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This was feedback posted for intensify effect
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intensify effect
i'll twist N compress this "forgetten-duke" skills, cuz hes "yung-flow" disgusted me
and im not just gonna beat'em, i'll OWN-HIM like a fight for custody
Blah doesn't make sense
u'r work wouldnt have a sent of green if u was a fan of the packers
its sad, peep told u to flip a line but end up writting it backwards
Ok idea, blahza lines, worded wrong
why u think u'r always dope? when voters peep ya verse with blank-stares?
plus yung probley thinks "tac-tics" is when a clock needs repairs
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dont ever think forgetten or yung is a contender
cuz i'll leave ya hang'in higher higher then erkuls nuts in hes suspender
'higher higher'?ha, no
which one are u dag might as-well put both of ya names in a blender
cuz u so supied u'll probley get forgetten to be u'r verse lender
your so stupid you can't even spell STUPID!
dont ever think u'r any good under any circumstance
just cuz u write under advance dont mean ya verse will enhances BITCH
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Some decent ideas, fell off towards the end.Content was blah, wordplay was so so, no real decent set up to help your punches.& your vocab is horrible, learn how to spell before you go calling someone stupid, supied... geez
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