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Old 03-05-05, 10:00 PM   #1
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Cincanatus vs Linguistics

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Old 03-05-05, 10:02 PM   #2
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Old 03-05-05, 10:07 PM   #3
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been awhile u miss me? put u out of your misery
what kinda herb brags about a noshow victory
trust me i'll gitcha, the truth must not have hitcha
cuz just like ya sig......
anything to do wit recording is out of the picture
u worse than I thought, need a clue, circle this loss
he been on my dick so long, even my purple rubbed off
C i'm cuttin ya head off, leave it bloody and raw
watch the quick wrist movments, cause i'll arkansas
part this dog, from large ego, but back to the basics
and i'd try to reach ya level...........
...............but virginia aint got basements
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Old 03-05-05, 10:09 PM   #4
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are u gonna check in or WHAT!................


your gonna noshow arent u..................
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Old 03-05-05, 10:27 PM   #5
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Old 03-05-05, 10:40 PM   #6
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Lingustics....Kid Made An Name That He Couldn't Pronounce..
After This Battle You'll Be 4-2 And In Need Of New Accounts..
Ya Career Is Based On, Retarded Kids, Concenrating On Test..
Claim To Be Dope,But I Checked Ya Status You Battles No Vets
Say Virginia Got No Basements? Well Ain't That Where Ya Located
Contradicting Ya Self, Like Miss Understood Sentences Translated
You Keep Riding My Dick Coz You No Showed And Gained A Loss
I Pimp Smack Ya Worse Then A Secretary Who Refrained From His Boss
Insinuated You'd Beat Me...Sherlok Holmes Couldn't Of Told Ya
I's Gonna Expose Ya Whackness But Ya Provided Ya Own Esposer
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Old 03-05-05, 10:43 PM   #7
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you fed off my verse!....................thats herb shit!
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Old 03-05-05, 10:48 PM   #8
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whoa that was pretty dope the stucture was dope the vocab was fire the punches were alright but i didnt feel you were trying to diss him you just went on and on with vocab n shit try and put some creativty and play with some words more i did see you do it but not so offten maybe a few lines and lines but you and cin actually have a simuliar style maybe the same person..pz

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hmm i felt you had dope stucture flow and vocabulary your punches were what won you this the creativty was far beyond his but i feel as if yall are the same persons hmm maybe the colours but iunno you won this with creativty but maybe try not to use so much vocab abd multis actually nm there pretty good like that, pz

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Old 03-05-05, 10:49 PM   #9
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I Got You Parallel Weerd Man.................................
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Old 03-05-05, 10:49 PM   #10
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sry i voted with the wrong account the links in this accounts sig, peace
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Old 03-05-05, 10:50 PM   #11
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Alright Man Consider It Done, I Was Like Yo Where The Links At?? Lol
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Old 03-05-05, 10:56 PM   #12
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Aight..Check'd This Battle..

Lingusitics Took This Battle With These Two Bars..

"trust me i'll gitcha, the truth must not have hitcha
cuz just like ya sig......
anything to do wit recording is out of the picture
u worse than I thought, need a clue, circle this loss
he been on my dick so long, even my purple rubbed off"

Straight Up...Everything Cin Spit I've Heard Before or Either Isn't True.

The Whole Not Battling Vets Thing...I Said That Punch Back When I First Started On RV....and I Know Who Linguistics Really Is and Those Punches Don't Even Relate To Anything About Linguistics.

Vote - Linguistics For Better Punches and Creativity.

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Old 03-05-05, 11:22 PM   #13
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Normal Punches-Cincanatus, overall your punches were pretty good. Kept coming every line and most hit decent. Linguistics, your punches were rather weak and unoriginal (bloody ish).

Personal Punches-Linguistics, you definately got this. I liked the recording line and no show line. Should have kept em coming. Cincanatus, had some personals, but they were worded bad and seemed like you were reaching out for it.

Metaphors-Cincanatus, decent metaphors. I liked the secretary line most. Linguistics, no real metaphors. You need to work on that.

Multiple Rhymes-Linguistics, mostly for having them. Kind of threw off your flow though. Cincanatus, no multis that I saw.

Structure-Cincanatus, just easier to read and better looking. Linguistics, I hate the ..... crap. If it doesn't fit it doesn't fit.

Flow-Cincanatus, nice flow through all of this. Your constant punches kept it moving. Linguistics, your flow was rather choppy and hard to follow.

Word Play-Tie, both didn't have good wordplay.

Cincanatus, overall this is one of your best battle verses I have read. Your personals have improved, along with your punches. Try to include all aspects of a verse, wordplay, multis, etc...

Linguistics, personals were good and were pretty funny. However, your verse didn't offer much to the table and your punches and metaphors were bad. Your "wordplay" wasn't that great either.

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Old 03-05-05, 11:30 PM   #14
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these are gay votes.................fuckin DR's both of u r wack he had some gay ass punches
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Old 03-05-05, 11:36 PM   #15
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how is mine a d/r? i just realized the cin is epic and epic is someone i hated for monthes
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