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Lord.Wun has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-20-05 04:26 PM.

Buck.Shot has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-20-05 04:34 PM.

Droppin-Acid-Spits...Crack-Ya-Ribz...Lord's Packin Clips...Smack Ya Lipz..
Buck's Gotta Michael Jackson Flow, His Premature Shit's Only Attractin kids..
Xzibit's Gotta new Hobbie..Fuck Pimpin a ride...Now He Pimpin a Verse..
Too Late...Theres An obvious explanation..why his moms layin in a herse

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[center]Kid ya like a bee, you sting once then you ''Fall''
Ya couldnt ''Land a punch'' against limbless kids in a Brawl
Fuck an encore from you, but they will be ''Clappin'Tho''
Whats ya ''Occupation''? ...Suckin' At ''Rappin Hoe!''

Explanations...
Bee's sting you once, then die after they sting you...
An his Occupation says ''Rappin Hoe''

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Voted For: Lord.Wun

I think i'll go wit Lord.Wun

[center]Kid ya like a bee, you sting once then you ''Fall''
Ya couldnt ''Land a punch'' against limbless kids in a Brawl
AMPUTEE LINES ARE DONE NICE SET UP
Fuck an encore from you, but they will be ''Clappin'Tho''
Whats ya ''Occupation''? ...Suckin' At ''Rappin Hoe!''
NICE PERSONAL PUNCH LACKED

Droppin-Acid-Spits...Crack-Ya-Ribz...Lord's Packin Clips...Smack Ya Lipz..
Buck's Gotta Michael Jackson Flow, His Premature Shit's Only Attractin kids.
MJ LINES ARE PLAYED BUT I LIKE THIS ONE NICE MULTI
Xzibit's Gotta new Hobbie..Fuck Pimpin a ride...Now He Pimpin a Verse..
Too Late...Theres An obvious explanation..why his moms layin in a herse
UNLESS YOU'RE XZIBIT I DON'T THINK YOU SHOULDVE USED THIS ONE BAD PUNCH

I gotta give this one to Lord. Wun cause there wasn't much room for battlin in 4 lines so his multi plus funny punch really stood out. Tip for both though, get off the gangsta shit and quit wit the mj lines they're done along with the amputee lines unless they're exceptional.

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Voted For: Lord.Wun

i dunno, pretty easy battle

Lord Wun....
>Droppin-Acid-Spits...Crack-Ya-Ribz...Lord's Packin Clips...Smack Ya Lipz..
Buck's Gotta Michael Jackson Flow, His Premature Shit's Only Attractin kids..
-okay multies...decent punch 7/10
>Xzibit's Gotta new Hobbie..Fuck Pimpin a ride...Now He Pimpin a Verse..
Too Late...Theres An obvious explanation..why his moms layin in a herse
-okay, little weak 6/10

overall: 13/20...solid 4 lines, came hard in the first line, lttle weak in the second though, but you came harder and first punch landed.

Buck.Shot
>Kid ya like a bee, you sting once then you ''Fall''
Ya couldnt ''Land a punch'' against limbless kids in a Brawl
-opener, okay, second line, played 6/10
>Fuck an encore from you, but they will be ''Clappin'Tho''
Whats ya ''Occupation''? ...Suckin' At ''Rappin Hoe!''
-not even really a punch....5/10

overall: 11/20....man, didnt really try in this one eh, only 4 lines so i can see why, but you were pretty weak on the punches, and wun's were a bit better, so he takes it

v/Lord Wun

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LOL...
Right, okay, uhmmmm

lol, thats all i can say...


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Voted For: Lord.Wun

hmmm close battle... imma give this to lord becuz of his first 2 lines they were funny... your multies were decent but you fell off on your last line...

buck... your lines were good flow was on point but your vocab was a lil too simple.. and your lines were more played than lords...

both of you had some decent punches in there but lord gets this bwecuz of his multies and a harder punch...

there sint much to explain in this battle becuz it was only 4 lines osi t was kinda hard... f u want a more explained vote then pm me and i will gladly do it... no hate


stay up

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wat da fuck ahhaha damn.....'nuff katz voted on this shit already....

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Voted For: Buck.Shot

ha easy win .... lord.wun what the hell was the hearse part? haha your shit dosent make sense it was lame and un creative alright wordplay though


meta:bs
punches:bs
everything else...bs

i'd make the whole list but its pretty fuck'n obvious


no hate though


lord wun u def need to elevate

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are you kidding me? lord wun had nothing on that sting line haha he owned his whole drop in one line

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LOL ^^

My thoughts eactly

An that one kid said ''stay off the gangsta shit''.....what was gangsta about my verse?

each line was either a punch or personal, his shit was uhmmm, well let me see, useless boring fillers with no hard hitting nothin basically, an if he gets the win, I RETIRE

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Voted For: Lord.Wun

this battle was 1 sided & here's my opinion:
opener: lord.wun
vocab: lord.wun
structure: buck.shot
multis: lord.wun
closer: lord.wun
lord.wun came harder & hit wit more punches den buck did; nice flow from both but lord had da betta wordplay
make sure 2 return the favor

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