Battle Rules:

8 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No d/r
No Hate

Minimum posts to vote: 300

Check in by: 05-28-05 at 08:45 AM

Must drop verse in 50 minutes after check in.

Saskilla has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-28-05 08:16 AM.

Premanition has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-28-05 08:24 AM.

Prem's left cluthing at a broken future, & searching for inspirations attack.
Having said that, ya like a injecting farmer lookin for a needle inna haystack.
Ya inferior Prem, ya texting attributes are jus worthless.
& I kno P forsaw the L, so if my fate is merking you, jus watch me serve my purpose.
Don't try and fight it Prem, don't make ya demise delayed.
Cuz ya doom will be delivered...
Like you ordered the game from ebay!*
I'll uppercut ya chin & knock out ya tooth.
Cuz I be callin the shots..
Like the sniper outta "Phone Booth"!..**


Explanations for the idiots :
* Doom is a game. You should get the wordplay.
** Phone booth is that film about the man in a phone booth targeted by a sniper. Callin the shots, you should get this.
If ya don't get tit still then don't fucking vote.

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Ur ‘expressionless’, drawin blanks like tracin ya ‘face’
Ya mum only gave birth cos you were wastin her space
New to these surroundings, adjusting like blind babies
Shit when it comes to voting your even behind ladies
Hope to fuck your reading this cos seeing is believing
Give sas a piece of his own, but im preferable 2 bleedin
challenge me? Damn! You must be opposed to victory
Infact its quite intelligent, now you’ll go down in history

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Voted For: Saskilla

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..The Council..
7 Day Theory

Voted For: Saskilla

Weak battle overall.

Prem- No real punches in your verse. Any punch you had was rather weak, and no real personals. No real wordplay, no multis, really nothing in your verse. You self glorified as well. Voting punch was weak, the only real bar I liked was the first. But mom punches are played as well.

Sas- Not a great verse overall, but your punches hit harder as well as your personal did. You started going downhil when you switched up your structure. Your Prem personal was the best part of your verse. Work on putting more personals in your verses.

Overall both of you came rather weak, and need to work on personals.
(RTF)

v- Saskilla

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ur fuckin kiddin me, damn this kid came played as fuck.....shit mine was quick but my first bar was beta than his whole verse

uppin

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Voted For: Premanition

Ur ‘expressionless’, drawin blanks like tracin ya ‘face’
Ya mum only gave birth cos you were wastin her space
New to these surroundings, adjusting like blind babies
Shit when it comes to voting your even behind ladies
Hope to fuck your reading this cos seeing is believing
Give sas a piece of his own, but im preferable 2 bleedin
challenge me? Damn! You must be opposed to victory
Infact its quite intelligent, now you’ll go down in history

Yo Dat Verse Wuz Tite Dawg, Nice Punchez & Metaphours, Sum Basic Wordplay Tho, But It Wuz Styll Effective Enough, Real Dope Flow An Da Structure Lookin Lyke A Box, Good Job.


Prem's left cluthing at a broken future, & searching for inspirations attack.
Having said that, ya like a injecting farmer lookin for a needle inna haystack.
Ya inferior Prem, ya texting attributes are jus worthless.
& I kno P forsaw the L, so if my fate is merking you, jus watch me serve my purpose.
Don't try and fight it Prem, don't make ya demise delayed.
Cuz ya doom will be delivered...
Like you ordered the game from ebay!*
I'll uppercut ya chin & knock out ya tooth.
Cuz I be callin the shots..
Like the sniper outta "Phone Booth"!..**

Yo I Saw Dat Needle In A Haystack Line Sumwhere Else On Diz Site, But Wateva Yo, Ya' Verse Wuz Iight, Personalz Didnt Have Az Much Effect Az Premantiton, Flow Wuz Tite, Wordplay Fo Da Most Part Wuz Better Than Premanitions.

Vote/ Premanition, Much Harder Personalz & Punchez, Creative Wordplay Went 2 Saskilla, But Hiz Verse Wuznt As Consistant Az Premanition

Plz Return Da Vote, Links R In Da Signature, Pz Out.

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Shutup Prem, stop bitching. & look at the status of people that voted for me, then look at who voted for you. See the difference in experience? & I keyed this as well.

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U Wuz Biting Linez & Plus Wut Do U Mean ''Check Da Status'' I Beat Skriptz?

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Post A Better Poll Count If U Dont Want ''My Status'' Ov People Voting In Diz Battle

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