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No Crew Votes
No Recycling
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Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 12-01-04 at 11:14 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Retro has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-28-04 11:15 AM.

Premanition has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-28-04 11:23 AM.

Ur record causes ‘Outbreak’, with a fake deceiving balance…
Took time to seek ur skill, but its clear u got ‘hidden’ talents…
Ur Wack at text, lol just tell peeps you need a beat to rhyme…
N ur crews a joke…
…………..only ‘close’ to dope wen it fell at the feet of mine…(*)
Accepting this battle, bet you really wanna contest this time…
People really detest ur rhymes…
…………………………wanna win? you beta invest in mine…
P.I.N.K? must be an identity crisis, worry bout ur mental stability…
Got topical ability? but bein slept on wherever like night versatility…

Quik 8...

(*) - my crew beat his crew in crew battle

Uppin this

This Battle Is A Definition Of Premanition Receivin' a Incision.
Callin' Me Out ? That Was Ya Last Action and Decision.
You'd Kick Up a Controversey If You Claimed Yaself Dope.
Watch How This Kid Get's Washed Out Like Lil Kid's & Soap.
"The Meaning Of Life" Nigka You ain't Advanced Or Complex.
Shoulda Forseen That YOU were Gon Get Recked Next.=*=
Skewer Ya Spleen, Prem Set It Up But I Stole His Show.
Staple Ya Brain To Ya Cranium So You Can Be M.A.Torso.=*=
* His Crew Is M.A.B. -Mind Above Body-Torso is another
Name for Upper Body.
* 6th Line- Premanition Mean's to forsee a event.
That was Just a quicky. G'Luck.

Voted For: Retro

Premenition:
1.Your Verse Was All Over The Place.. Get Your Structure Down. It Totally Ruins Your Flow..
2. You Had No Hard Hitting Punches At All.. Really Decreased the Value Of Your Verse.

likes:
1. Good Personals And Use Of Personals..
2. Good Multies.


Retro:

dislikes:
1. Played Punches

likes:
1. Good personals.. Hit Hard Just The Two You Had.
2. Good punches.. Except For A Few.. Plus Prem didnt Have Any So This catagory raised immensly
3. good multies all the way through, and good wordplay..


Overall you just took this verse..
opener to closer..


gj..




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Voted For: Retro

ayo this battle was hot, and it was real close in my opinion, but ima go ahead and give my vote to retro, because he had more power in his punches, especially in this line

Skewer Ya Spleen, Prem Set It Up But I Stole His Show.
Staple Ya Brain To Ya Cranium So You Can Be M.A.Torso

Now that right there, that was a hot ass line.

Prem i cant really say nothin bad about your verse, your structure was a lil off, i just think Retro had it by a thin marigin, yall both came hard though....

check my shit out with an honest vote

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"Lord forgive me, but he tried to kill me, somebody out there gotta feel me."
-Young Buck

lol

he had a tight closer but the rest was filler bullshit, just a load of multis.....damn

uppin

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Voted For: Premanition

Premanition - good verse you had some good vocab and your flow was good.

Best Line - Accepting this battle, bet you really wanna contest this time…
People really detest ur rhymes…
…………………………wanna win? you beta invest in mine…

Worst Line - Ur record causes ‘Outbreak’, with a fake deceiving balance…
Took time to seek ur skill, but its clear u got ‘hidden’ talents…

Retro - iight flow you had a couple good punches and some good personals.

Best Line - You'd Kick Up a Controversey If You Claimed Yaself Dope.
Watch How This Kid Get's Washed Out Like Lil Kid's & Soap

Worst Line - This Battle Is A Definition Of Premanition Receivin' a Incision.
Callin' Me Out ? That Was Ya Last Action and Decision.

OVERALL - good battle here but I gotta give this to Premanition. He had the better punches and his flow was better. Retro you need to work on some harder hitten punches next time.

Vote - Premanition

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Voted For: Retro

v=retro....close battle but retro came harder wit punchs an multi's i like his creativity...... -
Premanition u had a nice flow but didnt come as hard but u had sum nice lines.......v/retro

Voted For: Premanition

I vote for Premanition cause he had more and better punchesand he didn't have to explain most of them

Retro had some tght shit to but Pre took it a little further you both was good though

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