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Old 05-08-07, 07:05 PM   #1
Dickard.
A Life Of Chryme
 
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laxdnota vs Mystic.

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6 - 14 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

3-0 tko

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 05-08-07 at 10:25 PM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.


Win by 3-0 KO


This Battle Is Now Closed

 
Old 05-08-07, 07:10 PM   #2
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Mystic. has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-08-07 07:10 PM.
 
Old 05-08-07, 07:26 PM   #3
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laxdnota has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-08-07 07:26 PM.
 
Old 05-08-07, 07:38 PM   #4
Dickard.
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http://img2.imagetitan.com/img2/small/2/2_derek.jpg
^check that link before you read

will someone please tell me who the fuck laxdnota is
comin on this site like he's gonna smash the olda kids

....

Lax stays on websites and aim all day ...that just aint right
I knew you was on a downfall wen u made myspace ya life
You rap to impress m&m, u claim to have met kim n the family
Then i got to ur house...
........green brown red?? The fucka only sent you the candy
You fuckin suck your raps are horrible reading them is hard
its like your retarded....well you deff. look the part..
haha seriously whose that lil boy you just lookin to get action
he's ur 23rd case mj they call you laxdnota jackson


this should be enough to end his life?
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Old 05-08-07, 07:40 PM   #5
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ur lines r sick i give u that
but mine'll drop u like a $50 sack
ur rhymes make sense
but i could buy them for 50 cents
like the artist
but his art is worth more urs
so u didnt hafta hint ur price
im a rookie and not too good
but id buy u out with a roll of a dice
so u can call me back in business
and ur just senseless and cents less than mine
its tha end of this rhyme n crazier than ur "life of chryme"
peace out rest ur lines sit back and feel my wrath
 
Old 05-08-07, 07:54 PM   #6
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A Life Of Chryme
 
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uppin for some votes, lets get them rolling in,,,,,
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Old 05-08-07, 08:06 PM   #7
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mine sucked. i got better tho. i got the structure but need more punchlines and better ones.
 
Old 05-08-07, 08:34 PM   #8
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Voted For: Mystic.

and ur just senseless and cents less than mine
its tha end of this rhyme n crazier than ur "life of chryme

vs

You rap to impress m&m, u claim to have met kim n the family
Then i got to ur house...
........green brown red?? The fucka only sent you the candy

mystic got this hands down no comp at all...
this kid need alot of work to be done before he can be consider a contender for anyone at all....

i mean im not hate'in im just saying this so that u look at ya verse look at mystic and gkillaz mines in our battle and just learn something from it like how to create a punchline alone with a punchline set upa nd multis ECT...

you'll get the point after a while just research the battler before u battle them to see if you stand a chance kid....


mystic no need to tell you that this verse was weak coming from you...
but by far more then enuff to take him oout...
 
Old 05-08-07, 09:08 PM   #9
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Voted For: Mystic.

laxdnota:
nothin' man.. you need more practice.. although that verse was better then any of you other verses.

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Mystic:
You fuckin suck your raps are horrible reading them is hard
its like your retarded....well you deff. look the part..

your verse was nothin' special, but im guessin' you knew you didnt need much.

Retrun the Fav on one of my battles in front line.
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Old 05-09-07, 10:41 PM   #10
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uppin............................................. ........
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Old 05-10-07, 04:11 PM   #11
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vote you fucks............................................. ....
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Old 05-10-07, 10:22 PM   #12
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uppin............................................. .....
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Old 05-11-07, 03:32 PM   #13
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please just vote..........................................
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Old 05-14-07, 08:10 PM   #14
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u;pppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppin.....
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Old 05-14-07, 10:06 PM   #15
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Voted For: Mystic.

ur lines r sick i give u that
but mine'll drop u like a $50 sack
flow isn’t perfect with such small lines, which is bad, and punch is played
ur rhymes make sense
but i could buy them for 50 cents
WTF? Gtfoh this sucks
like the artist
but his art is worth more urs
…no
so u didnt hafta hint ur price
im a rookie and not too good
but id buy u out with a roll of a dice
wtf? Are u even serious?
so u can call me back in business
were the fuck is this spose to be
and ur just senseless and cents less than mine
its tha end of this rhyme n crazier than ur "life of chryme"
No, wtf are u talking about?
peace out rest ur lines sit back and feel my wrath
Ummm forget another line?

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^check that link before you read
lmao @ pic
will someone please tell me who the fuck laxdnota is
comin on this site like he's gonna smash the olda kids
....

Lax stays on websites and aim all day ...that just aint right
I knew you was on a downfall wen u made myspace ya life
flow isn’t good…don’t like the bar
You rap to impress m&m, u claim to have met kim n the family
Then i got to ur house...
........green brown red?? The fucka only sent you the candy
Rhyme scheme was OFF…FA/MI/LY and CAN/DY don’t match up syllable wise..
You fuckin suck your raps are horrible reading them is hard
its like your retarded....well you deff. look the part..
LMFAO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ! this bar is fucking jokes yo, nice punch
haha seriously whose that lil boy you just lookin to get action
he's ur 23rd case mj they call you laxdnota jackson
meh…decent at best

this should be enough to end his life?


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Best use of bars-M
Punches-M
Ahhh Fuck it, Everything-M


Vote-This was a blowout, mystic wins, was that other guy foreal? If so….dammmm
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