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Old 11-04-04, 08:40 PM   #24
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Voted For: Lil-Youngstah

lil YOUNGSTHA tryin to rap n rhyme but ya well alwasy be a BUSTA so get all the curage ya can MUSTA/

stupid line period...... 2/10

this freestyle battle is PASSION YOU ya practiced it in the mirror n ya own reflection LAUGHED AT YOU/

dont like ur strucutre in this shit but atleast the line was ok and semi original....... ill give u a 6

the next crack i make itll be in ya HEAD lay ya to rest lil boy
go to BED ya might be from CPT but ya got street CRED/

ok......... better then most lines i guess with all the multies 5/10

opps excuse me MISS wasnt that a god enough DISS yea ya can pop CRISS/
but i pop GATS ya rhymes r half ASSED ya a real CLASS ACT yea i just SNAPED BACK/

THAT whole thing made no sense wats over 3/20

ya name really fits u comein from ya a LIL BITCH a LIL SNITCH suck my DICK/
im strong like a muscle car this is ya last RIDE after this ya just got stripped off ya PRIDE like when micheal jordan left the bulls SIDE/

better then the last set but straight wack......... 5/20

belive me yall CANT SEE ME october 31st is cumin up suck my HALLOWEENIE/

wackest line in Rapverse history 0/10

overall 21/80
illuson Let's do this Shit begin & CountDown
i'll Shoot ya, kill ya & bury u 6-feet underground
bunch of filler......... 4/10
Your battle style ain't "Dope", u ain't got no Hope to Win this Fight
My flows like an "illusion", I'm like a "Ghost" u can't see me in ya Sight
better then most of ur thing, and u gotta personal in 6/10
Swing to Ya left, Right u even "Throwin" punches in 2 Hook
But this bitch think he a "Halfway-Crook"
ehhhhh, 3/10
This ain't 8 mile dawg, this da RapVerse Stage-Mic
Though u Ain't go Audience u still gettin "Stage-Fright"
ok lines, nothin special, 4/10
Unable to Spit-ya-flow, you startin 2 "Choke"
I'm "Blazin" ya, Into Black & White Ashes, Smoke....
way better closer then his......... ill give u a 5/10

overall 22/50.......... u won i guess....... lucky u
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