2 F668
tony's vocals were a touch too loud
delivery and flow were on point tho hook sounded pretty nice...did anyone here do the singin in the background? Jay...lyrics didn't seem to match Tony's direction of the track...But, then the hook sounds like it ties it in anyway...verse was good Tito...tho ur delivery is nice and ur flow is good, it's predictable and boring now otherwise, verse was good 1 |
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11-18-06, 01:06 PM | #4 | ||||
Sam Dope
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IP: 7BAB 1CDD
Tony, I agree with Q..Turn your vocals down a bit bro..Flow and energy are both nice..Hook comes in, layered really well, sounds pretty professional..I'm def feeling it..Jay comes in nice, flow is hot. Dude, we really need to hurry up on that collab..Lyrics are hot. Hook comes back again, and guess what? It's still dope. Tito..haha, you come in really nice, energy is killin' it. Lyrics from everyone were really on point.
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11-18-06, 03:17 PM | #5 | |||
-BTR-
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IP: FD80 6DB5
never listened to OYD before..so this should be interesting..
beat is real nice.. first verse is too loud..lyrics nothing special. flow gets kinda boring though cause it sounds the same throughout.. hook is done very well.. second verse comes in nice. i like how you came in with that.. i like that backup line to zeta..not feelin the whole thing..some lines sound kinda corny at the end..that breast line was pretty cool hook comes back sounds good..except turn that dudes voice down a little.. tito comes in with some funny stuff.."i aint ready for babies"..i like how you came with the flow..lyrics are decent.. overall this was a cool collab. good quality so its easier to listen to and more enjoyable..there wasnt really anything that stood out but it was good. RTF IN MY SIG |
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11-18-06, 11:55 PM | #6 | ||||||
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IP: 6BD7 BD9F
yea thats the bigtonyself singing in the backround of the hook the hook was all me came out pretty well the versewas more or less working with my libs tho
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11-19-06, 05:15 PM | #7 | ||||
I don't lose
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IP: 7994 4630
up up up.......
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything so i took my old man's advice three sad semesters it was only fifteen grand spent in bed i thought about the army i dropped out and joined a band instead |
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11-19-06, 05:21 PM | #8 | ||||
Hell yeah
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IP: A589 93DA
I was wishing for one of my beats lol joke, anyway first verse is dope as fuck, love the echo you did with your adlib, lyrics are cool, hook is pretty cool, reminds me of a french artist, id put your high pitch voice behind a lil louder, second verse is pretty cool, maybe uppin your volume? lol anyway, flow is not bad not bad and lyrics are alright, like your voice alot, adlibs are pretty dope, now for third verse...lol funny how you start, gotta original in a way, flow is not bad too,alot of energie in your voice tito pretty dope, IMO you have the best verse in the song, like the hook once again, good track, Reppin OYD
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11-20-06, 11:13 PM | #9 | ||||
I don't lose
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IP: 7994 4630
uppin this "one" just "one" more time.....well maybe more but leave feed fuckers
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything so i took my old man's advice three sad semesters it was only fifteen grand spent in bed i thought about the army i dropped out and joined a band instead |
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11-21-06, 11:04 AM | #10 | ||||||
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IP: 6BD7 BD9F
snoooooooooooooooooooooozzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz zzzzz
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11-22-06, 12:11 AM | #12 | ||||||
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IP: 6BD7 BD9F
werd up re rey u gotta git down with theesesese collabs
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12-01-06, 04:57 PM | #13 | |||||||
El Padrino
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IP: 90A6 BE8B
to the top wit this banger one time
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