Battle Rules:

10 liner
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-31-05 at 05:55 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

modollaz has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-29-05 12:24 AM.

To be honest, i dont think your punches are wack in the least
but all the ones you stole and used in this battle are weak
I'm starting to regret this more and more with each bar
Cause my momma always told me not to be mean to retards
You proved to everyone, you know the true meaning of text head
Cause you get votes by givin faggots practical cyber sex ed
Kriz is starting to make it obvious that his ass is jelous
the only time kriz'd be over me is if my name was zealous
You typed your verse on your computer, you dont need no pens yet
So tell us all the real reason you've been to penisland.net (penis-land/pen-island)


if you dont get any of the punches dont vote...

KriZ has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-30-05 04:03 AM.

This fucker trying to claim he got modollaz/
And thinks he fly in pink n white shirts wit collaz/
But he not, just looks like a faggot wearin trousas/
Better back the fuck off cuz im performin the massacre/
and gonna have his motha fuckin head cut off, now that slaughter/
Gotta come at me cuz ya shit is weak gotta try harder/
This shit gonna impail you through your fuckin blatter/
Kid ya say ya got dollaz but i aint even see ya paycheck/
And wheres the car u claimin ya got, the so called "custom mayback?"

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Voted For: modollaz

I vote for you cause Kriz is a complete twat with no brain.

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

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Voted For: modollaz

dog dis was a good battle; heres da breakdown:
flow-dollaz,kriz dog you don't even have ten lines, but ok
creativty-dollaz
metas-none,at least no good ones
punchlines-dollaz, my fav>"You typed your verse on your computer, you dont need no pens yet
So tell us all the real reason you've been to penisland.net (penis-land/pen-island)"

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you pay da cost tonite,git back
for you catch an attack by da blackfrostbite

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Voted For: modollaz

modollaz: You had quite a lot of punches that didn't really hit in this, yet you were way more creative than KriZ and this helped you a lot.

KriZ: Your verse was really uncreative, it was basically a freestyle where you state how your gonna hurt him or whatever.

v/ modollaz for being more creative.

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

uppin.......................

It only matters if i go over the amount of the lines............ @ blackfrostbite. but w/e. Im not even much of a battler i mostly do this shyt for fun. But ya, gd battle.

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ELEVATE BOTH OF YOU!!!!...Understand this E-L-E-V-A-T-E...NO HATE BUT ELEVATE...CHECKIN POLLLLLLLZZZZZZ

pollz............................................. ....

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Shit this one was Rough, who came out wit E-Nuff
cuz votin on this shit was Tough
even tho Kriz had more Flow,
Modollaz had just a little Mo...
read this battle a few times 2 feel da rhymes
peep the words and feel da punchlines

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modollaz best lines:
I'm starting to regret this more and more with each bar
Cause my momma always told me not to be mean to retards

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KriZ Best Lines:
Kid ya say ya got dollaz but i aint even see ya paycheck/
And wheres the car u claimin ya got, the so called "custom mayback

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peep my shit...

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