Battle Rules:

10 - 12 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 11-06-04 at 02:22 PM

Must drop verse in 180 minutes after check in.

jmsbnd07655 has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-03-04 02:23 PM.

VIvID has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-03-04 02:26 PM.

dont vote please unless u understand the wordplay.....

Sharp? hardly infact your quite the dull simple caliber
Tryin to leave me in a daze droppin usein a calender?
Son its supposed to be a key battle now 3 hours to drop
Las time it was off the top, u were sittin in the barbershop
Get it, metaphoicaly hair when really it meant all ur raps
No wonder ur punchs dont hit tho ya set ups all collapse
Peeped ur battles & honestly how are u even 2 and 2
When u pick up a pakerbrothers game jus ta get a 'clue'
Name plays r old, along with ur concepts sorry to label
& u might be on a roll, if u passed out at the kitchen table


*rap ed 4 any one who dont get sumthin*

Clue = A Board Game made by parker brothers,
Daze (days) = metaphorical punch with calender

yo, why are you battlin me? this is R.V not "look to be beat",
i'll take you down so fast, you'll forget the meaning of james bonds power and heat, im takin your seat,
actually nah, i dont want to be completely shameful,
i'd rather make my lyrical flow outrageous and painful, your disgraceful,
you get destroyed by the force of one touch! your style's corrupt,
i give you my spiritual guidance and you probably still couldn't bust!you're spittin wack cuts,
puttin shame to your name "vivid" thats blatantly clearly a lie,
you spit verses that measure up to the fact that you cant lyrically try,
you dont wanna mess with me i'll flip your scripts with flows that are powerful,
then finish you off wit closers dope enough to lyrically devour you

upppin for sum votesssssssssssssssssssssssssssss......

c'mon voters lets get some votes up in here!!!!
......

ye people, upppppppppinnnnnnnnnnn!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Voted For: VIvID

vote-vivid

punches: vivid
metas: vivid
werdplay: vivid
flow: vivid
opener: vivid
closer: vivid

*vivid's lines flowed smoothly and his was more complex, with tha werdplays and metas and punches. i was really feeling tha last line......JMS, up ya skillz...and keep battling good people..

*vote on my battles pls!*

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Voted For: VIvID

aight,
Vivid...ya verse was straight....the structure was on point, so the flow was definitely there....i didnt really see any personals, but your punches were above average...u had good consistency wot those...good creativity overall....n u had a nice closer, it made me lol...

James, u had a meh verse...it really could've been better...the structure could've definitely used some work, cuz a lot of the lines were stretched......u had a nameplay personal, which was okay...but u didnt really have strength punch-wise....there wasnt much creativity in your verse...

V/ Vivid for more creativity and consistency...

Voted For: VIvID

v/VIvID.
had the better verse,
structure was better, punches aswell.
syllable count was great too, made it flow well.
had the line of the battle. which was off the top line.

other guy needs to work on his structure.
some lines were madly stretched, drop the "" shit too.
work on creativivty, wittiness wins battles.

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Appreciate the honest votes yall

thx 3-0 in a row thats a KO..... nice battle jms! we'll hafta do it again sumtime

uppin for amod to close this battle so i can get another one goin

Voted For: VIvID

Vivid.... You got this.... major props!! your structure was relaly good in this..... I liked it!!!! Your unches came hard.... realy nice........ and your flwow was alright.... Keep it up...

James... You merent that good ... your lines were really streched and you flow and everything wasnt all that great.... Peace


Please return the favor in my sig!! \/ \/ \/

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