Battle Rules:

8 - 16 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Feeding

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-02-04 at 02:28 AM

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Lunatic Lines has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-01-04 06:29 AM.

One-Man-Band has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-01-04 06:30 AM.

One man band is obviously the wackest of the wack/
hes a loner, cos all of his friends left him alone to rap/

thats why hes so crap, cos theres no one for him to bite from/
ya couldnt succeed in this "impossible mission" if you were "tom"/

I drop shit like fuckin bombs, to me every one of youre hits is weak/
I cant believe you thought you could "step to me" so take a seat/

Im makin the decision to blind all of your visions/
you cant ever beat me, so heres my proposition/

pack up your stuff and leave all the rhyming/
Cos you couldnt get "dope" if you went to a chronic seller to drive in/

I have such sick timing, all of my hits are on the money/
but yours are spread out and shit, ya punches arent funny/

Kill with lead, loading my nine to aim for your head/
ya couldnt "hit hard" even if you were "bumping the thread"/

Im so perfect that you cant handle me, youre getting tossed/
you think youre so good............ but what about those battles you lost?/

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aight... sorry bout that... just checkin if my structure gets messed.. n it did

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uppin.............................................

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Voted For: One-Man-Band

nice battle fella's..but i gotta go with one man he had a betta ryhme scheme and some ill punchlines...luna u had some good ass concepts but its like ya words is barley ryhmein nahmean fix ya ryhme scheme then u'll be good

opener-one
structure- a tie
punchlines-one
creativity-luna
multis-one
personals-luna
finisher-one
enjoyed-one...my explanation is ond a top nuff said he got dis

RETURN DA FAVOR YA'LL LINKS R IN MY SIG

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U NOT FUKKiN WiTH ME PLaiN N SiMP!...

Da "SiCKEST ON DiS SiTE" LiNE HaS BEEN USED aGaiNST ME 50 x'S...U DUDES aBUSED iT

uppin............................................. .......

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Voted For: One-Man-Band

im gonna give this ta omb cause he had a couple of punches that connected"web addresses line" you both had a couple simular lines..omb jus came harder n had really nice flow..ll your punches all missed ta me dawg..srry but i found you came a bit weak in this battle...your closer was alright but jus was'nt enough ta take the win...no hate ..jus my opinion.
hit these up..
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http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=138106
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me vs gran..chi

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left...2 many herbs

Voted For: Lunatic Lines

yeah I like ya shit cuz...punches hit harder...all on was focused on was multis...holla baq at my battle.http://community.rapverse.com/showb...790#post1463790

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you try to spit hot lines but ya computer freezes/
my flows is picture perfect so no need for "cheezes"/

---Ohhh, and ya welcome....4 what?.....The free sample.

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Voted For: One-Man-Band

Structure: one man band
flow: one man band
multies: one man band:
punches: both
personal: neither

i vote for you because your stucture was more compact.. your punchlines were okay, but could of been better, your multies were alright, enough to beat out his.. your flow was cool too, so I vote for you for an overall stronger verse..

please return favor with an honest drop in mines, thanx

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=139869

sorry man... got any other battles that need votes?? cos marvs in my crew....

one

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