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06-13-05, 06:33 PM | #1 | |||||||
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Jersey Lite vs Sabotage
IP: D119 B4DA
Battle Rules:
8 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting No Hate Votes No Running No D/R Minimum posts to vote: 100 Check in by: 06-14-05 at 06:33 PM Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in. This Battle Is Now Closed
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06-13-05, 09:46 PM | #2 | ||||||
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IP: D119 B4DA
Jersey Lite has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-13-05 09:46 PM.
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06-13-05, 10:35 PM | #3 | |||||||
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IP: D119 B4DA
i been in jail you've had six month to perpare son
but still you only gonna shine if you in my glare son the only street you no has the first name maryl in the game game you outa place like elves and will farrel this is like phone sex because you geting fuck on this line i went to jail but you staying behide my bars this time chris reevers styles cause flow is retarded how many times was your record was restarted
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06-13-05, 10:38 PM | #4 | |||||||
New to RV
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IP: D119 B4DA
a little weak but i'm just getting back to it nah mean
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06-14-05, 04:30 AM | #5 | ||||||
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IP: 2029 97B3
sabotage has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-14-05 04:30 AM.
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06-14-05, 04:32 AM | #6 | |||
-BTR-
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IP: 2029 97B3
Ima take it easy on you nigga im full of vengeance and hate
Who really cares? Miami already burned up what Trenton makes* Yeah right you gonna beat sabotage, u need to go back to stand-up This faggot can’t hold me, I’ll break through ya damn handcuffs** You used to be A.K.A so u left, ya skillz was lame Make this nigga throw up blood like he was rolling with Game You one of the best on this site? Yeah you like to fantasize Jersey Lite aint enough for me, I got too big of an appetite *Miami Heat beat New Jersey Nets in playoffs..Trenton, NJ **His sig you should be able to understand everything but thats just for us slow people |
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06-14-05, 11:17 AM | #7 | ||||
Light Weight
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IP: 452E 0970
Voted For: sabotage
betta punchlinez n´flow I liked that shit alot there wuz sum rhymes I wasnt feelin but it wuz nothin that made me think this wuz bad...keep it up dawg now the other dude he got good punchlinez n´flow but nothin that blow me off my mind ya know what I mean....and still I dont like niggaz who always sayin out loud that they spend sum time in jail.....get over it nigga live on n´forget about it Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.
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"You Gotta Clean Your Life Before You Begin Your Life, You Dumb Nigga" -2Pac- SHEEP CLUB 4 EVA <img src="http://www.bestanimations.com/Humans/SkullBones/SkullBones-01.gif"> Keep Votin (Ill RTF) Me Vs Ax Dogg...Dont listen to the haters..I didnt bite any line... Me Vs Murdz |
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06-14-05, 03:50 PM | #8 | |||
-BTR-
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IP: 2029 97B3
...............come on yo keep votin................
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06-14-05, 03:51 PM | #9 | ||||
†•The Council Nigga •†
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This was feedback posted for sabotage
IP: B91A F28C
checkin the polls......
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06-14-05, 04:05 PM | #10 | |||||||
~*This Worldz A Sin So Why Hate Me For My Habits~*
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IP: 2029 97B3
Voted For: sabotage
This was A Alright Battle!liked Sabotag's vErse better!: Explanation: Ima take it easy on you nigga im full of vengeance and hate Who really cares? Miami already burned up what Trenton makes* This Was Weak 6/10 Yeah right you gonna beat sabotage, u need to go back to stand-up This faggot can’t hold me, I’ll break through ya damn handcuffs** ^Weak Personal 6/10 You used to be A.K.A so u left, ya skillz was lame Make this nigga throw up blood like he was rolling with Game ^ok 6.5/10 You one of the best on this site? Yeah you like to fantasize Jersey Lite aint enough for me, I got too big of an appetite ^Weak Closer 6/10 ~~~~~~~~~ Jersey: i been in jail you've had six month to perpare son but still you only gonna shine if you in my glare son ^Weak Punch 6/10 the only street you no has the first name maryl in the game game you outa place like elves and will farrel ^Real Weak 5.5/10 this is like phone sex because you geting fuck on this line i went to jail but you staying behide my bars this time ^Better 6.5/10 chris reevers styles cause flow is retarded how many times was your record was restarted ^Weak 5.5/10 ~~~~~~~~~ This Was A Decent Batte!Sab i seen you spit alot better homie!n Jersey i never seen ya spit!so this is a first!but Sab got this Battle! Punches=Sab Personalz=Sab WP=Sab Structure=Draw Opener=Sab closer=sab No Need To proceed.... ~~~~~~~~~~~ Pleaz Return The Favor In ma Battle With EC! (Link Below) HONEST VOTES ONLY!
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06-14-05, 04:48 PM | #11 | |||||||
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IP: D119 B4DA
upping and ghost you prolly seen me spit but you didn't no it this is A.K.A.
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06-14-05, 09:04 PM | #12 | |||||||
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IP: D119 B4DA
uppping for people to really read each verse lol jk but for real uppin
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06-14-05, 10:45 PM | #13 | ||||
B.I.G.
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IP: F2F7 D6F2
Voted For: sabotage
GOOD: Flow - Kinda Tie, But Jersey lost it in the last two lines Structure - Tie Punchlines - Sabotage vocab - Sabotage Wordplay - nope Nameplay - Sabotage BAD: forced Rhymes - no Forced Multis - no Non Sence - no CREATIVITY Theme Battle - no Creative Punches - Sabotage creative multi's - no PERSONALS: I saw one hard hittin from sabotage, so that's enough for this.. OPENING/CLOSING: Opening: Tie Closing: Sabotage COMMENT: This battle wasn't good, Sabotage took it easy on you and even though he won, nigga keep up with the punches n try ta use more wordplay.... keep up Sabotage: 7/10 Jerzey: 4/10 V/ Sabotage
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06-15-05, 02:10 AM | #14 | |||
-BTR-
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IP: 2029 97B3
yes...up 3-0.....
.....keep them votes comin........ |
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06-15-05, 05:14 AM | #15 | |||||
aMERiKaZ NiGHTMaRE!
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IP: 3240 794D
Voted For: sabotage
sabotoge: Ima take it easy on you nigga im full of vengeance and hate Who really cares? Miami already burned up what Trenton makes* ^^^GOOD OPENER/PERSONAL Yeah right you gonna beat sabotage, u need to go back to stand-up This faggot can’t hold me, I’ll break through ya damn handcuffs** ^^^^ANOTHER GOOD PERSONAL You used to be A.K.A so u left, ya skillz was lame Make this nigga throw up blood like he was rolling with Game ^^^I RECENTLY SAID A THROW UP BLOOD LINE...BUT DIS WAS DECENT You one of the best on this site? Yeah you like to fantasize Jersey Lite aint enough for me, I got too big of an appetite ^^FANTASIZE & APPETITE DONT RYHME...U FORCE DAT jersey lite: i been in jail you've had six month to perpare son but still you only gonna shine if you in my glare son ^^NO the only street you no has the first name maryl in the game game you outa place like elves and will farrel ^^^I DIDN'T GET IT this is like phone sex because you geting fuck on this line i went to jail but you staying behide my bars this time ^^^DA 1ST LINE WAS DOPE..BUT DA SECOND FUKKED EEVRYTHING UP chris reevers styles cause flow is retarded how many times was your record was restarted ^^WHUT????LOL V/SAB....DIS WAS A WUN SIDED BATTLE
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