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Old 02-23-05, 06:46 PM   #1
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::..:$lobK::..: vs Unknown prospecT

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Old 02-23-05, 06:46 PM   #2
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Unknown prospecT has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-23-05 06:46 PM.
 
Old 02-23-05, 07:10 PM   #3
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Old 02-23-05, 07:13 PM   #4
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ya rhymes dont cut it...tryn to stab wit a dull knife
i live rugged, but fuck it its my life,im just thuggin
ya buggin...think ya words can hurt me
i know ya name aint james, cuz ya sho' not WORTHY
feel my reign as i disperse these, verses they flame
im a curse to the game just rememba the name
PROSPECT,i know ya ass weak and you aint even dropped yet,
ya name slob k, why is that, cuz you slob the knob
than get pounded from the back,ima phenomenon
n dog ya wack im droppin bombs much like sadaam in fact
ya flow like fuckin wit two condoms on, no feelin that
and if you dont feel me,well feel my gat cuz i bust freely
no matter where im at
 
Old 02-23-05, 07:14 PM   #5
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Homie You Seeking Closure, Your Mind Clearly Doesn't Expose Ya,
And How You Spit "Heat", When JR Already Froze Ya, lol *
Like Orphan Fathers, You're Just Here For Fun, Cuz Theres No Way You're "Ownin" Me,
And U A Vet B?, Are You Serious Man, Like AI Number You're 0 And Three (03),
Of Course I'm Toppin' Ya, I Cant See Ya Game Man, Fuck The Binoculars,
Cuz Like A Nerd In High School, Your Name Alone Says That U Aint Popular (unkwown),
I'll Shatter Ya Limbs..Stop Announcing These Worthless Fibs,
Cuz In RV Ull Fail Quick U Frail Bitch, Like The Council Did lol,
Bring Your Real Rhymes To Explode, Cuz I Got Hollow Tips To Blast At Ya Dome,
And My Thoughts On Ur Rhymes?, Honestly All Your Verses "Prospects" Are 'Unknown'


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Old 02-23-05, 07:24 PM   #6
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you got me but i dont give a fuck it is what it is
 
Old 02-23-05, 07:24 PM   #7
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i dont rap i smack niggas and dick bitches
 
Old 02-23-05, 07:39 PM   #8
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$lobk won dis hands down i dont think i really need to explain myself just say he had nice flow fix structure a lil bit hard hittin punches unknown prospect elevate
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Old 02-23-05, 07:58 PM   #9
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Old 02-23-05, 08:38 PM   #10
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this pretty easy battle to decide, heres what i see....

Yprospect
>ya rhymes dont cut it...tryn to stab wit a dull knife
i live rugged, but fuck it its my life,im just thuggin
-first okay, 2nd line, pointless 3/10
>ya buggin...think ya words can hurt me
i know ya name aint james, cuz ya sho' not WORTHY
-i dunno, really weak....5/10
>feel my reign as i disperse these, verses they flame
im a curse to the game just rememba the name
-again, first line good, but second just went nowhere...4/10
>PROSPECT,i know ya ass weak and you aint even dropped yet,
ya name slob k, why is that, cuz you slob the knob
-doesnt even rhyme, weak attempt at personal too...3/10
>than get pounded from the back,ima phenomenon
n dog ya wack im droppin bombs much like sadaam in fact
-not really rhymin well here....5/10
>ya flow like fuckin wit two condoms on, no feelin that
and if you dont feel me,well feel my gat cuz i bust freely
no matter where im at
-haha, first line was dope, second weak again...6/10

-man, you gotta elevate hardcore bud, sorry to come off all harsh, but your structure was bad, flow needs some work....had good ideas about punches and shit but you gotta up the vocab and wordplay to really make'em hit, nah mean....wird, keep elevatin yo

slobk....solid verse man, not gunna post it up though, in a hurry....i thought your strucure and flow were your weakest points, had good punches/personals and creativity, those were what stood out and really won this...but structure, was lacking, especially near the end...flow little off too....so, just keep that in mind next time, but solid verse man, intro was probs your best line...haha i laughed, same with the school/nerd one....keep elevatin man...wird

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Old 02-23-05, 08:49 PM   #11
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Old 02-24-05, 11:10 AM   #12
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Old 02-24-05, 11:56 AM   #13
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$ won with better vocab punches hit hard good structre and flow and ya metas were good also
best line-Of Course I'm Toppin' Ya, I Cant See Ya Game Man, Fuck The Binoculars,
Cuz Like A Nerd In High School, Your Name Alone Says That U Aint Popular
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Old 02-24-05, 11:08 PM   #14
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Old 02-25-05, 10:36 AM   #15
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Slobk Aka Crip Lol Won Thiss Battle He Came Harder With His Punches And Personals..

Openor=Crip,Good Multies In Tha 1st Lines
Punches=Crip,Had More Creative Punches
Personals=None,Cus Crip Only Had 1
Wordplay=Crip,Cus Had More Wordplay In His Verse
Vokab=None
Structure=Crip,Strukture Fell Off But Wass Easier Ta Read
Closing=Crip,More Creative Closer And Nice Punch

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