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Old 09-22-04, 12:18 PM   #6
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matte...not bad could av been alot better.....structure was kinda off...u had a lil wordplay but i didnt really feel any strong punches....a few multies and thts about it....u got potnetial tho...keep elavatin kid...

exclusive...decent verse...ur structure was better....some ok wordplay again and some multies.....i voted for you cos i felt ur punches hit harder....but u had a few lines just talkin bout ya self....u need to try and throw a punch wit every line......but u just took it for a better verse overall....pz

my vote=exclusive
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