i liked this one. The flow of it was nice, one that captures you and forces you to listen, but on a serious topic. I relate it, in terms of seriousness with flow, to Eminem's Renegade verse. It has the superior flow aspect of a battle verse, but it is not a battle verse. I liked that you seemed to take on a teacher role in this one, great stuff , great stuff. We want more.
drop honest feedback on my first piece.
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