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Old 11-26-04, 11:49 PM   #1
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mistah_tate vs THE HYPE IS REAL

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Check in by: 11-27-04 at 01:19 AM

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Old 11-26-04, 11:50 PM   #2
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Old 11-27-04, 12:06 AM   #3
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THE HYPE IS REAL has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-27-04 12:06 AM.
 
Old 11-27-04, 12:10 AM   #4
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Even if THE HYPE IS REAL, this bitch is still fake
You say you hard but u sweet and soft like homemade cake
Pursuing a text career was ya first big mistake
Cuz whatever talent you posess, i'm bout to straight take
Piece by piece, and i'll start with ya name
You hidin behind HYPE because you got no skill range
Real niggas let they lyrics to all the shit talkin
Only talentless whores rely on they alias for mic rockin
You got an inflated ego kid, and i'm the reality pin
I'm here to bust your bubble and stomp you till you thin
You was runnin all that noise up in bitch slapped
Now you eatin yo words cuz you got lyrically clapped
I'll put the cover on you since i just rocked you to sleep
Ate you up digested you and now you a steamin heap
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Old 11-27-04, 01:25 AM   #5
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if its a battle that you want than a battle your gonna get
but dont be suprised when when my niggas leave you wet
aint nothin you can do when there sprayin them tecs
them nines and swing knifes
some people think im wack and cant ryhm
but there them mother fuckers that end up dyin
hhey look i cant blaim a man from tryin
just think about your family before before you make that mistake
end up drawn in chalk and surrounded by tape
just know the hype aint fake muther fucker.
 
Old 11-27-04, 12:12 PM   #6
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aight......uppin for some votes.....................
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Old 11-27-04, 12:37 PM   #7
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Even if THE HYPE IS REAL, this bitch is still fake
You say you hard but u sweet and soft like homemade cake
Pursuing a text career was ya first big mistake
Cuz whatever talent you posess, i'm bout to straight take
Piece by piece, and i'll start with ya name
You hidin behind HYPE because you got no skill range
Real niggas let they lyrics to all the shit talkin
Only talentless whores rely on they alias for mic rockin
You got an inflated ego kid, and i'm the reality pin
I'm here to bust your bubble and stomp you till you thin
You was runnin all that noise up in bitch slapped
Now you eatin yo words cuz you got lyrically clapped
I'll put the cover on you since i just rocked you to sleep
Ate you up digested you and now you a steamin heap
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ U HAD FLOW...........AND PUNCHES WERE OK NICE PERSONALS DISISNG HIS NAME.........ELEVATE ON STRUTURE BUT THE FLOW IS GOOD




if its a battle that you want than a battle your gonna get
but dont be suprised when when my niggas leave you wet
aint nothin you can do when there sprayin them tecs
them nines and swing knifes
some people think im wack and cant ryhm
but there them mother fuckers that end up dyin
hhey look i cant blaim a man from tryin
just think about your family before before you make that mistake
end up drawn in chalk and surrounded by tape
just know the hype aint fake muther fucker.
^^^^^^^^^^^ U TALKED ABOUT YA SELF.......NOT REALLY ANY DISSING...........FLOW IS KINDA CHOPPED UP..........USE PERSONALS




OVERALL= THIS IS AN ONE-SIDED BATTLE......HANDS DOWN TO MISTAH TAYE CAUSE SHE HAD HARDER PUNCHES AND FLOW NICE USING PERSONALS MA


WHY?


HYPE- OK U WAS TALKIN ABOUT CHA SELF MAYN....AND YO PUNCHES WERENT GOOD AT ALL.......TOO BASIC........ELEVATE ON DA VOCAB AND PUNCHES AND DA FLOW IS KINDA CHOPPED UP ELEVATE ON THAT TOO


MISTAH TAYE- U HAD GOOD PUNCHES AND FLOW...BUT STILL ELEVATE ON DEM PUNCHES AIIIGHT...DA FLOW IS KINDA CHOPPED UP BUT ITS COOL.....AND MAKE YA VERSE IN THE SAME LENGH CHA FEEL ME
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Very fucking Nice man, deep shyt, Ima nominate ya for Best poet.

Uppin this for drastic....10/10.....NICE SHYT MAN keep it up.


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Old 11-27-04, 01:50 PM   #8
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AIGHT TATE TOOK THIS HANDS DOWN...FLOW WAS GOOD, STRUCTURE WAS GOOD, HAD GOOD PERSONALS AND A FEW GOOD MULTIES, THE PUNCHES CONNECTED WELL...YOUR WORD PLAY WAS AIGHT, COULD HAVE BEEN BETTER, AND THE TOPICS TLKED WERE STR8...YOUR VERSE 8/10

HYPE: YEA, UMMM, YOU TOTALLY FLOPPED THIS ONE MAYN...THIS IS A BATTLE, SO THROW PUNCHES AND MULTIES, DO SUMTHIN, x-cEPT SELF GLORIFIE YOURSELF AND TELL HOW YOU ARE GONNA LEAVE SOMEONE DEAD...AND I BET U A WHITE BOI 2...I AM WHITE ALSO, BUT U DONT C ME TLKIN GANGSTA IN A BATTLE...THAT SHIT IS JUST WEAK...NO OFFENSE BUT IT WAS A WASTE OF MY TIME 2 READ URE VERSE...2/10...(GAVE U 2 FOR TRYIN)

VOTE~~~~~~MISTAH_TATE
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Old 11-27-04, 02:27 PM   #9
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mistah pulled this one out simply with all the disses....mistah aimed more at the otha person. i lyked that....but, both need to elevate thier punches, A LOT....time to think out the box and get creative...."THIR", you need to focus more on the person you battlin,......and up ya content.....good job, though

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Old 11-27-04, 05:10 PM   #10
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aight, aight uppin for more votes............................
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Old 11-28-04, 12:24 PM   #11
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uppin once again, cmon people, vote on this and i'll return the favor
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Old 11-28-04, 12:46 PM   #12
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Easy Win Fo' Mistah, Lemme Break It.

Hype-No Creativity, Punch's, Wordplay, Vocab, Basically Nothin But a Aight Flow.
Rating: 2/10

Mistah- Better Verse By a Mile, You Had Gd Punch's, Gd Wordplay and Gd Concept's. I Like The "Reality Pin" Line That Was Tight. You Beat Hype In Evry Catagory.
Rating: 6.5/10
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Old 11-28-04, 04:20 PM   #13
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aight, uppin this mothafucka for more votes..............
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Old 11-29-04, 12:03 PM   #14
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lawd have mercy, uppin for one more vote.................
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Old 11-29-04, 12:07 PM   #15
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alrite quite weak battle really where neither brought anything that really impressed me, but at the same time it was very one sided.....mistah took this easy...


mistah - o.k it was an alrite verse, gud flow, structure, some nice wordplay but ya punches were lackin really, abit played in parts but like i sed easily gud enough here...few personals so yeh not that bad..

hype - alot of elevatin to do dawg, ya flow was gud, structure was gud but ya punches were very weak n really played, that wannabe gangsta style doesn't work here dawg, played as hell, bare that in mind n you'll improve...

stay up both...

v/mistah

can ya hit this battle wiv an honest vote...
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