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Old 10-06-04, 01:25 AM   #31
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Yo...Still waitin for some honest votes that aint gunna get DQ'ed like those other two did, ...lets do this ppl...
 
Old 10-06-04, 07:42 PM   #32
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checkin the polls on this shit..........
 
Old 10-18-04, 02:22 AM   #33
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Voted For: Verbal Abuse

Spektiful
u had a nice vision and ok wordplay i mean it could have been better
u could have elevated a lil in this drop, i kinda felt where u were comin from but u need 2 work on your word selection a lil bit
ya structure was ok it looks better if u kept all the lines together

Va
i felt ya whole drop i felt where u were comin from
this wasent really close at all u had all the check points on point
had wordplay and i could see the vision that u were tryin 2 get across overall u had the better drop 4 better set ups and
a more clear verse 2 understand

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Old 10-18-04, 03:20 AM   #34
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checkkkkkkinnggggggggggggggggg i already voted for spektikul on my alais
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Old 11-07-04, 02:30 AM   #35
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This was feedback posted for Verbal Abuse

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your lives are lived a martyr. these days, ppl pop pills like suicide is health.
if it was that popular back then, jesus would have crucified himself.
dont you get it? he sacrificed his son in hopes of wisdom for the patient.
to live in holy places, thats why he was risen from his placement.-nice words here and verbal kept comen up with good points and he was more creative with the topic,both did very good,i was very impressed and i liked them both a lot,but im voten for verbal becuz spektikul could have been more complex,he had a story line but the story line wasnt as good as verbals,both kept me interested tho,keep it up ya'll
yo verbal return the favor in my match.its the one against dabados

ill come back and vote on this when i get 100 post...sorry i cant vote yet but soon i will be able to.ill come back to this soon-1-
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Old 11-10-04, 11:51 AM   #36
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Voted For: Spektikul

I think that Spektikul got this battle because i feel that Spektikul came stronger in the following categories...Topic i felt Spektikul got it was effective and was on point V.A u shoulda been a bit more creative on this occasion rhyming i felt went to Spektikul good lookin wordplay and creativity goes to Spektikul and flow and structure i'll give to Spektikul.

V/Spektikul There's my sig be sure to return the favour honestly (vs JPoll)

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Old 11-20-04, 08:10 PM   #37
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yo you atrue poet this is very hot you need to get ya voice heard
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Old 12-02-04, 12:55 AM   #38
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Voted For: Spektikul

i like ur flow how skip a line it was easier 2 read and u had nice wordplay

honest votes back please

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Old 12-13-04, 02:36 AM   #39
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Uppin to end this shat............................
 
Old 12-13-04, 02:45 PM   #40
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Old 12-15-04, 01:53 AM   #41
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Old 12-19-04, 03:19 PM   #42
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Uppin.............................................
 
Old 12-19-04, 09:41 PM   #43
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Voted For: Verbal Abuse

this was a very very very good/close battle..........you both captured the topic very well........both had very nice stories........both had good vocab, flow, emotion, imagry and creativity

spek-aight you had a nice verse ot had lots of emoiton and imagry in it......your structure was good........you had very good vocab and it was put places where its needed some ppl just use em places for the hell if it.........but you had a very very good story as well.....and you had a really consistant flow....also good creativeness

VA-you had awesome vocab on this topic...............you incorporated a lot of emotion and some imagry in your vere.......you captured the topic really well......your structure was ur biggest flaw...........you had a good flow and you had good creativity for the topic as well.....

i liked this topic a lot you both def did a good job.....

topic-both
creativity-both
vocab-VA
structure-Spek
flow-VA but Spek wasnt far behind
emotion-VA
imagry-Spek

v/VA

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Old 12-22-04, 05:14 AM   #44
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Voted For: Verbal Abuse

wow. this was a great battle all together.. by both
wooah.. the structure by both was near perfect.
the flow by both was constent the whole time.
the creativity/imagery was great

Its strange how I can't scream, cause my mouth has been sewn shut
The rest of my body remains broken, burnt and badly cut
But then something happened, that was worse than all the rest
My ribs started breaking, and then open went my chest

that right there had mad imagery.

your lives are lived a martyr. these days, ppl pop pills like suicide is health.
if it was that popular back then, jesus would have crucified himself.

that right there was tight to me..

To me V.A took this by a hair.
this was a great battle.

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Old 12-30-04, 12:07 PM   #45
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Voted For: Verbal Abuse

this one was hard to grade but I have to go with verbal on this one
flow verbal
hits verbal
multis verbal
vocab verbal
you're structure was iight and all but just keep elevating on it and you will be fine. But verbal gots this one becuase his lyrics flowed with my more and I felt his hits more.

over all verbal
and hey hit up on my link please peace.

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