Battle Rules:

10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-30-04 at 04:31 AM

Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in.

LyRiKaLMiRiKaL has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-30-04 04:04 AM.

shake-spear has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-30-04 04:11 AM.

Think you got me shook? you got a gun then show-it//
But the only time you "clap" is when "your happy and you know-it"//

My words smash-matter, reverse verbs then rap-backwards//
Fool tried to fit into RV (rapverse), but aint no forum for wack-rappers//

After this battle Imma grab-the-mic, cuz I’m walking away with bragging-rights//
This fag is like “porno vets” in “virgin” roles, he's only “acting-tight”//

Treated-with-luck, people skip ya verse, why even read-it-you-suck//
Speakin-of-chumps, you just “lose on the (web)” like “Da-(feet-on-a-duck)”//

After I rip you up don't tug-ya-stitches, only confrontation this faggot has with men includes hugs-n-kissin//
This fake thug-is-missin, cuz I "ripped this kid's P*ss*" like "Kobe" does-to-B*tch*s//

check on check one twodis dude a fake gangsta all he gon do is talk bout killin-me/
he could take novacaine to say he dope and he would still be feelin-me/
but its ok im ya idol and i aint mean to kill-ya-hope/
its gon be a "mirikal" if dis wack emcee get-a-vote/
im da type ta leave ya bones pokin out like u was mad skinny/
broke ass, ya pockets stay low on presidents like monica lewinski/
he talk bout guns and shit bout we all know he dont own-no-Tecs/
and from the look of things he prolly down wit homo-sex/
so stop talkin bout guns cause im quick ta smack a kid/
he wouldnt be runnin shit if his name was laxitive/

i know not that good bout i did it in 6mins

i did mine in 14 but none the less good drop
lets get some votes

nice verse i like it sorry i came weak but u caught me in the middle of anotha battle so i was in a rush on both them

its kool just get some votes that all.....hit me up tommorow and well do a round 2

uppin for some votes do so and ill return the favor just send me the link

still uppin for votes....if you want votes on your battles send me the links...pace n wun

Voted For: LyRiKaLMiRiKaL

ok shakespere that opener was whacked as fuck i liked the monica line that was slick good flow but punches and disses lacked hard and that hurt you a 3/10
lrical good ass flow and wordplay ok vocab that defeat line is played out hard but your other punches and disses were decent and that took this for you a 5/10

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Voted For: shake-spear

I vote for you because dude is a biter...


LyrikalMirikal:

Think you got me shook? you got a gun then show-it//
But the only time you "clap" is when "your happy and you know-it"//

My words smash-matter, reverse verbs then rap-backwards//
Fool tried to fit into RV (rapverse), but aint no forum for wack-rappers//

After this battle Imma grab-the-mic, cuz I’m walking away with bragging-rights//
This fag is like “porno vets” in “virgin” roles, he's only “acting-tight”//

Treated-with-luck, people skip ya verse, why even read-it-you-suck//
Speakin-of-chumps, you just “lose on the (web)” like “Da-(feet-on-a-duck)”//


After I rip you up don't tug-ya-stitches, only confrontation this faggot has with men includes hugs-n-kissin//
This fake thug-is-missin, cuz I "ripped this kid's P*ss*" like "Kobe" does-to-B*tch*s//



biter biter biter...consider yourself banned...

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thx for votin .................... and does this mean we still acceptin votes

Voted For: LyRiKaLMiRiKaL

LM

Think you got me shook? you got a gun then show-it//
But the only time you "clap" is when "your happy and you know-it"//
^woah, nice
My words smash-matter, reverse verbs then rap-backwards//
Fool tried to fit into RV (rapverse), but aint no forum for wack-rappers//
^yeah bitch!(you gettin me hyped)
After this battle Imma grab-the-mic, cuz I’m walking away with bragging-rights//
This fag is like “porno vets” in “virgin” roles, he's only “acting-tight”//
^he killin em so far
Treated-with-luck, people skip ya verse, why even read-it-you-suck//
Speakin-of-chumps, you just “lose on the (web)” like “Da-(feet-on-a-duck)”//
^didn't register for me
After I rip you up don't tug-ya-stitches, only confrontation this faggot has with men includes hugs-n-kissin//
^decent
This fake thug-is-missin, cuz I "ripped this kid's P*ss*" like "Kobe" does-to-B*tch*s//

The finisher sucked because you lost the flow you had goin from the beginning. But this was a cool verse overall. Strong.

S-S

check on check one twodis dude a fake gangsta all he gon do is talk bout killin-me/
he could take novacaine to say he dope and he would still be feelin-me/
^HORRIBLY stretched but like the way you was goin with it.
but its ok im ya idol and i aint mean to kill-ya-hope/
its gon be a "mirikal" if dis wack emcee get-a-vote/
^weak cornball ish
im da type ta leave ya bones pokin out like u was mad skinny/
broke ass, ya pockets stay low on presidents like monica lewinski/
^decent, or maybe just below decent
he talk bout guns and shit bout we all know he dont own-no-Tecs/
and from the look of things he prolly down wit homo-sex/
^very weak.
so stop talkin bout guns cause im quick ta smack a kid/
he wouldnt be runnin shit if his name was laxitive/
^clincher...

last line held the weight of this.


Lyrikal wins this just overall better skill displayed. shakes rushed his that's why his is lacking to lyrikals.