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Old 08-17-04, 04:19 AM   #1
SLicK~SKiLLz
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SLicK~SKiLLz vs yung_gun

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Old 08-17-04, 04:19 AM   #2
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Old 08-17-04, 04:27 AM   #3
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Old 08-17-04, 04:32 AM   #4
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ayo here we go..

Young u better ~run~ when u see my ~gun~ (his name young gun)
I spit n shoot ~quick~ shootin niggas and missin there ~trick~s (hoes)
but takin the ~treats~ callin u and ur crew out to da ~street~
my flowes hittin u so hard its knockin u off of ya ~feet~ ur rymes are ~weak~ i kill em like these niggas im doin as we ~speak~
my rymes are ~reck-less~ im not even tryin and im ~takin-this~
when i seen u i seen a free ~win~ ~proov-in~ that u suck and u showin no ~competition~
so ill just bring out the ~revolver~ and end this ~now~ get ready to higher a murder ~solver~ cause ~wow!?~
ur dead takin ur bloody carcus and layin it on the ~bed~ thats got white ~sheets~
so all these wanna be mc's rlly knows what happens in the ~streetz~
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Old 08-17-04, 04:45 AM   #5
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your skillz aint slick or sick all day they ride dicks
your from hell then bitch go back to hell bitch
get out of RV and and go live in your RV
i'll flip you lie a burger bitch and sprinkle you like sardeens
kick yo mutha fuckin ass day noon and night
try and hit me beat me fucka that aint right
get outta hear and dont miss yo mutha fuckin flight
you'll lose if you chalenge me to a real fight
i'ma fuck yo bitch all thru the fuckin night
go back to the crummy streetz you fuckin hobo
go back to fuckin yo men you fuckin homo
stay there and do that while i take you fuckon hoe whoa
yo nuthin elts to say to this mutha fuckin gay
 
Old 08-17-04, 06:21 AM   #6
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yo uupin this battle ppl vote for either of us.
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Old 08-17-04, 11:45 AM   #7
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Yo ma votes gotta got 2 yung gun.......his verse had more personals and cusses and i cud feel how he'd spit it. in parts slick-skilz's verse felt off-beat n he wud hav found it hard to spit dat shit. Although sum of it was pretty sick

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Old 08-17-04, 11:48 AM   #8
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hate voter but anyways lets get some real votes in here~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~`
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Old 08-17-04, 01:29 PM   #9
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yung gun won

personals yung gun
rhymes yung gun
punches yung gun
word play yung gun
vocab yung gun
multis none
overall yung gun

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Old 08-17-04, 01:55 PM   #10
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omfg if we get more dumbass voters i swear to god all these fuckin noobs voteing
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Old 08-18-04, 06:53 AM   #11
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yo slick dont be jealous that i'm gettin votes you gay mutha fucka bitch stop conplaining bitch you little dick shit i wanna kill your mutha fuckin ass.
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Old 08-27-04, 10:52 PM   #12
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bitch wtf you gonna lose ne way man bitch removin my vote i challenge yo pussy ass herb bitch c'mon.. next time yo gay ass is on you gonnabattle me or elts...
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Old 08-31-04, 05:43 AM   #13
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YO MAYN U GOT DIS HE SAID THA SAME THING ALMOST EVERI LINE..HIZ FLOW WAS WEAK AND IT WAS SHITTY PERIOD
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Old 09-01-04, 05:45 PM   #14
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slick skillz...took this 1 by a mile...he came with harder punches...his flowed betta...

both had ok structure...but yung gun just had some corny ass punches dat didnt make sense...

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Old 09-01-04, 05:50 PM   #15
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Structure- Tie
Punches - yung gun
Personals - yung gun
Opener - yung gun
Closer - yung gun


Ok, Slick kept talkin about guns and shit, yung gun was more creative.. better punchlines and the personals also hit better, the flow was about the same, so was stucture, wordplay also was pretty even.. so based from punches and personals, you get it yung gun

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