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Check in by: 11-12-05 at 02:08 PM

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~stylez~ has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-09-05 02:15 PM.

- Menace - has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-09-05 02:17 PM.

ima drop the same shit i did last time man...................

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Your minds polluted with fakeness,you make mythological tracks
Lyrically your JUST a joke,.....without the comical acts.
service-man.. read the chronicle-facts, ya cant excape-me...
ya brains dialated like the vagina of a mutilated rapee
so go-ahead use your rap-style to try n foKuss,
- Menace -was born dumb, so his uni-brow had to show him where his nose-is
Face it- you not ill......enough you’re way too basic
You couldn’t even evolve to be as phat as me if you could shapeshift
Am I Serious Nah, I'll Take him as a Joke, like a Humorous Kidnappin'
Break you Down to the Simplest Form just like Reducin' Fractions
he got dick-jokes, the truth-is-exposed, FOOLS raps CANT-diss,
your rap credits like yer flow, cause we all know.. IT-DONT-EXIST!!!
im aka bebe cuz i get the PUSSY all the time.....
u SHOULD be AKA'd charmain cuz ur soft wit ya rhymes.
i know you wont stutter cuz u a pro @ DONT CHOKE
like monica Lewinsky when it cam to DEEP THROAT.
Are you DUMB OR INSANE? Ya NOT SICK...u aint droppin FLAMES,
drop'n ya I.D. in a stopped up toilet is the only time HOT SHIT'S UNDER YA NAME
Like bronchitis-inflicted, you can't even breathe the air that I breath.
Sick fo' real. The name's ~StyleZ~. Your schemes are just ill-concieved.



this was honestly rushed..........hahahaha


MENACE you have the advantage cuz you saw my verse.......

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LISTEN

...Ill bust your HEAD-INTO-PARTS, and like drawing valentines cards with pencil ill take the LEAD TO YOUR HEART
I’m always AHEAD IN THE CHARTS, in this battle your verse was like a miscarriage cause it was DEAD FROM THE START
...Check it I’m EXPOSIN TYRANTS n LOADIN IRON. Just like Tennesse I 'Roll Wit TITANS
You better duck when I come wit "Punches" cuz I’ll take "Shots At Ya Face" like PHOTO LICENCES
...I Aint A 'Crack Head' But I'll SMOKE-YA-LINES!! Nd CHOKE-YA-SPINE!!!... I 'Dont Care For You' But You'd Swear I Did Cuz When 'Gunz Come Out' I'mma LEAVE WITH AN OPEN MIND!!!
...I'll Have Styles Fucked, Please Believe Your Bars Suck… When I Have ‘Bolts Of Lightning Strike You’ To “Jar Your Mind's Eye Into Thinkin' It's Seein' Famous People” - Just To Leave This “Star Struck”…
...Actually ITHROW-BITCHES, Smackin ya with NO-WITNESSES – Cuz Menace can catch a “shot to throat” and watch as Style leave while Coffin Up Blood like ‘[b]DRACULA WIT COLD SYMPTOMS


I had Fun

aight homes this was a good battle............people have to vote on this.............


if your GON DR people then get out..............cuz ill have your VOTE DQ'D...........


now uppin this HOT BATTLE!

nice drop homes.

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uppin this shit c'mon...................................

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Voted For: - Menace -

This was a pretty cool battle but menace took this one easily

~STYLEZ~
Your minds polluted with fakeness,you make mythological tracks
Lyrically your JUST a joke,.....without the comical acts.
Naw weak opener
service-man.. read the chronicle-facts, ya cant excape-me...
ya brains dialated like the vagina of a mutilated rapee
Nope
so go-ahead use your rap-style to try n foKuss,
- Menace -was born dumb, so his uni-brow had to show him where his nose-is
Nope
Face it- you not ill......enough you’re way too basic
You couldn’t even evolve to be as phat as me if you could shapeshift
Wtf?
Am I Serious Nah, I'll Take him as a Joke, like a Humorous Kidnappin'
Break you Down to the Simplest Form just like Reducin' Fractions
Okay?
he got dick-jokes, the truth-is-exposed, FOOLS raps CANT-diss,
your rap credits like yer flow, cause we all know.. IT-DONT-EXIST!!!
Decent
im aka bebe cuz i get the PUSSY all the time.....
u SHOULD be AKA'd charmain cuz ur soft wit ya rhymes.
i know you wont stutter cuz u a pro @ DONT CHOKE
like monica Lewinsky when it cam to DEEP THROAT.
Okay
Are you DUMB OR INSANE? Ya NOT SICK...u aint droppin FLAMES,
drop'n ya I.D. in a stopped up toilet is the only time HOT SHIT'S UNDER YA NAME
Like bronchitis-inflicted, you can't even breathe the air that I breath.
Sick fo' real. The name's ~StyleZ~. Your schemes are just ill-concieved
Decent couple barz, and closer

Overall this verse could have been alot better..not very hard hitten punchlines , and not very hard hitten personals elevate.

-Menace-
...Ill bust your HEAD-INTO-PARTS, and like drawing valentines cards with pencil ill take the LEAD TO YOUR HEART
I’m always AHEAD IN THE CHARTS, in this battle your verse was like a miscarriage cause it was DEAD FROM THE START
Woo..nice opener
...Check it I’m EXPOSIN TYRANTS n LOADIN IRON. Just like Tennesse I 'Roll Wit TITANS
You better duck when I come wit "Punches" cuz I’ll take "Shots At Ya Face" like PHOTO LICENCES
Ha nice punchline
...I Aint A 'Crack Head' But I'll SMOKE-YA-LINES!! Nd CHOKE-YA-SPINE!!!... I 'Dont Care For You' But You'd Swear I Did Cuz When 'Gunz Come Out' I'mma LEAVE WITH AN OPEN MIND!!!
Damn[/n]
...I'll Have Styles Fucked, Please Believe Your Bars Suck… When I Have ‘Bolts Of Lightning Strike You’ To “Jar Your Mind's Eye Into Thinkin' It's Seein' Famous People” - Just To Leave This “Star Struck”…
[b]hAHA NICE
...Actually ITHROW-BITCHES, Smackin ya with NO-WITNESSES – Cuz Menace can catch a “shot to throat” and watch as Style leave while Coffin Up Blood like ‘DRACULA WIT COLD SYMPTOMS
[b]Decent closer

Overall pretty easy battle to vote winner: -Menace-

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Voted For: - Menace -

no JOKE CLOSE BATTLE....real nice battle..i can't vote...aight i will though




stylez-verse was fiya...had some nice punches and personals in there...flow was there too....had me gone wit a couple of those lines....Gone=laughin....but it seemed like you feel off a lil bit at the end wit the monica lewinsky line...but you had that shit line to cover up a lil bit for that....but nice verse overall


8/10




Menace-every single one of your bars hit...didn't really see that many personals but you punches are what grabbed my attention...i see that you put a lil bit of thought in your lines and it made em real nice...dracula line i shit myself and that lightnin line i almost gave up on readn the other guys verse...and all those other punches are nice too....so nice verse

9.7/10

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Voted For: ~stylez~

I Voted 4 ~stylez~

~stylez~
Best Lines:

Your minds polluted with fakeness,you make mythological tracks
Lyrically your JUST a joke,.....without the comical acts.
service-man.. read the chronicle-facts, ya cant excape-me...
ya brains dialated like the vagina of a mutilated rapee



Gotti Nuffguns
BEst Lines:

Check it I’m EXPOSIN TYRANTS n LOADIN IRON. Just like Tennesse I 'Roll Wit TITANS
You better duck when I come wit "Punches" cuz I’ll take "Shots At Ya Face" like PHOTO LICENCES

Overall: stylez had better flow and stucture, rushed and all

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