Voted For: J~FOUR

Your shit was ok. U shouldve explained ur rymes after the verse. it would sounded 10x better that way. Ur flow was good and u kept direct wit ur punches. metaphores werent all that but It was ok. ok word play.
punch. j4
meta.j4
flow. j4
word. J4
overall verse j4

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Voted For: J~FOUR

this was a very close battle but in the end J~Four got this simply becouse his metas were so nice i liked that Randy Orton Legend Killer Line keep doin ya thang both of ya

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Voted For: J~FOUR

ok legend punches were weak and disswes too you really need to work on those flow and struture was good vocab also pretty decent too but your weak punches and disses hurt you bad practice those.
j four good flow very good and struture also nice punches and disses won you this they were dope cuz the flow helped thm as well as good personals here too which was nice also won you this hands down

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Voted For: Legend

legend got this his personals were better his flow hit harder punches were nice everything was jus a step better than j-four but either way good shit both of ya jus go get ur shit critiqued it will help alot good shit
legends favorite lines:
You the Champion of being whack without having to snatch the belt
Not that active but you social bitch just like Miss Roosevelt
I'm off the hook little fishy. You lost in my ocean just like Nemo
my votes get approved and your just stay gets alot of being veto’d
return tha favor on batlle vs top spit
thx

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Voted For: J~FOUR

Legend you came as if u werent focused in this battle
you need 2 work on your punches alot more kid
ive seen some of your other battles and dont focus
so much on havein diff colored barz...focus on ya punches
ya similies werent there.ya wordplay was basic
ya setup and delivery were basic..i understood wha u was tryin
2 say but u could of came alot more edgy and direct...work on ya metas and multis..and setting up a punch...jus dont use words 2 fill in or 2 rhyme with

Four
this is the 1st drop ive seen from u son..let me state
dont worry bout all those dashes and bold letters and shit
that dont mean nuttin ..jus drop ya bars and get tha shit ova
this was an ok drop..u won in my eyes wit ya punches
some were kinda played but there were aight
ya opener and middle was good but ya closer was pure garbage
could of been re worded..work on ya set ups and delivery and metas and multies

overall aight battle boyz..but i wanna see better next time

*Nuff Said*

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Voted For: J~FOUR

While ya squeeze dicks for cum emcees is who I’m stranglin
While my rhymes give ya a shock like the kite and Ben Franklin
decent punch…
You the Champion of being whack without having to snatch the belt
Not that active but you social bitch just like Miss Roosevelt
didn’t understand this punch here
I'm off the hook little fishy. You lost in my ocean just like Nemo
my votes get approved and your just stay gets alot of being veto’d
no
man admit it you are wack. You’ll never fit in not even here
You suck dick for four and we all can see that is so clear
pretty decent punch
Your life is history goin against me nigka. Don't be so afraid
I mean they're are some verses in this world that are even more played
decent closer

Ya think you gonna win? must be the coke-you-snortin
Cause, I stay "killen legends" like ~Randy Orton~
no
Important, when your crew is you.. the-whole-portion
Cause I'm "killing New Breed" like a ~species-abortion~
pretty decent punch, it landed here
Ya mind-distortin', leavin ya "thoughts all mangled"
Cause My "punches more direct" than ~T.V. Cable~
kinda don’t rhyme but decent anyway
Legend, You Got "Disabled flow" Like "Amputated Dicks"
Cause i always "take out the trash".. them ~overatted pricks~
good closer

Overall both had good drops
Punches – J~FOUR took them…came way harder wit them
Flow – both had good flows, none was choppy
Structure – both had good structures…both in place and not stretched

But overall J~FOUR came harder in this piece though just by a hair…

No hate

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Voted For: J~FOUR

punches - j4
persnals - j4
struck - j4 (legend ur lines were streched as fuck)
mutis - none
metals - none

j4 came hard with punches and persnals close battle but he get my vote.............legend u was ok not as hard coming though both keep elevating.............

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