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6 -10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 200

Check in by: 06-08-05 at 01:39 AM

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Monopoly has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-08-05 01:10 AM.

¤ÐÅž¤ has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-08-05 01:14 AM.

I’ll Easily dismantle this herb, really ive battled nobody wacker
N yes im flippin the bird, just to prove poly’ll choke on a cracker
Your game is over….. ya properties are now part of my gallery
Cuz im running over you, like this is a fuckin monster truck rally
You’re a mistake…… like homophobic companies hiring gays
Beat me ? how..? when his lines are more tired then drive ways
You’re the worst I can tell, poly’s fakin on this board n shit
N if your verse was raising hell, Satan would be an orphan kid

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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!

Voted For: ¤ÐÅž¤

>Daz Couldn't Drop Dope If He Came With An Ounce Of Weed
He Grip Balls Like Spalding, And I Got This Faggot Bouncing G
meh, basic 5/10
>Sep 04 You Joined You Got No Life With Over 3,500 Post Kid
If RV Had A Gay Sex League......Daz Would Probably Host It
uhh, no 0/10, everthing wrong with this
>Record 18-3, That Must No Be True But Yo Establish This Man
'Cutting' Your Win Streak Like 'Circulations On Tight Wrist Bands'
not bad 5/10
>Daz Winning 'Parapalegics' Have Better Odds Of Doing 'Back Flips'
Call Em A 'Magician' Cuz He Pull's D/R Votes Out Like 'Hat Tricks'
pretty sure ive seen this concept, magic lines are played too 1/10
>Establish This Fact, Daz Couldn't Win With Four Votes Ahead
Turn Around & Leave This Kid R.I.P......Like Old Folks In Bed
meh, boring 4/10

overall: 15/50....uhh, too many played concepts, no real personals....no effective punches, really need to work on alot man, overall, you had nothing that great, nothing stood out, nothing creative, elevate.

DAZ, uhh, you won, i liked the opener and closer, thats all you needed, the monster truck punch was weak and shitty though, too basic, but still, you won this and no need to break it down, good battle man.

v/daz. rtf on the link in my sig.

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Voted For: ¤ÐÅž¤

Daz Couldn't Drop Dope If He Came With An Ounce Of Weed
He Grip Balls Like Spalding, And I Got This Faggot Bouncing G
- The first line was a good wordplay...with a punch but the 2nd line was blah...

Sep 04 You Joined You Got No Life With Over 3,500 Post Kid
If RV Had A Gay Sex League......Daz Would Probably Host It
-Alright Rv you sucked at life jokes are played, even though it's an personal you could've word that first line better, and the 2nd line, gay jokes are played aswell. Making this bar not a good punch.


Record 18-3, That Must No Be True But Yo Establish This Man
'Cutting' Your Win Streak Like 'Circulations On Tight Wrist Bands'
^^ Alright i like this, you had a wordplay with a personal and a punch, plus a metaphor decent bar punch.


Daz Winning 'Parapalegics' Have Better Odds Of Doing 'Back Flips'
Call Em A 'Magician' Cuz He Pull's D/R Votes Out Like 'Hat Tricks'
^^ Ha, i like this bar, had a wordplay and a personal. I like the 2nd line, but the 1st line wasn't good, the 1st line was boust to be a set up line toward the 2nd line making a punch, but the 2nd was a good punch.


Establish This Fact, Daz Couldn't Win With Four Votes Ahead
Turn Around & Leave This Kid R.I.P......Like Old Folks In Bed
^^ Meh Ok closer. I think this was not effective, cause i've seen 1st and 2nd line use so many times. But an ok punch.


Overall=You had 2 dope bars in this verse, but the rest was shitty man, even though you had nice wordplays along with them the punches wasn't connecting or hard hitting.

I’ll Easily dismantle this herb, really ive battled nobody wacker
N yes im flippin the bird, just to prove poly’ll choke on a cracker
^^ I like this bar of punch great meta, and ok set up line could've been better, but decent punch though, with a personal.

Your game is over….. ya properties are now part of my gallery
Cuz im running over you, like this is a fuckin monster truck rally
^^ Meh didnt really feel that as a decent punch, it was "ok".......

You’re a mistake…… like homophobic companies hiring gays
Beat me ? how..? when his lines are more tired then drive ways
^^ I like this the 2nd line was a decent punch, but the 1st line was played out, stop with the gay jokes people.


You’re the worst I can tell, poly’s fakin on this board n shit
N if your verse was raising hell, Satan would be an orphan kid
^^ MUWHAHAHAHAHAHA nice punch, that was creative.


Overall=Daz you had a 1 or 2 mistakes in your verse. But the rest was good nice personal on the first line along with the wordplay and the meta. The best aspect in your verse was Punches and wordplays....


Conclusion=Alright Both had good verse, but i'm going to vote for Daz cause his punches (i felt) hit harder than monopoly. Monopoly verse was ok, the punches was not effective, the wordplays was great though, but i felt his punches wasn't hard hitting, next time word your sentence to make it a decent punch. I vote for daz because he had Less played lines and more hard hitting punches than monopoly.......

V/DAZ

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Voted For: ¤ÐÅž¤

Monopoly:

Daz Couldn't Drop Dope If He Came With An Ounce Of Weed
He Grip Balls Like Spalding, And I Got This Faggot Bouncing G
gay jokes is gettin played....3/10
Sep 04 You Joined You Got No Life With Over 3,500 Post Kid
If RV Had A Gay Sex League......Daz Would Probably Host It
like i said in the first bar...3/10
Record 18-3, That Must No Be True But Yo Establish This Man
'Cutting' Your Win Streak Like 'Circulations On Tight Wrist Bands'
ehhh....wasnt feelin it to much...4.5/10
Daz Winning 'Parapalegics' Have Better Odds Of Doing 'Back Flips'
Call Em A 'Magician' Cuz He Pull's D/R Votes Out Like 'Hat Tricks'
...5/10...
Establish This Fact, Daz Couldn't Win With Four Votes Ahead
Turn Around & Leave This Kid R.I.P......Like Old Folks In Bed
weak...3/10

overall-18.5/50(37%)

Daz:

I’ll Easily dismantle this herb, really ive battled nobody wacker
N yes im flippin the bird, just to prove poly’ll choke on a cracker
good opener...clever bar...6.5/10
Your game is over….. ya properties are now part of my gallery
Cuz im running over you, like this is a fuckin monster truck rally
no....3/10
You’re a mistake…… like homophobic companies hiring gays
Beat me ? how..? when his lines are more tired then drive ways
ehh...not feelin that to much...4/10
You’re the worst I can tell, poly’s fakin on this board n shit
N if your verse was raising hell, Satan would be an orphan kid
decent...5/10

overall-18.5/40(46%)

you know who gets the vote

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opener and closer won this battle no doubt........ i wanan give u negative scores for the two middle bars..... but even with that u killed himmm...... do i even need to explain, u had nice punches, personals, and name flips with the "poly" and cracker line, along with the setup to the second bar (which was penislicking at its finesT) ur 3rd bar was ok, and altho it had a very unique twist, the "tired" and "wheels" meta is gettin pretty played.... and than ur closer was hot

Monopoly had a pretty boring verse..... not much to say about besides the fact that it was bad.... i think ur only decent line was:
Call Em A 'Magician' Cuz He Pull's D/R Votes Out Like 'Hat Tricks'

and thats only because im hopin u sed it cuz that RV member named "Hattrick" Dr's him (i dont even know if he does, but thats the only way any of his bars were dope) but even with that assumption u still got killed.......

V/ this guy

^^^^^^^ thats gay, i wanted that to be a vote......... i give full authority for u guys to go get that fixed (i swear thats gotta be the first time someone clicked Feedback wen theyve wanted to post a vote)

Voted For: ¤ÐÅž¤

Daz Couldn't Drop Dope If He Came With An Ounce Of Weed
He Grip Balls Like Spalding, And I Got This Faggot Bouncing G
3...two of the most played concepts on RV....you need to come with some originality, weak opener!!
Sep 04 You Joined You Got No Life With Over 3,500 Post Kid
If RV Had A Gay Sex League......Daz Would Probably Host It
4...played concept again, layo ff the homo shit, and usin his post count as a punch is weak!!
Record 18-3, That Must No Be True But Yo Establish This Man
'Cutting' Your Win Streak Like 'Circulations On Tight Wrist Bands'
5...better, ok piece of wordplay, but again ya using stupid concepts for punches, like using his battle record, only do that if it can be used as a real clever punch!!
Daz Winning 'Parapalegics' Have Better Odds Of Doing 'Back Flips'
Call Em A 'Magician' Cuz He Pull's D/R Votes Out Like 'Hat Tricks'
6...decent bar, the dickriding concept is played, but not as played as the others you've used, also you made a fairly decent line out of it!!
Establish This Fact, Daz Couldn't Win With Four Votes Ahead
Turn Around & Leave This Kid R.I.P......Like Old Folks In Bed
5...kinda weak, and the concept of old folks in bed restin in peace is weak!!

OVERALL: 23/50


I’ll Easily dismantle this herb, really ive battled nobody wacker
N yes im flippin the bird, just to prove poly’ll choke on a cracker
5...not really feelin this opener, the setup line was kinda weak.
Your game is over….. ya properties are now part of my gallery
Cuz im running over you, like this is a fuckin monster truck rally
6...playin off his name cud've been better, the monster truck rally concept was nice.
You’re a mistake…… like homophobic companies hiring gays
Beat me ? how..? when his lines are more tired then drive ways
7...decent bar, the homo shit at first glance i was gonna say played, but ya not directly callin him a homo so it was good, also the tired/tyred wordplay with the driveways shit was dope!!
You’re the worst I can tell, poly’s fakin on this board n shit
N if your verse was raising hell, Satan would be an orphan kid
6...decent closer, the setup wasn't all that good but the punch itself was nice.

OVERALL: 24/40


different line amount....no need for percentages cuz Daz had more points and dropped less lines
he came more consistent with some dope punches, one i wasnt really feelin.....monopoly used too many played concepts and only brought like one or two decent punches.....

V/ - Daz

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Voted For: ¤ÐÅž¤


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Voted For: ¤ÐÅž¤

I’ll Easily dismantle this herb, really ive battled nobody wacker
N yes im flippin the bird, just to prove poly’ll choke on a cracker
Your game is over….. ya properties are now part of my gallery
Cuz im running over you, like this is a fuckin monster truck rally
You’re a mistake…… like homophobic companies hiring gays
Beat me ? how..? when his lines are more tired then drive ways
You’re the worst I can tell, poly’s fakin on this board n shit
N if your verse was raising hell, Satan would be an orphan kid

Nothin 2 Special, closer wuz hot az hell yo, really feelin dat, nuthin 2 spectacular wid da wordplay, nice concepts 4 ya punches though. overall a much mo complex verse


Daz Couldn't Drop Dope If He Came With An Ounce Of Weed
He Grip Balls Like Spalding, And I Got This Faggot Bouncing G
Sep 04 You Joined You Got No Life With Over 3,500 Post Kid
If RV Had A Gay Sex League......Daz Would Probably Host It
Record 18-3, That Must No Be True But Yo Establish This Man
'Cutting' Your Win Streak Like 'Circulations On Tight Wrist Bands'
Daz Winning 'Parapalegics' Have Better Odds Of Doing 'Back Flips'
Call Em A 'Magician' Cuz He Pull's D/R Votes Out Like 'Hat Tricks'
Establish This Fact, Daz Couldn't Win With Four Votes Ahead
Turn Around & Leave This Kid R.I.P......Like Old Folks In Bed

wuzznt feelin yo verse, alot ov played concepts, wpordplay wuz 2 basic. gay concepts=played...spalding/basketball lines=played [unless u use dem correctly] dat old folks in bed line wuz iight, shame bout da rest ov ur verse though

Vote=Daz--much better concepts wit da punchlines, disses were strong, flow wuz good, juz a more enjoyable & complex verse

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