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Forum: Lyricist Lounge 09-06-04, 02:08 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 393
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Forum: Lyricist Lounge 09-06-04, 02:01 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 393
Posted By Topic
and that made you gay? wow thats cool

and that made you gay? wow thats cool
Forum: Lyricist Lounge 09-06-04, 01:54 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 393
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This is indeed a bitch site Spamming...

This is indeed a bitch site
Spamming sites...stupid net gangstsers. and nightshade, why are you here and not on a decent site, you used to be good. What happend?
Forum: Lyricist Lounge 09-06-04, 01:51 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 393
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Whats up???

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Forum: Textual Releases 02-17-04, 08:54 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 688
Posted By Topic
thanx for the feedback...lets get a little bit...

thanx for the feedback...lets get a little bit more...tell me how to improve
Forum: Textual Releases 02-17-04, 04:58 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 688
Posted By Topic
thanx man

thanx man
Forum: Textual Releases 02-17-04, 04:13 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 688
Posted By Topic
why is this getting slept on again....upp this

why is this getting slept on again....upp this
Forum: Textual Releases 02-17-04, 03:58 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 679
Posted By Topic
nice peice....good vocab and discriptive of the...

nice peice....good vocab and discriptive of the pheonix....a topic like this was just used not to long ago tho....well good work man....
hit my peice...
Forum: Textual Releases 02-17-04, 03:48 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 522
Posted By Topic
good peice man...agree wit dev on most aspects of...

good peice man...agree wit dev on most aspects of your writing in this peice. Your vocab could have used help but all in all decent drop...keep writing and sooner or later ull be out of writers...
Forum: Textual Releases 02-17-04, 07:17 AM
Replies: 14
Views: 688
Posted By Topic
ok man ill check it out...thanx

ok man ill check it out...thanx
Forum: Textual Releases 02-16-04, 09:54 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 388
Posted By Topic
hmmmm...not so sure about this peice...lines...

hmmmm...not so sure about this peice...lines seemed short...and it was short. I didnt find a meaning to this peice. You had some good wordplay throuhout this peice and the idea was allright. Decent...
Forum: Textual Releases 02-16-04, 09:51 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 472
Posted By Topic
very nice peice...shows good story telling...

very nice peice...shows good story telling abuility...work on vocab tho...some of the vocab you did use didnt seem like it was fitted well...or just poorly used...good story tho...kinda wants to make...
Forum: Textual Releases 02-16-04, 09:47 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 377
Posted By Topic
wow this was a weird peice...im not even sure if...

wow this was a weird peice...im not even sure if it was good or bad to tell ya the truth never read anything like that...i must admit your original. Well you can improve but blah...i cant say much on...
Forum: Textual Releases 02-16-04, 09:44 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 553
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fairly good peice...didnt appeal to me as much as...

fairly good peice...didnt appeal to me as much as some but worth a read. Like pen said you have good vocab and u use it well. Flow was on key nothing great tho. I like alot of your lines...like the...
Forum: Textual Releases 02-16-04, 09:37 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 688
Posted By Topic
uppin for feedback

uppin for feedback
Forum: Textual Releases 02-16-04, 03:43 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 688
Posted By Topic
thanx man

thanx man
Forum: Textual Releases 02-16-04, 03:23 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 688
Posted By Topic
i couldnt get the ending to come out...

i couldnt get the ending to come out perfectly...sorry
Forum: Textual Releases 02-16-04, 03:19 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 688
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CV- I exist...

I exist...

blue - Boy
Red - grandpa

What to grip...other then the image of my divine fibs
Going through a shape shift...like a vortex on fine tips
Reading through my old transpripts...thinking "do...
Forum: Textual Releases 02-16-04, 01:07 PM
Replies: 23
Views: 751
Posted By Topic
wow....i read another one of your frickin...

wow....i read another one of your frickin essays...its kinda like eating candy corn in the sence your like hey look pen dropped again lets see it then bam you see how long it is but you cant stop...
Forum: Sacred Scriptures 02-13-04, 07:13 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 2,493
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Background We met in a bar…got together and in...

Background

We met in a bar…got together and in one night I actually went to far
Biting at my knuckles…fulfilling my fantasies in the back of her car
She was a straight freak…when it came to...
Forum: Textual Releases 02-11-04, 08:29 PM
Replies: 18
Views: 374
Posted By Topic
i must have missed something....What did we do to...

i must have missed something....What did we do to get dissed? this is weird. We arent a battling crew anyways. well this was an allright diss i couldnt cath the flow either.. had some nice puches as...
Forum: Sacred Scriptures 02-11-04, 08:02 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 2,493
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im here...when i first read the topic i though it...

im here...when i first read the topic i though it read loose friends..I dont wanna make fun of my loose friends..I stay away from hoes but then i read again and it read loose ends lol thats cool i...
Forum: Textual Releases 02-10-04, 08:05 PM
Replies: 24
Views: 429
Posted By Topic
well now what can i say after all the positive...

well now what can i say after all the positive replys and breakdowns, youve allready hurd basicly everything there is to tell you on account this peice was amazing. What a way to end the epic loved...
Forum: Textual Releases 02-07-04, 04:35 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 223
Posted By Topic
thanx guys uppin

thanx guys uppin
Forum: Lyricist Lounge 02-06-04, 06:07 PM
Replies: 33
Views: 567
Posted By Topic
we had it here about a year ago...remember...it...

we had it here about a year ago...remember...it sucked balls, well it did here. it was like a knockoff of survivor...it may be better in europe i guess or whereever its from
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