Voted For: Skitzo

Bitch be like the shit on my shoe,watch while u get wiped on the floor……
Left LL cuz he didn’t fit da standard, now no1 wants this bitch no more…
ehhhhhh it was aight.... shoulda explained wat LL is, if its Lyricist lounge, the line was weak
Nah forget that, I’ll upgrade you to my shoe, cause you still be underneath…..
Cuz he read the first 2 lines,started doin flips and ‘Skitzed’ found it hard 2 breath……
blah line, u have potential, but right now im not feelin these bars, kinda bland
Ur punches are to soft, will be slippin of me, like im a plate n ur punches r the water…..
Cuz u’ll be S.erverly K.lose to death I.njury T.reatment ZO.ne cuz uve been slaughtered……...
not real good name play in this one......... u tried but didnt suceed at all at doin it well

Skitzo
Your own Blood stains left on you like an old throw back
To know a dude he has to know you everyone knows that
eh....... kinda weak closer, but right now ur even with him
But had to be a fag to just go ahead and point(.) it out
But know one knows you, or what the fuck you’re all about
as weak as his second bar also..... right now this isnt the greatest battle.... first line was better than the second
You fruity fuck, you’re the incarnation of Sponge Bob dude
Cuz hopefully you can absorb at least half the skills when I spit on you
lol...... only funny or decent line i really found in this battle

for that last line u get my vote..... also, Paradox had mad stretched bars while skitzo had a real nice structure in his verse.......

V/skitzo

Voted For: P.aradox

this battle was certainly wack to me.....no hard punches...no multis....vocabulary was basic....I vote P.aradox do to the better diss he made towards the otha emcee....if yall eva battle again go for atleast 10 bars cuz under 8 bar battles are trash ta me cuz dey to quick ta read. Both emcees elevate on sum punches...add a lil wordplay...and basickally try harda cuz diz quick shit people say dey be doin...i aint buyin it...if it aint ya tyme ta rip sum1 it aint ya tyme...dont go around it by sayin u typed ya verse quick.....Skitzo...ya verse was weak....it wasnt really a diss its more like u tawkin to sum1 about him...and in battles i feel u should direct the person u battlen...not tellin da people how wack he is.

V/ Paradox

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Voted For: P.aradox

I'll say one thing, this was a BOLD battle (wordplay hoez)


Bitch be like the shit on my shoe,watch while u get wiped on the floor……
Left LL cuz he didn’t fit da standard, now no1 wants this bitch no more…
5...partial filler, and played concept!!
Nah forget that, I’ll upgrade you to my shoe, cause you still be underneath…..
Cuz he read the first 2 lines,started doin flips and ‘Skitzed’ found it hard 2 breath……
5...not really feelin this, worded wrong!!
Ur punches are to soft, will be slippin of me, like im a plate n ur punches r the water…..
Cuz u’ll be S.erverly K.lose to death I.njury T.reatment ZO.ne cuz uve been slaughtered……...
6...ok, but forced play off his name!!

OVERALL: 16/30


Your own Blood stains left on you like an old throw back
To know a dude he has to know you everyone knows that
4...weak shit, the boldness was pointless
But had to be a fag to just go ahead and point(.) it out
But know one knows you, or what the fuck you’re all about
3...wtf!!! weaker, and played!!
You fruity fuck, you’re the incarnation of Sponge Bob dude
Cuz hopefully you can absorb at least half the skills when I spit on you
6...LoL!! this was pretty funny!!

OVERALL: 12/30

weak battle, both had some played shit in there and sum unnecessary filler, Skitzo was weaker, first 2 bars were pointless filler and only real punch was the closer, paradox, weak punches really and the one ok punch was more of a forced play on his name than a natural one!!!
still, ya came less weak!!!

V/ - P.aradox

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Voted For: P.aradox

aiight decent battle both need to elevate.. especially u skitzo...
paradox - your verse was good, was a little simple and genralised but was good, flowed very well, good vocabulary, your structure was a lil bit off but wasnt bad, and your punches hit overall pretty well... 7.5/10

Skitzo - your verse was ok, it flowed well but went off about half through... punches were aiight and u had a good structure, work on ur vocabulary a bit more... you also need to work on ur creativity a bit more cause ur verse was a bit played... 6/10

opener - S
closer - P
flow - P
punches - tie
structure - S
vocabulary - P
creativity - P
enjoyment - P
punches - P
v/ P no hate just how i saw it....

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Uppin 4 one more vote plz.....................rtf!!!!

Uppin dis shit plz................................