Battle Rules:

6 - 12 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting


Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 12-07-04 at 02:51 PM

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King~~Dipset has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-05-04 12:29 AM.

Untraceable has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-05-04 09:30 AM.

Aii Check Dis

Ayo I Never Stop Risin Like Im An Elevator
N escalata'z ,When U Get 2 hell Satan'll Say "I Missed you hataz"

Ill leave you Witout A Trace So you can Really B Untraceable
put A "Cape" on Yo Bac and you Still Wouldnt Be Capable

U The King of Dick Rydas so You Love Masturbations
Let Yall Niggas N da Church so Yall Can CUM to your revelation

I snap on mo Niggas than A Polariod Camera
U New to RV thats Why Your verse Is So ameteur

U Cant Hang wit My Flow if we Were Salmons on A waterfall
Call yo Wack Ass Vrew So I Can Slaughter Yall

Battle me? Why waiste my Gat When U Can Face the Bat
U Wack......Ill Put a Mirror on Ya verse So U Can face The Facts

Good Luck

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Voted For: Untraceable

aiyo u get mu vote cuz u had nice structure....har hitting personals a few kew multi's but u closed MAD soft kid work on
that as for dipset only had one goodline decent structure but
waz very poorly written not hard ur more personal as untacable.....vote-untracable

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Voted For: Untraceable

i voted for him because he came more creative and had abetter flow and structure.he used concepts that arent used much which is a plus. king dipset had a good flow but i wasnt feelin the structure and how u space it out like that,and u came played in some lines but other lines u had some decent shit.what king lacked was direct punches and personals.he was selfglorifying a couple times which isnt good to do cuz why would u talk about how good u are or what u will do when that wouldnt really effect untracable or have those punches stuck to his head or anything.well no hate but thats my vote.....

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Voted For: King~~Dipset

This battle goes to King Dipset for a sik verse. You had a whole rack of tight punches. And a lot of elevation. you came harder than the other Untraceable so you deserve this one. Untraceable you came ok. you needed to get on Kings name more. Ad your punches needed to be harder. This was agood battle. Great job both MC's



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yeh wow tha was a wonderful job of dickriding king~dipset......if you read my verse you woulda seen al the personals and this line....

retarted? na u just mistaken cuz my minds just sofa-king departed
darted down the hall cuz this 14 year old freshman gets bullied on

the sofa-king was play on his name idiot and a king has a throne.....do dethroning....mayb you should think before you dickride next time.......

w/e uppin this shit....

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Voted For: King~~Dipset

This was an overall good batle but im goin to have to give this one to ..........
I really like the flow to both verses
there was a nice touch to UNTRACABLE flow but it still could have been a little better with the wordplay, Nice sructure to both verses, K~~D had some GREAT line too
i really liked his flow but ur metas werent visible but punchlines were sick
nice battle


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