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Old 05-23-05, 05:10 PM   #1
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Phase vs P.aradox

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Old 05-24-05, 02:43 PM   #2
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Phase has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-24-05 02:43 PM.
 
Old 05-24-05, 03:08 PM   #3
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P.aradox has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-24-05 03:08 PM.
 
Old 05-24-05, 03:09 PM   #4
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I know its alot early but i already had it wrote......

Bitch still lives in the past..refuses to believe Tikz are dead yet…..
Talk shit, my verse will leave ya wide-eyed just like ya text rec…..
Evolved in this battle..this dude has finally moved onto Phase 2…..
Now he's a necrophiliac..cuz his sig is ridin part of a dead crew*…..
Ya don't spit..i got ya silenced like libraries, don't say a word..
Ya an alias, made this fresh account after realisin ya still a herb..
Phase has been P.roperly H.unted A.nd S.laughtered with E.ase……
Wasn't hard, this fool is merely the 3rd 'Phase' of 'herb'itis disease……



*"textual sickness" is the name of the lyrikal saigonz text unit
 
Old 05-24-05, 03:11 PM   #5
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If you dont get the punches then dont vote!!!!!!!!!!

Jus wait 4 dis bitch to drop now!!!!!!!
 
Old 05-25-05, 01:50 PM   #6
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Unaware of His "State" of Mind Delaware Became a Paraodox..
A "Bitch" in Heat This Dogs Always Lookin to ride a Pair a Cocks..
This Kids Like a "Sceptic Tank" All he has Comin out is Shit..
Im Knockin em out in "2" Bars like Roy Jones Jr Taken a Hit..
This Kid aint "Incredible" Cause he Got beat by a Marvel Comic..
Are you Joking This is a "Game" Cause im Kicken his "Tail" Like Sonic..
Real Quik Let me W"rap-it-Up" Like Were Workin a BET HotLine..
Cause i Dont wanna make this kid "Whine" More then a Grape-Vine..
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Old 05-25-05, 01:51 PM   #7
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What are you talkin bout kid LS text unit was illunatext you retard.
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Old 05-25-05, 03:26 PM   #8
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Uppin dis shit 4 votes plz........................
 
Old 05-25-05, 03:39 PM   #9
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Voted For: P.aradox

damn man that was some good shit right there man.... you got thsi battle easy you had structure on lock punches were sick man u just talked about hwerbs too much... u have elevated alot since ur last battle good job homie

phase your l;ines were good but p.aradox came harder just work on better conceps for tyour punches and you'll do better fam...

good battle though keep droppin em....

v/ p.aradox

for having better structure and harder hitting punches...
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Old 05-25-05, 03:45 PM   #10
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Voted For: P.aradox

This was a pretty weak battle but to me P.aradox wont his battle

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Bitch still lives in the past..refuses to believe Tikz are dead yet…..
Talk shit, my verse will leave ya wide-eyed just like ya text rec…..
Evolved in this battle..this dude has finally moved onto Phase 2…..
Now he's a necrophiliac..cuz his sig is ridin part of a dead crew*…..
Ya don't spit..i got ya silenced like libraries, don't say a word..
Ya an alias, made this fresh account after realisin ya still a herb..
Phase has been P.roperly H.unted A.nd S.laughtered with E.ase……
Wasn't hard, this fool is merely the 3rd 'Phase' of 'herb'itis disease……

This was a pretty good drop , had some nice punchlines some were okay , some were just plain fillers.. you tried to use some personals and i comend you on that , but it was okay , nothing really to good , structure was good , flow was decent , .. Overall pretty decent verse... it was enough to win this battle ,..elevate and learn to make more direct punchlines.

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Unaware of His "State" of Mind Delaware Became a Paraodox..
A "Bitch" in Heat This Dogs Always Lookin to ride a Pair a Cocks..
This Kids Like a "Sceptic Tank" All he has Comin out is Shit..
Im Knockin em out in "2" Bars like Roy Jones Jr Taken a Hit..
This Kid aint "Incredible" Cause he Got beat by a Marvel Comic..
Are you Joking This is a "Game" Cause im Kicken his "Tail" Like Sonic..
Real Quik Let me W"rap-it-Up" Like Were Workin a BET HotLine..
Cause i Dont wanna make this kid "Whine" More then a Grape-Vine..

Eh.,.. your verse was pretty good you had like 2 nice bars.. the rest to me were mostly fillrers... you had nice structure... You had an okay personal about being beat by a marvel comic , pretty good , Flow was on point.. you had some okay punchlines..Overall if you came alittle harder you would have won

Overall vote =P.aradox
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Old 05-25-05, 05:05 PM   #11
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Lmao this shits halarious now i see why poeple say RV is all DR's and kids who dont know how to battle.
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Old 05-25-05, 05:07 PM   #12
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LoL seys dis bitch^^^^^

so hu u be????

N uppin!!!!!!!
 
Old 05-26-05, 11:24 AM   #13
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Uppin this shit 4 votes plz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
Old 05-26-05, 11:37 AM   #14
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This was feedback posted for P.aradox

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Checkin Polls..

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Old 05-26-05, 04:09 PM   #15
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Uppin for some more votes plz.....................rtf!!!!!
 
 


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