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10-02-05, 08:07 PM
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IP: DCF9 31F4
uppin 4 dis shit........uppin...........uppin.......
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ThA noToRiOuS d..   Deviously Devine Designs Best Thing Since Sliced Bread (2)Me vs. wyteknyte(2) (1)Me vs. Flow Verse(1) |
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10-02-05, 08:28 PM
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This was feedback posted for ThA NoToRiOuS D
IP: 3475 61F6
checkin polllzzz homiez...notorious you need to git outta tha habit of using self-glorification...youve improved alot though...keep at it both of you
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10-03-05, 12:03 AM
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IP: B540 1751
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wuht????when did i use self glorifcation..........anyways upppin....
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ThA noToRiOuS d.. Deviously Devine Designs Best Thing Since Sliced Bread (2)Me vs. wyteknyte(2) (1)Me vs. Flow Verse(1) |
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10-03-05, 12:29 AM
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IP: 4073 EE43
Voted For: ThA NoToRiOuS D
alrite honestly both verses were weak but notorious had a better structure and better punches..and notorious uve elevated a little better since i battled you . and you steping you game up. but keep going... other cat u need to have a better structure and just elevate on your vocab . this includes to notorious too.. just keep your game up .. .. vote for The notorious D.... Infinite_Stan Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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10-03-05, 10:54 AM
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...Belong...
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This was feedback posted for ThA NoToRiOuS D
IP: A966 C254
polls...wack......................................
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10-03-05, 01:20 PM
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This was feedback posted for flow verse
IP: 7A52 73B1
you both fuckin suck.............................................. ....
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10-03-05, 02:39 PM
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Killin' G'z
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IP: D4FA A3B8
Voted For: flow verse
flow verse - iight spit, you had some good punches, attempts at wordplay. Best Line - Fools keep stating their “big” but please do tell Y it only took “4 bars” to put this fuck in a “cell” Worst Line - Honestly the way I abuse you bitch you should call me pimp. You slut This battle is over so bitch Grab a coke and a smile and shut the fuck up ThA NoToRiOuS D - iight verse also, your flow was off, you had some ok punches. Best Line - I clock and cuff your ass like a cop enforcing curfew I'm sticking pins in your head and I don't know voodoo Worst Line - My lyrics sour to your ears like a lime Masta Killah rapping don't even need to rhyme OVERALL - This wasnt that good of a battle, no real hard hitten punches. I vote for Flow because he tried some wordplay, and had some ok punches. D you need to flow better, and put more thought into your punches. Vote - Flow Verse RTF http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=210106
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TAKE MY ADVICE FROM PEOPLE FROM CANADA nd FUCK YA LYFE
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10-03-05, 02:41 PM
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IP: 8F99 F676
Voted For: flow verse
I vote for Flow Verse mainly because of the last line plus i like the punches better but "Grab a coke and a smile and shut the fuck up" is just a great line Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.
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10-03-05, 07:31 PM
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IP: B07B 1CF4
Voted For: flow verse
flow verse- I liked the wordplay flow was really really really basic....The punches were not really that great but ok the stucture was terrible maybe you could fix that again.... overall you did good enough to beat him. ThA NoToRiOuS D- Maybe i should be voting cause i didn't really understand alot of parts of it...Like the punches weren't that all too me...They sounded like threats not really nothin speical.. Wordplay was ok, your flow was like very basic too..Try makin it more real. no hate v/flowverse Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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10-03-05, 09:06 PM
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IP: B885 C295
Voted For: flow verse
you both fucking suck Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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10-04-05, 02:55 PM
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This was feedback posted for flow verse
IP: E3CA 7CA2
both weak no talent Notorious dont forget about our battle I'm settin up now
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10-06-05, 01:12 PM
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IP: 4DB9 B918
wow MADD disqualified votes....................upping..............pleas e i want to get this over with
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 just like the smilie says . . . can u spit . . .  or u just gonna make me laff
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10-08-05, 11:16 AM
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IP: D662 A839
uppin!!!!!!!!! cant believe this shyt is styll up........
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10-08-05, 03:29 PM
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IP: E267 1347
please two more votes comon ppl........upping
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just like the smilie says . . . can u spit . . . or u just gonna make me laff
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10-08-05, 03:51 PM
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IP: C85D ABC6
Voted For: flow verse
Fools keep stating their “big” but please do tell Y it only took “4 bars” to put this fuck in a “cell” 3...relating prison bars to rap bars is played Kid thinks he’s the sickest rapper better than me? Na here’s the truth By accepting this battle you got screwed over. Like fucking on a roof 4...decent He thinks his lines are “funny” but here’s the fact If “ass” got a “PhD” he still wouldn’t be a “wise-crack” 3....weak Honestly the way I abuse you bitch you should call me pimp. You slut This battle is over so bitch Grab a coke and a smile and shut the fuck up 0....not much of a punch.. My lyrics sour to your ears like a lime Masta Killah rapping don't even need to rhyme 2....whack....first line self glorified. I clock and cuff your ass like a cop enforcing curfew I'm sticking pins in your head and I don't know voodoo 1...not a punch...just a threat. My punchlines type hard like throwing a horseshoe My shit unrehearsed so you could call it impromptu 1...self glorifing I bet..i'll make this guy 4-9 in just 1 hush Hitting you and your town like a bum rush 2....borderline self glorifing And flow verse whats going on through your mind? Too late, you're falling too far behind 2..whack..wtf? Ok...One-sided battle...for real. Notorious... Stop self glorifing.You have too much.Make every bar have a punch.Like the voodoo line/unrehearsed/bumrush....those lines self glorified as opposed to dissing the other guy. Also..don't separate ur bars like that..put it all together. Vote-FlowVerse ^Natural killa is my alias..so drop a vote in the link.... http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=209370 .......................or else this vote will be removed  |
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