Voted For: Kesse

kesse-the punches werent very good...okay vocabulary...iight opener...good closer (i see a lot of potential here)

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wordplay-2
multies-0
vocab-5
closer-7
kamikazee-verse had usseless lines...terrible punches...bad opener...bad closer...okay vocab
opener-3
punches-3
worplay-4
multies-1
vocab-4
closer-2
both-could have used more multies, better punches, and a better vocab...the flows also werent that great

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Voted For: Kesse

kesse took this one all tha way...better wordplay, better vocab. better structure(no stretched lines like kami)...better personals, better punches...u name it, dude got it, all tha way...i think u got mad skillz. go to 'crews and collaborations', click on 'new crews', go to 'NOK OUT KINGS', and drop in our 'New Talent' thread...drop this verse, imma tha leader, and im recruitin u, cause this verse was hard. u came flawless. i was feelin this...u started off good, and u finished good...keep elevating
kami-u had a good verse. but ur verse was lackin good structure. he came at u wit harder personals, that made ur verse look bad. u had some play'd lines in there, and i wasnt feelin ur all around verse.
overall-kesse, took this one hands down. just came out on top in this one...

plz return tha favor on battle link in sig. and kesse, hit up that NOK thread homie...we want u...and plz RTF, and xplain yall votes, cause i took my time out to vote on this...

keep elevating, and NOK is for you fam...

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Voted For: Kamikazee

kamikazee got this his personals were better his flow hit harder punches were nice everything was jus a step better than kesse but either way good shit both of ya jus go get ur shit critiqued it will help alot good shit
kamikazees favorite lines:
All da lines dat i spit have u in a state of shock, as if i was Electronic,
U still wouldn't be any good even if u bit off some lines from sonic

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Voted For: Kesse

this was a close battle but kesse edged it ill tell you why...

kamikazee...

I spit so much knowledge, u cant understand it u need a online translator,
Da punches i throw stick to these herbs heads, like they was a magnetic equator
^^ self gloryfication not good the second line had a lil punch
All da lines dat i spit have u in a state of shock, as if i was Electronic,
U still wouldn't be any good even if u bit off some lines from sonic
^^some creativity in the first line but the second line came weak
I will literally have u choking off my line like they was chronic dope,
Ready to smash ur dreams and send them on, like i defeated ur hope
^^ nice closure and a good punch...

overall i thought u came weak... i have seen better from you.. your first line was not good but u pulled it back kinda with your other punches... your flow was on point throught the whole verse and your structure was aight... 6/10

kesse...

'live by the gun, die by the gun', look no further cause that i can provide
by accepting this battle, you proved your name and committed lyrical suicide
^^ decent opener name plat and decent punch
with that name and a record that's lacking, your far from hardcore
in history, kamikazes were sent packing, thats why the japs lost the war
^^ another good personal decent job
your about meet that same fate, another loss i'll create, make your day worse
but there's a first time for everything, you'll be riding home in a hearse
^^ alryyt punch could'av been better
you ain't got no rhymes, heard better from a mime, its actually really pathetic
cause this verse is so sweet that it may have turned ya diabetic
^^ haha decent close i liked the sweet diabetic line lol

overall u had some decent punches in there and some good personals... your flow stayed srtong and your structure was alryyt ill have to give you this becuz of your harder hitting punches and personals...

please return the favour with an honest vote on any baqttle in my sig please explain your votes as they do get d/qued which is not good...

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Voted For: Kesse

Kesse takes this battle for the overall better flo. kamikaze's punches were senseless. what's the equator got to do with anything and if you're going to reference someone else it's your job to make sure we understand so you should probably use some kinda explanation on who sonic is. kesse's lines were kinda weak but the punch landed. heard better from a mime, it's easy to understand mime's don't speak and the personal on kamikaze's name was decent.

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Voted For: Kesse

u took dis fam..no hate on kamikazee da reason y u lose cuzz ya lines stretch 2 much its no way u can flow dat shit and u still spittin basic punchlines when u gon step ya shit up u got new niggaz merkin u.......changin ya name everyday wont help either

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enjoyed-kess ofcourse he was just more consistant with his verse..

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^^he's scared.lol

uppin dis battle is bullshit ur punk ass went running to strobe to get votes removed i was up 3-2 now im down 3-1.....wut kind of shit is dat

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your fault dumb ass, you had a fuckin crew vote, but even if i didnt report it, you were up 3-2, now its 3-1, i woulda won 5-4 piece of shit, stop fuckin whining

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uppppppin this shit,,,, get some votin happin plz, uppppin

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