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01-05-05, 09:23 PM
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Knock out kings fur life
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IP: 07D4 5143
Voted For: Limited Edition
LIMITED NO DOUBT GETS THIS BAT. He had better strucutre better imagry on helping me to understand the topic more u did also but he just made it short and sweet here is what I liked and how I graded it. LIMITED All Of A Sudden...The Jungle Is Rushing Towards The Plane... ...A Head Rush...A Crash...And Then Blackness... I wake up...my neck hurts, mouth dry, my face caked with dust... ...I look at the pilot...recoil in horror...his face is brutally crushed It's an effort...but I am finally free from my restraining device... ...I look around the plane...it's like a hell in this jungle paradise 19.7/20 KON Undergrowth Swallowing My Ankle's, Stumbling Our Control. Bodie's Shrivelling Up, Delving Into Sleep, Sun Stripping My Soul. Snake's Snapping At The Random Path, On Which I Traipsed. The Jungle Was Too Savage, The Climate Alone Could Solve One's Fate. Boot's Were Gripless, Blunt & Torn By Creature's, Discarded Object's & Thorn's. Sweltering Heat Scarred My Hydration, Was Like Being Hung From Satan's Horn's. 16.1/20 and hey hit up on my sig peace. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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01-07-05, 11:01 PM
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#32
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(X) CeEding all Expectations
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IP: 5A50 DAC7
Voted For: Limited Edition
vote has 2 go 2 limted here cuzza good rhyme shcmes and you had good structure and flow..made me really think and all aiight................ yo konclusion yo your shit wuz like poetry really wuznt feelin ur shit,.............................homie........... .... like edition made me think and actually i enkoyed readin his shit........ur shit wuz like some shakesspear shit homie...no hate or beef ,,,my opnion.,............... like I wake up...my neck hurts, mouth dry, my face caked with dust... ...I look at the pilot...recoil in horror...his face is brutally crushed It's an effort...but I am finally free from my restraining device... ...I look around the plane...it's like a hell in this jungle paradise ^^^^^^^ limted good intro homie......really good intro....... made me think...........hard//.........shit kon sorry daw wuznt feelin ur shit ...aight good shit by both here....................
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01-10-05, 12:48 PM
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#33
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L.E
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IP: 826C 4C70
Uppiin'........................................... ...
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01-14-05, 05:17 PM
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#34
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L.E
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IP: 03A1 A28A
Uppin'................fuck this has been slept on for a long time...
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01-15-05, 02:13 PM
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#35
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L.E
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IP: 03A1 A28A
Uppin'................fuck this has been slept on for a long time...
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01-22-05, 05:13 PM
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#36
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L.E
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IP: 03A1 A28A
Uppin'............................................ .........
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01-25-05, 04:30 AM
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#37
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L.E
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IP: 03A1 A28A
Uppin'............................................ .........
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01-28-05, 06:10 PM
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#38
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 31E1 91F6
Voted For: Limited Edition
i was feelin LE's drop more...NO HATE...i think LE came with more creativeness and stuck to tha topic better. he came out with tha topic, and kept it thurout tha whole flow. i was loving tha structure and tha all around rhyming. rhymin was not too simple, and ur lines werent stretched from what i seen. i think u took this one... Konqlusion. -u had a nice drop, but i wasnt feeling it. i wasnt feelin tha all around structure...i think u should elevate on that...topic was coo for u. i think u stuck to tha topic, it was just boring to me...i wasnt feelin it that much. but no hate..i think u should elevate on that...more excitement in ur topicals...thats a big category. ur rhyming was good by tha way, but i think LE came too strong in this one...NO HATE THO... OVERALL- this was rather close, but LE came wit more creativenes, and more excitement...no hate...just honest voting... PLZ RTF ON BATTLE IN SIG...AGAINST CJ...too many battles gettin slept on...and i did take tha time to vote on this...NO HATE votes plz... good drops.....1......... |
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02-03-05, 11:48 PM
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#39
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STROBE's Favorite Rapper
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IP: 5671 DBDD
Voted For: Limited Edition
KONQL;USION DOPE AS FLOW FOR FUCKS SAKE LMFAO HAHA DOPE BUT YOUR IMAGERY WASNT REALLY THERE YOU AINT BRING THE STORY TO LIFE I THINK YOU CONCENTRATED HARDER ON YOUR FLOW THEN ON YOUR LYRICAL CONTENT VOCAB WAS GOOD AS WELL HERE EMOTION WAS GOOD TOO ITS JUST YOU AINT BRING A PICTURE TO LIFE AND THAT HURT THE TOPICAL FOR YOU IN MY EYES. LIMITED EDITION FLOW WASNT AS GOOD VOCAB WAS EVEN AS WAS EMOTION BUT WHAT GOT THIS FOR YOU IN MY EYES IS YOU GAVE A BETTER PICTURE YOU MADE ME SEE SHIT LIKE I WS THERE WHICH IS GOOD AND TOPICALS AND WINS THEM EVERYTIME THATS GOT YOU MY VOTE.
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02-12-05, 11:49 PM
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#40
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IP: 258C A279
Voted For: Limited Edition
nice topic battle here LE: you took this one here, your story was good had some real nice shits up in yo story, the flow was good with it, vocabulary was on point here but overall here, that story was hella good though Kon: your story was okay, but to me not as good as LE's though, the flow was on point and the vocabualry was good, but i felt that your story wasn't as good as LE's though, but good story tho
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