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10-17-04, 02:33 AM
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howdy
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This was feedback posted for Empire
IP: C38B B51C
checking votes for the EFL voting game...
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=155573
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10-17-04, 09:28 PM
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In ya area.
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IP: 7A3E F05A
Voted For: Empire
Ok, I'm not gonna waste my time breakin' it down because Infector's lines were hella stretched and I know you kids don't like reading long posts. Infecotr, that's your main flaw, so work on shortening your lines down. Other than that you had some good multis, but your punches were lacking. But that can only be improved by elevation so I won't hate. Empire your lines were a little stretched too but not too much. You came with hella mutlis and had some pretty good punches in there too. I was feelin' the "crossed out" line too, that was the highlight in my opinion. So yeah, Infector you just need some elevatin' and I ain't tryin' to hate but it word... V//Empire Return the vote to a link in my sig, honest explained votes only...
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10-18-04, 08:58 PM
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Umm...Yeah
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This was feedback posted for Empire
IP: 5043 32F4
we in same crew...and i want free money what a coincidence!
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10-22-04, 08:55 PM
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Bonecrushing Nigga
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IP: 98C0 39B0
Voted For: Empire
you actually showed a good verse.... nice shit.. you won bcuz you had a way stronger verse though ya punches were nto as good but still killled that other guy Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.
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