RapVerse.com Community
 Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End RV Radio  

Go Back   RapVerse.com Community > Fresh From The Lab > New Release Songs
User Name
Password
FAQ Calendar Search Today's Posts Mark Forums Read

Reply
 
Thread Tools Search this Thread Display Modes
Old 11-17-06, 03:58 PM   #1
TitoBronsky
El Padrino
 
TitoBronsky's Avatar
 
Posts: 3,906
Joined: Sep 2004
From: Rotten Apple
Status: Offline
Text Record: 3-0
Audio Record: 1-0
Graphics Record: 0-0
The One.... NEW OYD... **Tony.Self/286/Bronsky***

IP: 90A6 BE8B

The One

Beat: Tony's vault
Verse 1: Tony
hook: Tony.Self
Verse 2: 286
hook: Tony.Self
Verse 3: TitoBronsky


Concept: This track is pretty much a lil story tellin jump off... 3 diff sides of the same coin... on some ill shit...

Enjoi yall


Links :
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=237065
^^^^ Spul ... "King Me"^^^^^^^
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=237216
^^^^ Team One.... "So Today"^^^^^^




-Don Tito Bronsky
__________________


Full Metal Bronsky Dropin 1st Quarter 08'






Send a message via AIM to TitoBronsky Send a message via Yahoo to TitoBronsky   Reply With Quote
Old 11-18-06, 12:49 AM   #2
Jay Rose
I don't lose
 
Posts: 1,686
Joined: Feb 2006
Status: Offline
Audio Record: 7-1
IP: 7994 4630

word tito ive been waiting for this song to be finished love every second of it....you killed that third verse man, tony killed the first.....really hot track...
__________________



well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high
and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything
so i took my old man's advice
three sad semesters
it was only fifteen grand spent in bed
i thought about the army
i dropped out and joined a band instead


  Reply With Quote
Old 11-18-06, 09:42 AM   #3
Tha .Q
I'm Talented.Period.
 
Tha .Q's Avatar
 
Posts: 4,891
Joined: Jun 2006
From: MD
Status: Offline
Text Record: 0-0
Audio Record: 0-0
Graphics Record: 0-0
IP: 40C2 F668

tony's vocals were a touch too loud


delivery and flow were on point tho

hook

sounded pretty nice...did anyone here do the singin in the background?


Jay...lyrics didn't seem to match Tony's direction of the track...But, then the hook sounds like it ties it in

anyway...verse was good


Tito...tho ur delivery is nice and ur flow is good, it's predictable and boring now

otherwise, verse was good



1
Send a message via AIM to Tha .Q   Reply With Quote
Old 11-18-06, 01:06 PM   #4
B. Magik
Sam Dope
 
Posts: 3,499
Joined: Nov 2004
From: STL
Status: Offline
IP: 7BAB 1CDD

Tony, I agree with Q..Turn your vocals down a bit bro..Flow and energy are both nice..Hook comes in, layered really well, sounds pretty professional..I'm def feeling it..Jay comes in nice, flow is hot. Dude, we really need to hurry up on that collab..Lyrics are hot. Hook comes back again, and guess what? It's still dope. Tito..haha, you come in really nice, energy is killin' it. Lyrics from everyone were really on point.

GOOD SHIT BITCHES

Return the fucking favor on "Bang With Me" or I'll put a bomb in your breakfast.
__________________
B.M.B. Productions


CHECK THE FUCKING BEATS.

Send a message via AIM to B. Magik Send a message via MSN to B. Magik Send a message via Yahoo to B. Magik   Reply With Quote
Old 11-18-06, 03:17 PM   #5
Implicit
-BTR-
 
Posts: 2,653
Joined: Jul 2004
Status: Offline
IP: FD80 6DB5

never listened to OYD before..so this should be interesting..

beat is real nice..

first verse is too loud..lyrics nothing special. flow gets kinda boring though cause it sounds the same throughout..

hook is done very well..

second verse comes in nice. i like how you came in with that.. i like that backup line to zeta..not feelin the whole thing..some lines sound kinda corny at the end..that breast line was pretty cool

hook comes back sounds good..except turn that dudes voice down a little..

tito comes in with some funny stuff.."i aint ready for babies"..i like how you came with the flow..lyrics are decent..



overall this was a cool collab. good quality so its easier to listen to and more enjoyable..there wasnt really anything that stood out but it was good.



RTF IN MY SIG
  Reply With Quote
Old 11-18-06, 11:55 PM   #6
BigTony.Self
.................
 
BigTony.Self's Avatar
 
Posts: 2,482
Joined: Apr 2004
Status: Offline
Text Record: 13-4
Audio Record: 2-1
Graphics Record: 0-0
IP: 6BD7 BD9F

yea thats the bigtonyself singing in the backround of the hook the hook was all me came out pretty well the versewas more or less working with my libs tho
__________________


Bringing back the oldschool hiphop
  Reply With Quote
Old 11-19-06, 05:15 PM   #7
Jay Rose
I don't lose
 
Posts: 1,686
Joined: Feb 2006
Status: Offline
Audio Record: 7-1
IP: 7994 4630

up up up.......
__________________



well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high
and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything
so i took my old man's advice
three sad semesters
it was only fifteen grand spent in bed
i thought about the army
i dropped out and joined a band instead


  Reply With Quote
Old 11-19-06, 05:21 PM   #8
Speats
Hell yeah
 
Speats's Avatar
 
Posts: 4,248
Joined: Sep 2004
Status: Offline
Text Record: 10-8
IP: A589 93DA

I was wishing for one of my beats lol joke, anyway first verse is dope as fuck, love the echo you did with your adlib, lyrics are cool, hook is pretty cool, reminds me of a french artist, id put your high pitch voice behind a lil louder, second verse is pretty cool, maybe uppin your volume? lol anyway, flow is not bad not bad and lyrics are alright, like your voice alot, adlibs are pretty dope, now for third verse...lol funny how you start, gotta original in a way, flow is not bad too,alot of energie in your voice tito pretty dope, IMO you have the best verse in the song, like the hook once again, good track, Reppin OYD

8.8/10

Speats
Send a message via AIM to Speats Send a message via MSN to Speats   Reply With Quote
Old 11-20-06, 11:13 PM   #9
Jay Rose
I don't lose
 
Posts: 1,686
Joined: Feb 2006
Status: Offline
Audio Record: 7-1
IP: 7994 4630

uppin this "one" just "one" more time.....well maybe more but leave feed fuckers
__________________



well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high
and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything
so i took my old man's advice
three sad semesters
it was only fifteen grand spent in bed
i thought about the army
i dropped out and joined a band instead


  Reply With Quote
Old 11-21-06, 11:04 AM   #10
BigTony.Self
.................
 
BigTony.Self's Avatar
 
Posts: 2,482
Joined: Apr 2004
Status: Offline
Text Record: 13-4
Audio Record: 2-1
Graphics Record: 0-0
IP: 6BD7 BD9F

snoooooooooooooooooooooozzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz zzzzz
__________________


Bringing back the oldschool hiphop
  Reply With Quote
Old 11-22-06, 12:11 AM   #12
BigTony.Self
.................
 
BigTony.Self's Avatar
 
Posts: 2,482
Joined: Apr 2004
Status: Offline
Text Record: 13-4
Audio Record: 2-1
Graphics Record: 0-0
IP: 6BD7 BD9F

werd up re rey u gotta git down with theesesese collabs
__________________


Bringing back the oldschool hiphop
  Reply With Quote
Old 12-01-06, 04:57 PM   #13
TitoBronsky
El Padrino
 
TitoBronsky's Avatar
 
Posts: 3,906
Joined: Sep 2004
From: Rotten Apple
Status: Offline
Text Record: 3-0
Audio Record: 1-0
Graphics Record: 0-0
IP: 90A6 BE8B

to the top wit this banger one time



:UP:
__________________


Full Metal Bronsky Dropin 1st Quarter 08'






Send a message via AIM to TitoBronsky Send a message via Yahoo to TitoBronsky   Reply With Quote
Reply


Thread Tools Search this Thread
Search this Thread:

Advanced Search
Display Modes

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

vB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off
Forum Jump



All times are GMT -4. The time now is 11:38 AM.

Powered by vBulletin.
Copyright © 2000-2004 Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.