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5-10 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-05-04 at 01:44 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

PayDay has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-02-04 01:45 PM.

-FlamboyanT- has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-03-04 01:10 PM.

FlamboyanT ugh ugh ugh…fuckin check this

Im Rippin your style~n’ pullin ure teeth like a dentist~I don’t miss 1
Thinking you got rhymezzz is relentless~so don’t bet this 2

Ill crisp you like a toaster~ull get burnt to no repair~cajun whigga 3
pray to god for dispare~u couldn’t get a proper burial if u were a REAL NIGGA! 4

shit'll get DRASTIC~wrappin FlamboyanTs’ body in plastic~ so Send a HURSE 5
Leaven’ FlamboyanT a has been~ holdn’ a grudge~ n’ droppin his ashes~ it’s a CURSE 6

No disrespect~POTATO CHIP~ get off my dick bitch~ claimin that youre a real G 7
Lost in a trance~your no ANGEL~ So why do u claim to B~ you could NEVER heal ME 8

Ure getting donkey punched* just like a pro~takin it all in just like u a top notch HOE 9
ure SPEADIN ya cheeks for da doc to go cleanin~hold ya DIRTY ASS gums b 4 speakin~now u know! 10

*donkey punched- wen u take it up the ass and the person cums in u

U a fake ass emcee dogg to me u aint shyt....
U already set up da battle so y da hell aint u spit....
u a bitch, pussy nigga ma skillz iz legit....
To win dis battle u need skillz sumtin u need to get....
Dis nigga prolly thought lemme go beat dis l newb....
but understand dis i'll beat u n ya whole fukin crew b.....
N u wack so derre aint nuttin dat u can do to me....
NIgga ma wordz is fly like i threw it off a rooftop....
N if u Come test me u gonn c ya tooth drop....
IM takin dis new spot, U cood catch n a BMW convertible black wit a blue top....
We gonn c who crew hot, wen u drop like hot potatoez....
Ya shirt gonn b lookin like u got hit wit a lot tomatoez....
Ma wordz set fire i blow off a fukin cab roof....
I leev payday chipped up like ma nigga Fab tooth....
U neva c me in a wak ar i push Bmw'z Or a Maybak...
Spit so sik System'll hav to tell me to laybak...
Payday dont fuk wit me or get ya wig pushed way bak...1

uppin fo votez.....

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-FlamboyanT-

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!Spit So SicK!

Voted For: -FlamboyanT-

payday verse was streched flow was a little off punches and disses were weak no hate just work on those no real wordplay a 3/10
flamboyant good structure except it streched a little on that black and blue line still good and a nice flow with good wordplay and ok punches got you this a 5/10

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Voted For: PayDay

IIGHT CLEARLY PAY TOOK THIS STRCUTURE WAS OK HE HAD HARDER PUNCHLINES HE HAD OK METAS CULD USE A LIL WORK ON YA FLOW

FLAM #1 U USED "U" 2 MANI TIMES U WASNT REALLI BATTLIN U WAS TALKIN BOUT YA SELF YA SUM OF THA WORDS LOOKED LIKE U JUSS THOUGHT OF 2 MAKE UP EX

Dis nigga prolly thought lemme go beat dis l newb....
but understand dis i'll beat u n ya whole fukin crew b.....

WAT THA HELL ISS A "CREW B" USE REAL WORDS N ELIVATE

Voted For: PayDay

payday took this...it was a real weak verse, but he didnt self glorify...flam did the whole verse... let me break it down...

Im Rippin your style~n’ pullin ure teeth like a dentist~I don’t miss 1
Thinking you got rhymezzz is relentless~so don’t bet this 2
5/10

Ill crisp you like a toaster~ull get burnt to no repair~cajun whigga 3
pray to god for dispare~u couldn’t get a proper burial if u were a REAL NIGGA! 4
5/10...was weak

shit'll get DRASTIC~wrappin FlamboyanTs’ body in plastic~ so Send a HURSE 5
Leaven’ FlamboyanT a has been~ holdn’ a grudge~ n’ droppin his ashes~ it’s a CURSE 6 7/10...creative...well kinda

No disrespect~POTATO CHIP~ get off my dick bitch~ claimin that youre a real G 7
Lost in a trance~your no ANGEL~ So why do u claim to B~ you could NEVER heal ME 8 6/10...played

Ure getting donkey punched* just like a pro~takin it all in just like u a top notch HOE 9
ure SPEADIN ya cheeks for da doc to go cleanin~hold ya DIRTY ASS gums b 4 speakin~now u know! 10 8/10...donkey punched....ghetto

ure verse aint wat it usually is...u got to come back wit dat fire G...come on...dont dissapoint...


flamboyant...ures wasnt wat i thought it would b..ure a new b but u did come hard...just not as hard...just elevate and ule b there....no hate G

Voted For: PayDay

payday took dis...betta punches...betta flow...betta structure...betta wordplay...betta overall verse...you know...betta content and concept and shit...
gave it to payday...

uppin this shit for some votes....................

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Voted For: PayDay

punches/pd
meta's/pd
opener/pd
closer/pd
personals/pd
structure/flam
pd took it with ease, flam youse was good dont get me wrong
but he owned u in the rhym'n and what not so yea


vote// PAYDAY

uppin fo dem votes....jus need one more....upppin...

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Voted For: -FlamboyanT-

i like this nigga even tho u got to much of tha same rhymin thing u mad nice wit tha srhymes