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08-27-05, 07:57 PM | #16 | |||||
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IP: ECB3 36A0
sorry forgot to leave link, please hit this up.
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=206181
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08-27-05, 11:45 PM | #17 | |||||||
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IP: C847 337D
thank all yall for the luv and help^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^in
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C.ghost Im so ghost........ghost........ghost Tri state bandit ,50 state rebel Get soulclapped .............e-style |
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08-28-05, 06:08 AM | #18 | |||||||
I'ma Royal
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IP: 22E5 DE19
lol...they gotta be kidding me....bt lets get some real votes...not newbies........
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08-28-05, 11:56 PM | #19 | |||||||
I'ma Royal
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IP: 22E5 DE19
vote u moffuckas...................................
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08-29-05, 04:55 AM | #20 | ||||
Odi et Amo
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IP: 82A5 4BFD
Voted For: THE NAME
c.ghost This cat cant b seriuos, im bout ta rock this lame C.ghost ripped his whole meaning of rap maybe thas why he got no name ^decent punch with personal touch in last line 7/10 Blow past these niggaz like bulls n pistons stop n listen C.ghost give a new nigga 0-1, like he tryin to copy the "system" ^haha, very true that last line with the system's record...nice... 8/10 Im lyricly inclined,i rip ryhmes,to go against ya shit lines These 44's a come afta ya like Mike vick passes, u ka b the reciever to them ^uhm not really feeling this bar 3/10 Now days catz cheatin to win "The name" aint ready 4 war, he retreatin his men Its not ur turn,not the season to win ^aight closer 5/10 Total: 23/40 = 57% THE NAME shit boy s wack, try to hit me with punches of `` knives for throw ``, don’t scare nigga cause ur lines already looks like uv seen “a ghost”, ^yeh ghost ppl are hard to play their name off but you did decent 7/10 boy get his sould clapped like pulled hearth off your chest, change ur E-style to L-style cause that’s how 50 states rebels. ^nice punches with personal touch 8/10 bitch use “the name” play with me, shit that’s old bitch, its more than old, rotten shit like ur lines and name is* ^solid closer 6/10 Total: 21/30 = 70% Obvious who won this I think...
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08-29-05, 09:17 AM | #21 | ||||||
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This was feedback posted for c.ghost
IP: 38C0 736D
polllllllllllllllllllllllllllllz.................. .............
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08-29-05, 09:22 AM | #22 | |||||||
Nt Your Average
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IP: 76ED 6199
Voted For: c.ghost
This cat cant b seriuos, im bout ta rock this lame C.ghost ripped his whole meaning of rap maybe thas why he got no name lol nice opener Blow past these niggaz like bulls n pistons stop n listen C.ghost give a new nigga 0-1, like he tryin to copy the "system" nice Im lyricly inclined,i rip ryhmes,to go against ya shit lines These 44's a come afta ya like Mike vick passes, u ka b the reciever to them Now days catz cheatin to win nah "The name" aint ready 4 war, he retreatin his men Its not ur turn,not the season to win uh uh dont hit hard some of ya punches conected sum didnt ya flow was horrible work on em.............. shit boy s wack, try to hit me with punches of `` knives for throw ``, don’t scare nigga cause ur lines already looks like uv seen “a ghost”, nice opener connected boy get his sould clapped like pulled hearth off your chest, change ur E-style to L-style cause that’s how 50 states rebels. nah didnt work wasnt set up nice didnt rhyme bitch use “the name” play with me, shit that’s old bitch, its more than old, rotten shit like ur lines and name is* aight closer... weork on ya vocab n set up punches better some r nce some arent vote -the name just rtf here plz http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=206427 Vote switched
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08-29-05, 09:45 AM | #23 | ||||||||
I'ma Royal
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IP: 22E5 DE19
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he polled wrong...could u change this................
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08-29-05, 11:57 PM | #24 | |||||||
I'ma Royal
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IP: 22E5 DE19
still uppin fo real votes...............................
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08-30-05, 11:37 AM | #25 | |||||||
I'ma Royal
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IP: 22E5 DE19
uppin this.......................................thx for voting...........still need some real votes
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08-31-05, 09:09 AM | #26 | |||||||
I'ma Royal
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IP: 22E5 DE19
still uppin.....lets get some more real votes.......................
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08-31-05, 09:23 AM | #27 | |||||
.The Movement.
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IP: D673 57C3
Voted For: THE NAME
The Name shit boy s wack, try to hit me with punches of `` knives for throw ``, don’t scare nigga cause ur lines already looks like uv seen “a ghost”, decent play on his name boy get his sould clapped like pulled hearth off your chest, change ur E-style to L-style cause that’s how 50 states rebels. doesn't hit very hard bitch use “the name” play with me, shit that’s old bitch, its more than old, rotten shit like ur lines and name is* not that good....it's good for him to use nameplay, do predicting it doesnt help u much overall- one good punch, other two didnt hit very hard... good personals c.ghost This cat cant b seriuos, im bout ta rock this lame C.ghost ripped his whole meaning of rap maybe thas why he got no name bad personal, doesnt hit hard Blow past these niggaz like bulls n pistons stop n listen u should've made this one line, and removed the "shit lines" line... u didn't, tho, so it messed up ur flow a lot... should've made it longer... C.ghost give a new nigga 0-1, like he tryin to copy the "system" Im lyricly inclined,i rip ryhmes,to go against ya shit lines system 0-1 punches are played... shit lines/system is sort of a forced rhyme... same thing as i said on the last bar, should've cut this line out These 44's a come afta ya like Mike vick passes, u ka b the reciever to them Now days catz cheatin to win "The name" aint ready 4 war, he retreatin his men Its not ur turn,not the season to win i'ma treat these all as one bar, cause that's how u should've structured it... bad structure on ur part tho, i'm not gonna give u credit for makin these 1 bar just cause i'm treatin them like 1 bar.... good multis/flow, but not the best structure... and u used win twice overall- u have potential to have very good flow/multis, but what really messed this up was ur structure... punches weren't very good either... v/the name please vote on my battle w/stanza (link in sig) |
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08-31-05, 12:32 PM | #28 | |||||||
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IP: C847 337D
uppin
boy get his sould clapped like pulled hearth off your chest, change ur E-style to L-style cause that’s how 50 states rebels. this shit dont make sense^
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C.ghost Im so ghost........ghost........ghost Tri state bandit ,50 state rebel Get soulclapped .............e-style |
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08-31-05, 05:52 PM | #29 | |||||||
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IP: C750 3086
Voted For: c.ghost
My vote has to go to c. ghost. It had a lot more flow and it was a lot more easier to follow. "C.ghost give a new nigga 0-1, like he tryin to copy the "system" Im lyricly inclined,i rip ryhmes,to go against ya shit lines" his was most probably the best punch when considering the content of both. I do wish c.ghost had played with "now days catz be cheating to win" - he could ended this battle with a really good punch. The Name was ok but he has a long way to go - it might help him to learn the clauses to help him win battles...
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08-31-05, 05:57 PM | #30 | ||||||||
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IP: C750 3086
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Thats wot I think...
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