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Old 08-05-04, 07:40 AM   #13
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Voted For: One-Man-Band

Structure: one man band
flow: one man band
multies: one man band:
punches: both
personal: neither

i vote for you because your stucture was more compact.. your punchlines were okay, but could of been better, your multies were alright, enough to beat out his.. your flow was cool too, so I vote for you for an overall stronger verse..

please return favor with an honest drop in mines, thanx

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=139869