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Check in by: 02-06-05 at 08:04 PM

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Expired battle close - win

EyeDentdy has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-03-05 08:05 PM.

Jay Kal has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-03-05 08:34 PM.

I'll spit till U bleed like Im taking DNA samples/
Twist Ur helix back and make a smoothy out ur atoms apple/
Im skilled wit grapples, and techniques out ur limits/
analize ur blood like a nobel prize winning chemist/
U not on my level, It takes years of cannablism/
U too bitch, I'll make ur water break like an aneurysm/
Jay kals new to the expirience of the battling rapping family/
U as high as U gonna get, and its a long way back down to reality/
my metaphores attack nocturnal like Vampires/
U couldnt be hot like me if we battled over 5 ft bon fires/
Im a lyrical rapsody nigga, that'll stretch kats like car tires/
we could battle over barved wires,
but afterwords U finish puting up EyeDentdy Proof Flyers till the sun expires/

sorry I took so long, I had people over the crib and shit. but nothin personal, just battle.

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wack cats like you stay deep in alleys/
Tryin to make a buck from a fuck wit yo pally's/
A K A fuck wit yo boy homey/
A K A take a chrome to yo dome homey/
A K A wearin foam til you know'm homey/
A K A keep em growin wit da bone homey/
Aight, enough of that dipset shit/
Bout to put a bullet through your mouth, and make you spit it back out your clit/
Your crew can be referred as a clique/
At least I think that's what a group of white girls in High school is/
I drop more laced lines than Rick James, you spittin like lines of linen/
What I mean to say is soft, call you Dracula cause all your lines are bitten/
I'll keystyle and not give a fuck/
you'll take an edited manuscript and hardly put that shit up/
I'll keep lyrically killin til I swig my last breath/
Ill steal your soul breath and body, might wanna call it EyeDentdy theft/
Yo you think this a game, but Im straight reppin G/
If you dream of winning this battle, it's about to become your final fantasy/
Yo this is the endin, and its established that Im wreckin/
I just slapped your record ass backwards, now you're workin with 7-11*/


*His current text record is 11-7

Voted For: EyeDentdy

V/Eyedentdy....close battle but he gets my vote he had more creative punchs an he diss's u consistently wit good structure....jay kal u had sum decent punchs in ur verse but u lacked on dissin him consistent an u need to work on sum more orginial punchs not so basic.....
punch=eye
structure=tie
vocab=eye
opener=eye
closer=eye
overall=eyedentdy
*RETURN THE FAVOR*

Thanks for the feedback, Iv been gone for a few month so I was worried Id forget how to structurize my raps. but thanks. Iv got another battle pending wit Lord. Wun incase you wanna check that out too. I spit a lil better there than on this one. much respect to my opponent for spittin. keep elivating homie.

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figure I could drop by and promote my my first mixtape and what not since im here..

We need some more votes so we close this weak ass shit.

uppin

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figure I could drop by and promote my my first mixtape and what not since im here..

lets close this shit please. uppin for more votes

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figure I could drop by and promote my my first mixtape and what not since im here..

dammmnnnn is this shit still up? can I get some votes so I can move on with my life

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figure I could drop by and promote my my first mixtape and what not since im here..

uppin for some votes on this shit so we can finally close it. I dont even know if jay kal is still on this shit.

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figure I could drop by and promote my my first mixtape and what not since im here..

vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote

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figure I could drop by and promote my my first mixtape and what not since im here..

vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote

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figure I could drop by and promote my my first mixtape and what not since im here..

Voted For: EyeDentdy

i voted for eye cus he had better rymes and they hit harder
and plus they had some flow and structure

jay- u were confusing with those lines but i got them , u didnt really ryme and poor structure got u

no hate
rtf
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