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Old 09-02-04, 09:43 PM   #1
E Looch
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E Looch vs Phantom

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14 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Biting
No Pms or Aims For Votes
No D/r Votes




Minimum posts to vote: 700

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Old 09-02-04, 09:44 PM   #2
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Phantom has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-02-04 09:44 PM.
 
Old 09-02-04, 10:13 PM   #3
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sacrificin good punches for 'heavy' vocab, and you think ya gone scare me?...
watch as i leave your weak punches missin, and make ya 'dictionary'...
hmm, a biter that sucks, why didnt you choose to use 'e leech'?...
you think you gun win cuz you prayin, guess what? im the one to preach...
son you like im my home state, quickly blow by you with ease...
i handle herbs, think about it, im from cali, i gotta 'palm trees'...
of course im gonna win, your flows ass, you basically rappin wit farts...
begin your verse with "Phantom wins" so it can finish before it starts...
faggot, wearin mini skirts and high-heels aint a 'he-man' strong thing...
i wanna "disperse" my verse, but then i'd be battlin ya personal belongings...
you a poor bitch with torn clothes, constantly throwin his punches weak...
plus your the only rapper whos house gets emptied at least once a week...(dumpster)
I rule you hoe, you wanna switch places? you only got one hope...
cuz if the weak inherit the earth then i guess youll own the whole globe...

*fuckers with 700 posts better get the damn wordplay...
 
Old 09-02-04, 11:30 PM   #4
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E Looch has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-02-04 11:30 PM.
 
Old 09-02-04, 11:42 PM   #5
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hang phantom quicker than surf lynchers hangin 10
kind 15 on a 10 speed givin new meanin to pussy peddlin*
his sexuality like thinkin & drivin he not sure which way 2 go
like condoms wit lungs his raps are known to suck an blow
sorry for gettin outta character i normally dont talk 2 phans
but he stays lookin 4 E like near sighted people at eye exams
make a.i change his number when he facin the worlds greatest**
u no originator ya whole sig makes u a second hand plagiarist
paper come from trees so with ease i de-root prewrotes***
like friends signin on his cast i got phantom takin foot notes
rip his cotton text,peelin buns of sheeps hierloom versus passin down defeats
kid nervous heart in his throat so he can chatter wit beats
u ill? is like sayin satanic writins in eden ya scripts will never reign
i'll inject ya own cereal in ya arms so u know that ya lifes in vein


*peddlin pussy is porstitition
**think olympics stupid
*** dude pmd with a already set 14 lines spit LMAO add up the facts
 
Old 09-02-04, 11:56 PM   #6
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blah i only said 14 cuz i thought it was a nice amount. w/e i dont care its ok, its just a battle. *takes deep breath and counts to ten*

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Old 09-03-04, 12:32 AM   #7
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you both had extremely good verses and i got to say i definitly jealous of both of you... Empire you had Sum hard punches and also better flow...
Phantom you had good punches but you had wack flow...
v/ Empire....

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Old 09-03-04, 12:33 AM   #8
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yo sry i was goonna vote for Empire shit i'm so stupid... i'll stay wit dat vote cuz you were both even...
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Old 09-03-04, 12:35 AM   #9
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what the fuck............i dont get it......obviously wasnt paying attention.....*has to take a deep breathe and count to ten again* okay whatever.
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Old 09-03-04, 12:35 AM   #10
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thanx man lets havve a round in dastreeetz.......
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Old 09-03-04, 06:24 PM   #11
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i should merk u for callin me empire

and u better not whine a n bitch abnout every single fuckin vote or ull lose respect quick an ill do the same fuckin thing about gettin em removed

u lost just except an move on kid
 
Old 09-03-04, 06:45 PM   #12
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Voted For: E Looch

sorry for gettin outta character i normally dont talk 2 phans
but he stays lookin 4 E like near sighted people at eye exams
That was sum ILL shit right there.

You took the whole battle wit that one bar.
Punches'Personals'Wordplay.....
Flow'Meti4s'Structure....
All E Looch.

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Old 09-03-04, 10:09 PM   #13
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glad somebody caught that punch

uppin for more honest and explained votes
 
Old 09-04-04, 12:33 PM   #14
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this battle gettin slept on
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Old 09-04-04, 10:12 PM   #15
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hang phantom quicker than surf lynchers hangin 10
kind 15 on a 10 speed givin new meanin to pussy peddlin*
complex but decent
his sexuality like thinkin & drivin he not sure which way 2 go
like condoms wit lungs his raps are known to suck an blow
nice similes
sorry for gettin outta character i normally dont talk 2 phans
but he stays lookin 4 E like near sighted people at eye exams
this was a dope line not personal but nice
make a.i change his number when he facin the worlds greatest**
u no originator ya whole sig makes u a second hand plagiarist
decent
paper come from trees so with ease i de-root prewrotes***
like friends signin on his cast i got phantom takin foot notes
lmao this was dope (2nd part)
rip his cotton text,peelin buns of sheeps hierloom versus passin down defeats
kid nervous heart in his throat so he can chatter wit beats
decnt not personal though
u ill? is like sayin satanic writins in eden ya scripts will never reign
i'll inject ya own cereal in ya arms so u know that ya lifes in vein
decent simile



sacrificin good punches for 'heavy' vocab, and you think ya gone scare me?...
watch as i leave your weak punches missin, and make ya 'dictionary'...
dont understand...unless a dictonary is heavy
hmm, a biter that sucks, why didnt you choose to use 'e leech'?...
you think you gun win cuz you prayin, guess what? im the one to preach...
first part is decent
son you like im my home state, quickly blow by you with ease...
i handle herbs, think about it, im from cali, i gotta 'palm trees'...
this was a nice line
of course im gonna win, your flows ass, you basically rappin wit farts...
begin your verse with "Phantom wins" so it can finish before it starts...
decent but not personal
faggot, wearin mini skirts and high-heels aint a 'he-man' strong thing...
i wanna "disperse" my verse, but then i'd be battlin ya personal belongings...
blah not a good punch
you a poor bitch with torn clothes, constantly throwin his punches weak...
plus your the only rapper whos house gets emptied at least once a week...(dumpster)
blah
I rule you hoe, you wanna switch places? you only got one hope...
cuz if the weak inherit the earth then i guess youll own the whole globe
aint feeling this line too much

vote e looch for a harder hitting verse
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