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Forum: Textual Releases 09-03-08, 04:36 PM |
Replies: 9
Views: 1,462
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Scanz it's good to see you still writing, you...
Scanz it's good to see you still writing, you have improved at lot since I was last on. my world unique, man i wish i was there. as my finger tips glide across this keyboards stare. this keyboards... |
Forum: Textual Releases 09-03-08, 04:32 PM |
Replies: 10
Views: 2,284
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I agree with In-Vision you need to add more...
I agree with In-Vision you need to add more multis and you rhyming seemed forced at times.. I didn't think it was a bad verse nice drop. |
Forum: Lyricist Lounge 10-19-07, 05:55 PM |
Replies: 23
Views: 587
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I have a six month old some called Ashton, I...
I have a six month old some called Ashton, I don't need anymore one will do. |
Forum: Lyricist Lounge 04-15-07, 06:31 AM |
Replies: 26
Views: 812
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It's only gay coz you're shit at it!!! and...
It's only gay coz you're shit at it!!! and besides what the fucks soccer its clearly called football. |
Forum: Lyricist Lounge 03-15-07, 08:25 AM |
Replies: 8
Views: 391
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I saw them in concert last summer, they have some...
I saw them in concert last summer, they have some decent songs but you need to be high to listen to them. |
Forum: Textual Releases 03-14-07, 09:01 AM |
Replies: 10
Views: 915
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What's good scanz,.. this was a decent drop,......
What's good scanz,.. this was a decent drop,... decent flow,. alright vocab liking the way your getting more complex with your wordplay. Keep writing fams and stay up,. I'm gonna drop something... |
Forum: Textual Releases 03-14-07, 08:53 AM |
Replies: 4
Views: 566
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This was alright decent drop,... need to work on...
This was alright decent drop,... need to work on a few things, elevate you mind. Stay up |
Forum: Textual Releases 03-14-07, 08:48 AM |
Replies: 7
Views: 848
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That was so bad my eye's hurt !!! you didn't have...
That was so bad my eye's hurt !!! you didn't have anything that showed a little bit of potential... Your rhyming is weak, lines are weak and played,.. it was just boring I see why you call... |
Forum: Textual Releases 02-23-07, 01:16 PM |
Replies: 7
Views: 676
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It was ok,........ bit boring and played,......
It was ok,........ bit boring and played,... still writing the same way as last year haven't evevated like I thought you would. Flow was alright but basic,... no real vocab,.... topic too... |
Forum: Textual Releases 02-23-07, 01:08 PM |
Replies: 20
Views: 2,283
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We’re all aliens and this is just one of many...
We’re all aliens and this is just one of many stations Religion was invented to stop the population questioning creations But fossils made it possible to see the ancients The last of a dying breed,... |
Forum: Textual Releases 02-23-07, 08:59 AM |
Replies: 3
Views: 572
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Look:
i look at it's powdery presence on the...
Look: i look at it's powdery presence on the table/ one line then another this shits making me unstable/ ============================================ Dazed at it's powdery substance alluring from... |
Forum: Textual Releases 02-23-07, 08:33 AM |
Replies: 3
Views: 572
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Just coz he's new to RV don't mean he's new to...
Just coz he's new to RV don't mean he's new to the game! It was alright I guess,.... everything rhymed,... u had basic flow, basic vocab and the subject's played. Other then that it was ok! |
Forum: Lyricist Lounge 01-25-07, 03:27 AM |
Replies: 56
Views: 1,101
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I have been with my wifey for 9 years and 1...
I have been with my wifey for 9 years and 1 month!!!! been married for 4 years in July. |
Forum: Lyricist Lounge 01-24-07, 07:28 AM |
Replies: 19
Views: 420
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Like Tech would say money or the message!!! what...
Like Tech would say money or the message!!! what do you have^ Fuck Ja I can't stand him but let him do his thing. 1~ |
Forum: Lyricist Lounge 01-22-07, 08:09 AM |
Replies: 17
Views: 709
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The most popular sport in the world is ass!!!!!...
The most popular sport in the world is ass!!!!! lol OK.... Adu may have more skills then Beckham, which isn't that hard btw considering that isn't part of his game, but you wouldn't understand... |
Forum: Lyricist Lounge 01-22-07, 07:44 AM |
Replies: 12
Views: 355
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Like u said you don't find big men attractive so...
Like u said you don't find big men attractive so why should you lower your standards to get with a fat girl!! That could turn you off women completely. Tell em she's not your type simple as, look... |
Forum: Closed Threads 01-16-07, 07:48 AM |
Replies: 2
Views: 984
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Yeah it's alright a bit predictable,... could...
Yeah it's alright a bit predictable,... could come a lot doper to be fair!! now how about you go and post feed on some other open mics. C |
Forum: Bitch Slapped 01-16-07, 07:44 AM |
Replies: 1
Views: 301
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Why have you posted in here T!! didn't bother...
Why have you posted in here T!! didn't bother reading this to be fair sorry post it in Open Mic. |
Forum: Lyricist Lounge 01-16-07, 07:35 AM |
Replies: 4
Views: 323
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Forum: Lyricist Lounge 01-16-07, 07:25 AM |
Replies: 15
Views: 473
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I thought one of the reasons why the US & UK...
I thought one of the reasons why the US & UK invaded Iraq was to stop breaches of humanity such as hanging… but you know Bush ordered the puppets to do the dirty work. |
Forum: Lyricist Lounge 01-15-07, 07:52 AM |
Replies: 17
Views: 628
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Pop Idol, not a big fan of 24, I watch all the...
Pop Idol, not a big fan of 24, I watch all the shit people and lose interest when the comp hots up! |
Forum: Textual Releases 12-29-06, 05:46 PM |
Replies: 10
Views: 1,248
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I want to stab my eyeballs out with a blunt...
I want to stab my eyeballs out with a blunt knife. :( |
Forum: Lyricist Lounge 12-12-06, 07:32 AM |
Replies: 24
Views: 446
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In London mainly the gay clubs they take GHB...
In London mainly the gay clubs they take GHB & mix it with another durg for fun. But recently a couple of people have died due to this so I wouldn't advise taking that shit for fun. This is true... |
Forum: Crews n' Collaborations 10-19-06, 08:58 AM |
Replies: 7
Views: 696
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^thats what I was thinking !!!
He's 14 with his...
^thats what I was thinking !!! He's 14 with his own cadalac, escalade with velvet intetior & 24 inch rims !! |
Forum: Crews n' Collaborations 10-19-06, 07:37 AM |
Replies: 488
Views: 11,524
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I say yes to Cocaine ! No to Poetic !
We are...
I say yes to Cocaine ! No to Poetic ! We are inactive right now, so I guess u will join for a day and decided to leave again sorry your just wasting your our time trying out for A.I. now. |
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