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Old 12-29-04, 01:53 AM   #16
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Old 12-29-04, 07:14 PM   #17
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Old 12-31-04, 02:16 AM   #18
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Old 12-31-04, 01:43 PM   #19
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Voted For: J~FOUR

vote for J~Four
vocab=j~four
punches=j-four
metas=j~four
overall this was a land slide battle
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Ya think you gonna win? must be the coke-you-snortin
Cause, I stay "killen legends" like ~Randy Orton~
Important, when your crew is you.. the-whole-portion
Cause I'm "killing New Breed" like a ~species-abortion~
Ya mind-distortin', leavin ya "thoughts all mangled"
Cause My "punches more direct" than ~T.V. Cable~
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Originally Posted by 5MICMEDALLION
Yo prophecy you did your thing hommie i give it a 10/10
because i actually read the whole thing,,an you got nice punches
an the word play doing big things too,,,,
yo i cant hate on you,,,,,nice drop 1


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Damn yo that shit was ruff it was captivating
good story telling skills keep it up
that shit was a 10/10
 
Old 12-31-04, 02:17 PM   #20
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Old 01-01-05, 09:11 AM   #21
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Old 01-02-05, 04:10 PM   #22
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Old 01-28-05, 05:59 PM   #23
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Legend
Vocabulary Was Decent, Had Some Nice Punches That I Enjoyed, Structure Was Neat,What Was A Down Fall Was Multi's You Could Use A Little Of That, And Throw In Some Meta's..But OverAll Nice Verse Man....8/10

Four
Wow You Had Good Punches And Ish But Your Vocabulary Was Plain Old Basic And You Had No Rhyme Scheme Not multi's Nor Meta's Personals Was Good But Could Of Done A Better Job On That

Structure=Tie
Vocabulary=Legend
Meta's=Legend
Multi's=None
Punches=Tie

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Old 01-30-05, 03:21 AM   #24
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Old 01-31-05, 06:03 PM   #25
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Old 02-01-05, 06:08 PM   #26
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Old 02-02-05, 12:22 AM   #27
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Legend
structure is good.. flow is on target.. u had a few multis.. wordplay was pretty good.. a few of ur punches connected.. no good personals..

J~Four
structure is good.. flow is on target.. a lot of multis.. wordplay was dope.. some of ur punches connected.. good personal..

Overall
both had a good structure and flow.. J~Four had more multis.. better wordplay.. more connecting punches.. and a better personal.. so basing off of that.. J~Four gets my vote..

VOTE - J~FOUR

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Old 02-02-05, 06:42 PM   #28
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Old 02-02-05, 06:42 PM   #29
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Old 02-03-05, 05:44 PM   #30
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Voted For: Legend

word ur shyt was better by a bit Jfour had better structure and flow but u had better punches ad vocabulary.....so i say u get this by a bit....

legend word of advice...shorten ur lines mayn its beginning to look ugly as heyll LOL. word...and do u take time to colour each line black and grey? lol

J Four: good structure but the rest was blah.....ur punches was aiight and personals was decent

vote: legend

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